AvNeil SS : The Perfect Stranger , Epilogue 2 updated (10/5) pg 78 - Page 53

Originally posted by: paayaal

Res...coz m in mush land abhi...❤️

Unres...

Haye! Maar dala Allah, maar dala!! Yeh kya kiya Neil babu...iss key baad to hum kissi kaam key naa rahey...! Somebody is in a shayarana mode today.😳

By God ki kasam if Avni had turned down Neil after he had turned his heart inside out for her I would have literally bopped her on her head & committed her for insanity! Omg...bopped on her head😆.Neil is turning you into one violent person😆

But thankfully I did not need to take such extreme measures coz the gal finally accepted not only her own feelings for Neil but also his feelings for her!! How can she not?When you have Neil Khanna pouring his heart out infront of you ,how can you not reciprocate!!!

And how awesome are Avni's friends, esp Richa...there was no judgement just a bit of anger that she had tried to be mahaan by disregarding her own feelings!! Lub them!! Friends are this way only.Though I dnt wish anyone to be in such a situation ever.I didn't want Richa to be a cliched 3rd angle.

I also liked how Richa reminded Avni that she had already declared her 'stranger' as her 'The One' without even knowing who the guy was..!!!! He he frnds are ever ready to take credits where it is due and saying ''I told you so" any chance dey get😆

Neil bought the hospital to stop Avni from running away! OMG...this guy...!! What can I say except...I ❤️ Him!! Avni u lucky lucky girl!!! U better treat him right or m gonna take him off your hands instantly!!😛 Now Avni has to be careful abt how she treats him😆...girl has got some serious competition in you😆

The part that stole my heart though was where he promises to make no promises & just work towards building their relationship, with her, together! Thank you😊.Dts d only way I saw to convince a commitment. Phobic person to saying Yes to a lifetime of togetherness.

Tapasi...I really really love you for this! & m so glad I pushed you to write coz the result is simply fantabulous!!! I love you too!!! I'm glad you gave me d push because I simply enjoyed this experience.It was fun trying my hands at writing and receiving so much love in return.

So, thank you for including me in your acknowledgement...I'll shamelessly take all the credit because I love this story to bits!!!!! Take it... its all yours.Aww so swt of you to say dt.

Waiting for the epilogue!!!

Originally posted by: AgnesFan

This update was like a triple jumbo double cheese burger😆 What am I speaking 😆 Ye kya tha😆.Is that a food fav? If yes then I love d comparison😳

Neil Khanna !_👏👏 You just mastered his dialogues . My god !_ You were fantabulous girl ! I will read this update in a loop just to sink in the feeling . He just bore his heart out with each word spoken . He totally opened his heart leaving it to Avni for making or breaking it. His proposal was more emotional and magical than romantic to me . This is enough to sweep the ground off feet of any girl . If Avni hadn't said yes it would have been grave mistake of her as she knows both love each other . How can she daresay no when he had cleared all her insecurities by talking out with Richa and his family . Her biggest fear was of breaking her besties heart which he didn't allow to happen . A stitch in time saves nine . He did what was right at the right moment without wasting time and he could see the results . Awww really you would read it in a loop? Thats d sweetest thing I hv heard all day.The dialogues...I just thought and wrote whatever I felt like Neil would say...So happy to know you liked d mushy lines😃.

Baki toh sab tumne bol hi diya...can't add anything to dt.

I knew Richa won't be angry coz she knows Neil is not interested in her and he proved her correct by breaking the engagement . She was upset coz Avni didn't share her new found feelings and decided to give up for Richa . Friends are only for this . Exactly friends are like dis only.Richa always knew she wasn't exactly interested in d relationship and d best part was he was honest wid her.So y would she be angry on him.Yes you would definitely expect ur frnd to be honest wid u.

Pagal insan 😆 He brought the hospital so that she won't leave him . Actually he was saying about some meeting for starting charity hospital . Was his father already of an idea to buy this hospital or was it his choice 😆😆 See I had mentioned in d early chapters that there was a change in management when Avni was in a hurry to go to hospital.So it was preplanned and his father's idea.

