#14 Mr. FRUSTRATED Khanna : Avneil Different Shades of ACP Series.!!

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docritu99

@docritu99

Sparkler

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Posted: 7 years ago

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BookAddict

@BookAddict

Beginner

Posted: 7 years ago

Woohoo🥳

Amazing update Riya!!!😉

Ali is suchi a Dramebaaz over here😆 Recording for the future little Khanna😳

DD & Sunehri Finally happened But I guess Sunehri's story is a bit different over here than the show😳

Neil & his antics He is love😳

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Wingsoflove_2

@Wingsoflove_2

Rocker

Posted: 7 years ago

Ri🤗

Omg,I missed this dose.😒 Yay!! Now iam happy.

Mr.frustrated khanna poor boy sab ke sab uske pyaar ke dushman.

Yaha tak ki uski khudh biwi also.🥺

Yesa chalega toh frustrate hoga na bichara.

Bebe ki order uspe baari padre. Thank god pillar paas koi nahi aayi.☺️😆

That handycam part was awesome. Ali was so cute.

Dd ki shaadi hai.🥳

Suoerb ri awesome one. Continue soon. Missed u.🤗

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Brightglow

@Brightglow

Voyager

Posted: 7 years ago

Hey riya ! This is Avni... I have changed my username 😛 hope u remember me..

This one was as always beautiful,amazing,flawless...! Loved every bit of it... I could imagine all the antics of Neil which he did while trying to gain attention from his wifey... Undoubtedly he's so cute 😊 and the way he finally dragged Avni after so many futile attempts was so good !

Loved the way he perfectly used his charm and his exotic touches and kisses over Avni behind the pillar... When Avni can play the wifey card to manofy him even he can very well play the "Hubby card" ... Haha our girl was definitely lost in him ...

Awaiting the next chapter... Actually can't wait ! Can I already read the next one pls ?

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srinithi

@AgnesFan

Sparkler

Posted: 7 years ago

At least in your story DD disn't go into a celibate mode like in show . Ali's introduction was too cute for words . Was thinking why was he doing video diary for his marriage. It's not wrong but anyone will feel nervous and shy 😆 He is inviting his kids and AvNeil's pillu 😆 This guy is a total dreamer . I was actually thinking he was saying about Avni being pregnant. 😆

Neil . I wanna just pull his cheeks and kiss him . After his numerous attempts to convince his lady don she didn't budge . All his different faces and 100's of mood swings he showed went in vain . My poor ! I expected he will come up saying he will go with Avni and Neela will suggest the same to make him happy .😆

Last part was so cute . And air kiss with your signature statement was icing on the cake! Neil at any time is a goner and hopeless of all cases . Avni would have given in if Bebe didn't break into 😆

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darsh333

@darsh333

Dazzler

Posted: 7 years ago

Riyaaa!!!you are back!😃

This one was a suprise for me!!i never expected sunehri in your story😃especially sunehri and dd's marriage!woah!😃

Ali being given so much space in beginning made me think that he might the main reason behind the frustated neil as according to your title but naah you twisted the story and i loved it😆

Frustrated neil is always to treat😆i just loved him😆

This is exactly like how it happens when you want to talk to somebody for some reason😆

By the way didnt neil have much job in the preparations??😆

The small peck and flying kiss was sooo good!😳

The reader is really happy after reading this and when is the next part of this shade coming??😃im expecting a more intense, spicy and revenge taking neil khanna☺️

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Nidhii

@Nidhii.3007

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 7 years ago

Once again a mind blowing and amazing update.

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Ekta

@HaymurS

Achiever

+ 3

Posted: 7 years ago

Hehe neil bechara...sabka maara🤣

Koi nahi samjhta bechare ke young heart ko...

Jab miyan biwi alag alag rahenge to pillu kaha ss honge

Update soon

Waiting for next part

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Shaiksafia

@Shaiksafia

Dazzler

Posted: 7 years ago

Rita you are back and how 🤗
Frustrated Tillu was such a cutie fell in love with this shade of Mr Khanna he is adorable, DD ki shadi finally ho rahi hai 😛, poor tillu always ready for romance kuch kaam nahi aaya toh socha romance always works , Neil Khanna ka jadu kabhi Fail nahi hota but bebe always interrupts at the Wrong time 🥱

Ali was the star

Anyways absolutely beautiful writing

Thank you much love
Safia

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Kiranrathore

@Kiranrathore

Explorer

Posted: 7 years ago

#10

Awww frustrated neil is so cute ...loved it very much 😊...bechare tillu ko tease kr rhi avni 😉...plz ri hmare cutipie k armaan pure kr dena next shade m 😳...plz update next

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