AvNeil 4S: Past Connections; Last Part, Pg 12, Updated 9/3 - Page 11

Originally posted by: AgnesFan

Unfair to end on a cliffhanger 😒 What Cliffhanger? Oh you mean no confession? It's because this story was always about how Avni & Neil were connected to Ali in their own way in the past & how they had both unknowingly shaped Ali's today!

My guess was correct about Ali. Yay!!! ⭐️Fate was already cruel to him and he was just adding his misery to feeling guilty and responsible for his parent's death . My heart goes for him ! Yes it does! But he was lucky that he got the will to live well from Avni & then the means & manners from the Khannas because of Neil!

Avni is someone who can give love unconditionally to everyone though she has a rocky life . Even in show she was the strength of Ayesha and played a mother to her at times . The girl always gives in spite of her own miseries and was a bundle of joy . She could make others smile Absolutely! Avni is a giver all the way!❤️

Ali knows everything about both and has talked to their parent's too . Wow ! Ananya and Neil's work is gonna be so easy . A typical big brother 😃 His hands must have inched to smack brains into Neil 😆 Wonder how did he control his urge and played with them for three long years. There is always a fun in making your sibling jealous only when it doesn't go the other way. IKR! & he has been trying to subtly push Neil into confessing with no visible results! But there are times & situations where you can only nudge one in a direction & matters of the heart are a delicate state of affairs as it is...so he couldn't be more forceful!! Maybe next time Neil can just be given papaji's Irish Coffee! What say?😉

Originally posted by: paayaal

Hi,

Thanks so much for reading & appreciating this 4S!😃

Love,

Payal.😃

Originally posted by: drbeth

@ Zara : v think alike😃.So many similarities!!!!

Originally posted by: Zara_Imam

Hey Payal Hiii!

I'm in awe of this update Awww...that's so sweet of you to say that!😳

So Ali was their past connection though both are unaware of it. Ali's past was really heartbreaking...He wanted to end his life. Neil and Ananya truly have shaped Ali's life Yes they have!😃

Okay let me be honest, this was totally unexpected for me...I mean I guessed that the orphan cannot be Neil but I couldn't guess that it was Ali though curly hair made sense😆 Doesn't it? I so didn't try to hide that! Except ofc I didn't name the kid!😉

Like Tapasi said I'm glad that you wrote this from a third person's perspective, it did really give a better insight Thank you!😃 This was the actual part of the story. The ones preceeding it were like a prelude to it!

Uff Neil and Ananya are literally tubelights😆 they couldn't see what the world could see for 3 long years! Yes they are & fused ones at that! 😆😆

O wow! Ali is really fast...He talked about them to their parents so that the baraatis could be readyAt least some one is fast in this triad! 😆

Avni was Ali's elder brother till he became Neil's elder bro... aww I loved this line. Thank you!😃 Avni is always selfless so she would have definitely proved to be a strong elder bro for Ali❤️ Yes she is...a lovely selfless person inside and out! Though I'd say so are Neil's parents...who took in a boy their son had known during a summer camp!

Honestly I wanted a confession but I'm glad you wrote this as a 4S. I had a great time reading it and of course guessing your unexpected plots which I miserably failed at😆 I'm glad you enjoyed it coz I enjoyed writing it too & the whole 'guess who?' was purely unintentional!!😉

Love you Payal🤗

Originally posted by: Zara_Imam

Aww that's so sweet of you Tapasi🤗

So what do you say shall we begin from where we left yesterday? 😉

Originally posted by: neeraja91

Beautiful. Very well written FF. Nicely connected them all together!

Originally posted by: Zara_Imam

Aww that's so sweet of you Tapasi🤗

So what do you say shall we begin from where we left yesterday? 😉