Thank you Tapasi for this FF ! It is a great help with ongoing drama in the show . Glad I was of help 😳

Lot of love

Sri 😉🤗

Originally posted by: Aphrodite_NV

Sorry for the late unres, these two days were extremely stressful and frustration-filled ones. Could not even log in IF. No problm dear.No need to be sorry.

I feel so sad, why should such beautiful story come to an end? I want an epilogue and may be many more snippets of their lives, as and when time permits for you. Everything that has a beginning has an end too.I'll try to do wht you asked for.

The chapter was divine, I fall short of words. Finally, Neil got his love, his Avni back. His confession was lit, it was so heart touching and every girl's dream. ( I know I'm too young to dream all of that but sapna toh sapna hota haina doctor sahiba 😉. ) Calm, collected yet profound his emotions were, by god felt the entire scene going like a reel in my brain. For once Avni applied her brains and accepted that she loves him, phew such a long journey isn't it for her. A girl who once never believed in love, haunted with insecurities of having seen a broken marriage, scarred has hopelessly fallen in love with a 'stranger' she encountered in a club many many days ago. The journey wasn't smooth but when was love the course of love ever smooth (blame Shakespeare for such lines). ''Divine"...now this is goin to play in my head in a loop.And yet again you have explained it all too beautifully... deep as one can go.Swthrt whn you can write such beautiful stories abt AvNeil, then y can't you dream a lil dream😉

The one line which touched me was this : 'We may not be perfect ,but we will be imperfect together.' Humans are never perfect, it's just that the presence of a particular person makes them feel perfect for him/her. You made me little emotional with this line. Awww...emotional bana dia...chalo dis is for you🤗.I wanted it to be emotional more dan romantic.And like you said nobody is perfect...you just are perfect in d eyes of a certain someone.

Richa is truly a wonderful character presented by you, time and again I have said this. No questions, no accusations, absolutely nothing except for her trust and friendship with Avni. She was angry, not because her best friend fell in love with her to-be fiance but because that best friend tried to be mahaan and hide her feelings, world needs more girls like her. Real friends are like dt only.They understand you at times when you least expect them to.Friends are just unpredictable at times...dey amaze you at times.

The cute scene between Avni and Neil in the hospital was bliss, our girl confessed, yay. Neil is crazily in love with his Dr. Pareikh, did not accept her four days leave. Wonder what all would he do to prevent her from taking leave, and that's why we need more glimpses into their future.

Enjoyed this story thoroughly, this is going to be my cherished ones. Will wait until you make a comeback with another story which will be as amazing as this, if not more.

Love,

Nivi

P.S. - Don't mention for the banner. Consider as a return gift for keeping us entertained and engaged to your story.

Originally posted by: Shaiksafia

Don't worry hopefully you will find your Neil Khanna just like I did Good Luck for that 😉 👍🏼

Yes I have always felt that we both share a very similar thoughts and reacts the same way to certain situations and I am glad I my review made you smile 😊
Stay Happy Stay blessed

Love

Originally posted by: srain10

Kaan pakad ke sorry for being so late No Sorry needed.What matters is you are here.

"The End" was totally unexpected...The story had to end somewhere na.

It was fabulous update👏 thank you😊

I had smile on face through out this update...neil's proposal was so romantic and mushy mushy... AWW this is so nice to hear.Smiles are d greatest gifts.

So happy avni accepted it and gave chance to neil to become "hum" and she let go her fears and insecurities...She deserves a happy life and this ws d first step towards it.

Avni ke liye hospital purchase kar liye typical Neil Khanna... Ha ha ya typical Neil Khanna... who bought d Mehta mansion😆

Like true life partner true friends are also blessing and avni is blessed with both... Yep true frnds are so rare to find and are a blessing.

Happy avni asked ab ring lene kis ke saat gaye the... Ab kya karein Riya ke liye ring lene Avni ko leke gaya tha na😆

This was such a beautiful journey Tapasi...write more it's a request... Thnk you dear.

Can we get epilogue and snippets of their day today life in OS form if you wish... I'll provide an epilogue bt much later.

This story will be one of my favorite simple romantic and happy... Awww.Thnx a lot dear.I cnt tell you how happy dis makes me.