This re-written version will have some similarities but also have major differences so im hoping you guys will still enjoy it.
Anyway ill stop talking now so you can read.
Part 1-
A young six year old girl ran through her house "mama, mama im hungry"
She stopped at the loud sound and held onto her necklace tightly
"Mama" she whispered, tears filling up her eyes
She stepped forward and gasped at her mothers body on the floor
She ran over to it "mama, wake up, mama"
Ayesha opened her eyes slowly and grasped her daughters hand
"Avni, run, dont let them see your necklace"
Her hand dropped from Avni's and her eyes rolled back
Avni released a shaky sob as she stood up, shutting her mothers eyes she ran
She ran and ran until a young woman came upon her
"Wheres you parents" the woman asked
Avni sobbed "My mama is dead, I dont have a papa"
The woman knelt down on her knees and wrapped her arms around Avni
"My name is Neela, I will take care of you okay"
Avni nodded, she allowed Neela to take her to safety and on that day she never looked back, leaving the small city she previously resided in.
15 Years Later-
Her mother's killer was never found, the case was open and shut and her mother never received the peace she deserved
But Avni never forgot, and she never would.
Avni placed down the picture frame of her and her mother and sighed heavily
She wanted more than anything to allow her mothers soul to rest in peace but she had no idea where to start, she just prayed that there would be someone out there who could help her, someone who could understand
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A young man sat at a desk, signing off yet another case
He felt a hard slap on his back and he looked up
"You never fail to amaze me Neil honestly, every case is done precise and to the point and thats why there's no one else I would ever trust to carry out this case" spoke Gaurav proudly
"What case sir"
He handed a file to Neil and Neil opened it
"Fifteen years ago a woman was killed, shot to the heart, her six year old daughter found her, you know I said I want to solve old cases, well this is one thats played on my mind a lot because I was the leading officer of the case before I started working here"
Neil nodded, his heart filled with sympathy
"I have no idea how hard that must have been, I would love to help"
Gaurav smiled "I was hoping you would say that"
Neil flicked through the file and stopped on a woman's picture
"Who's that"
"That is Avni, she is Ayesha's daughter, the woman who was killed, shes twenty one now, she was given a necklace by her mum, she was told to not let anyone have it, that was the last words her mother said to her, Ayesha's death shook up the small town"
"We will get this killer Sir, I promise you that"
Gaurav patted his shoulder "Shes a looker I know, but remember your job okay, and keep her safe and Neela, her adopted mother, thats your first priority, I have spoken to Neela and you start tomorrow okay"
Neil laughed "Dont you worry Sir, no girl has ever caught my heart, she wont be the one to"
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Neela welcomed Neil in, shaking his hand
"Hi, you must be Neil, I am Neela, its nice to meet you"
Neil shocked her by lowering down and taking her blessings
"Oh, I wasnt expecting that" she laughed
Neil smiled "So, Avni"
"I havent told her about you yet as she slept early, but if you explain to her when you see her she will be fine"
Neil nodded and followed Neela to outside Avni's room
"I just have to do something downstairs but shout if you need me, Avni isnt awake yet"
Avni jumped out of bed, quickly running to the bathroom she quickly cleaned her teeth and washed her face
She looked down at her sky blue pyjamas with yellow ducks on it and smiled, they were the comfiest pyjamas she owned and she loved them very much
She pulled open her bedroom door and saw a man facing away from her
She slowly shut the door again without making a sound
"He must be blocking me from getting out for a reason, if I hit him over the head I can get out" she uttered to herself and grabbed the ornament on her bedside table
Pulling the door open quickly she slammed it on his head and frowned when instead of falling down he turned around
"What the hell" he shouted
"Get away or ill call the police"
Neil rubbed his head "Is this how you welcome all your guests, my god, crazy woman" he hissed in pain
"Guest" she repeated "Neela ma didnt say anything about guests"
"Im your new bodyguard Neil Khanna"
Avni waggled her index finger "You dont fool me Khanna, I dont have a bodyguard coming"
"Yes, you do" said Neela who sat Neil down on Avni's bed
"Im sorry I didnt get the chance to tell you but it just happened so quickly, Neil why is your head bleeding"
Avni's cheeks burnt and she looked away
Neil looked up "I tripped and banged my head aunty"
Neela nodded and began to clean the cut on his head
"You two get acquainted im just making breakfast"
Neela left the two together and Neil smirked, looking her up and down "Nice pyjamas, they go well with your personality"
Avni scowled "Whats that meant to mean"
"Youre quackers"
"Well you shouldnt have just stood outside my door like that and why did you cover for me" she huffed angrily
Neil noted how her eyes lit up when she was angry, her cheeks flushed and she bit into her bottom lip
"Because now you owe me" he stood up, making her step back until her back hit the wall and she muttered an "ouch" under her breath
"Owe you"
"Yes, thats right, but ill tell you soon what you owe me, also, nice pyjamas, theyre really great for a five year old"
Avni glared at him and pushed him away "Well I wasnt expecting company"
Neil smiled "No, I can tell, I dont think youd be good company anyway"
She still seemed so immature, her actions and how she dressed yet she had a certain charm to her and he was sure he would enjoy winding her up
Avni went to grab some clothes from the wardrobe, she huffed, she didnt want to look anymore like a child infront of her judgy bodyguard
She could feel his eyes piercing into her back
"Take a picture it lasts longer" she turned around and her jaw dropped
She covered her eyes quickly "Oh my, you're naked"
Neil chuckled "Not naked, topless, why does it bother you"
"Just get out" Avni growled
"Why, my hotness to much for you to take"
She shoved past him and to the bathroom, stopping she turned back to him "No but its going to put me off my food"
She slammed the door leaving a very shocked Neil
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Neela looked over at Avni and Neil who ate their breakfast, neither had said anything and she just hoped they hadnt fallen out because she expected Neil would be here for a while
Avni went to grab the salt when Neil grabbed it, using it for ages
Avni raised her foot and kicked Neil
"Shit" he groaned
Avni smirked and looked down
"Sorry" he turned to Neela smiling "to much salt"
Neil stretched out his leg and kicked Avni back
"You stupid" she stood up, banging her hands on the table then looked back at Neela who wore a questioning look on her face
Neil bit into his cheek to stop himself from laughing
Avni sat back down and finished her breakfast, she stood up, taking her plate out she stopped by Neil
"Youll pay for that Khanna" she hissed
And carried on walking away to the kitchen
So thats chapter one done! How was it?