Originally posted by: preya_radev
I know I know im late again and im sorry for that sanju baby
Also congrats for the second thread u came a long way in this ff and im to be part of it as a reader.
Since u r on thread 2 I will comment for part 30-36 on this thread although it was updated in thread 1.
So sorry haan I know u will have to download to read my comments like always but u know I love u so ill try to make it short for each part but just know that I loved all the parts
#30 loved this part loved how they talk on the phone...love how they share a smile when they meet on the sets...loved how when he said "I'll get ready and be back to which she says "umm and loved how at the time neils says okay b ut didn't break his focus from her even for a sec and how avni had to call his name to bring him back to reality when he was thinking as to y her cheeks were swollen... hayee loved how when they were take a group pic both were pushed to the center and squeezed in a small space...loved how their hearts were beating fast realizing how close they were... haha too much pushing going on making avneil nervous ...loved how avni was surprised that neil knew she didn't seem fine since morning and how she lied saying she is ok...hayee was so happy when neil asked avni if she will come for a movie since all r going and how avni said yes straight away...hayee loved how they had sat next to each other and how avni fell asleep on neils shoulder followed by neil...loved how he would be at her balcony at nights and how they would have coffee while she would l0ok at the view he would be looking at her...love his "lock the door line...loved how avni noticed there was some progress with her father as even though he was not speaking to her she knew he was reading her messages and loved how she had shared the news with neil first...hayee those segments actually bought back memories loved the valentines and teddy segment...liked how some were noticing avenil bond like Fatima ji was shocked...loved how dolly decided to ask abhi and even though she didn't know what avneil were talking about where avni was laughing while neil wiped a tear made dolly smile...loved how even when the song changed to a soft one they still remained there still dancing
#31 I actually loved the way u write the segments portions sanju baby especially the teeshirt one made me laughing reminding me how aditi gave her gift by accident to zain...and I just love their ohhh hooo...loved how when avni saw neil leaving the set she found it so different and thought how the brightness has gone and here he calls her bright face...ahh finally avni saw so many messages from saba...loved how avni smiled seen neil pic with his parents and Fatima and liked it haha when that fan tagged avni where it said he gets his first like from her ... it actually reminded me how I saw everyone going crazy on insta and loved the way how she breathed a sigh of relief when Fatima posted a pic with zain and his parents and was happy that now it would look ok when she liked that pic too...loved how neil gave avni a team jersey and asked if she would come and to which she agreed to...hehe loved how avni kind of got jealous and was like lets see who those girls r who posed with him and kissed his cheeks ... hayee loved how neil kept checking his watch every 5 mins...loved how when he thought there r less chances of her to turn up he saw her at the entrance...haha I cracked up when all the girls were looking at them in a jealous way...loved how shweta was happy to see avni along with vidyut and loved how he said "hey beautiful what a pleasant surprise... I had a big smile when u were writing how neil amazed everyone with his hat trick sixes... Loved how while the whole team were cheering avni and shweta were on the edge of her seats while shweta didn't want to lost the match and avni didn't want him to lose anything and yay the team won.,,loved how when shweta hugs neil he looks at avni and when he was about to approach avni a girl comes there but he quickly moves away after and goes to avni...loves how he gives her a friendly hug and she hugs him back...loved how when someone comes to talk to neil avni notices neil hand shivering and holds it in a firm grip and when he turns towards her giving a thank u look and the continued talking to that person...
#32 loved how when the person leaved avni asked if he ok to which he said yes and was trying to find the right work when avni said nervous and he nods...loved how when she moved her hands away he missed the warmth...loved how he looks at her without saying anything sand she looked away and in that few secs of eye lock she felt as if he could read her feelings when shwetas voice awkward situation...omg omg I actually didn't imagine this to happen at all like how the gsng decided to hang out and avni and Ayesha were sitting while the rest moved to the dance floor and Ayesha excused herself while avni was going through her phone...neil saw her and smiled and muc away from the crazy bunch and walked towards her and asked her to join to which avni denied to which they were having a decent convo and then unknowingly he hands r around her shoulder telling her try pushing the hose towards her while she denies and he continued to do tell herand was about to push it to her lips while avni tried to pull back but neil was much stronger and then neil; hands were on his cheeks and he turned to look back at her to see her eyes welled uop while he dragged the pipe in anger and the breaking sound made everyone look in avni direction and knew something happened between avneil... I was shocked when avni left and then neil was also angry while he pushes dd away who comes to him while dolly tried to stop him but he ignored it and Ayesha who came back had seen avni rushing out... dolly knew this wasn't a food thing as only avhi dolly and riya knew how neil is when he is angry and yes now I know y u included the ice bucket scene and the two dialogue I hate two things someone forcing me to do something someone paying my neil
#33 as usual I loved it everything happened so soon that avni slapped neil and realised what she did and also could see how neil was feeling and knew he was angry due to his expressions...actually loved how avneil were recalling what happened ... as I knew it they didn't speak to each other on the sets and it actually continued and loved how avni realised why she cried that night as somewhere she doesn't want to lose neil but is not ready to accept it...wow a week passed and still no talk between them...omg neils dad is in hospital... What I loved the most that when avni got that news she went to see neil room straight away...loved how neil shared with avni that he is scared to lose his father and loved how avni tried to make him feel better by soothing words while running her hands through his hair and loved how during that time his wraps his arms around her waist and cries...hehe loved how dd was surprised to see avni in neils room and also loved how avni had putting the required items in neil bag...
#34 loved how when avni reached home she was thinking about her dad and thought what if it was her dad in that condition liked how when she called the third time and finally her dad answered the phone... I actually had a smile when avni was speaking to her dad and also happy that her dad is not angry with her anymore...loved how later on she was thinking about neil and thought of calling him but decided against it ... Phew im happy that neil dad is ok loved how both the brothers consoled their mothers...loved how neil took inu from ishika who was sleeping and went out to take a fresh air...yay im so happy when neil closed his eyes I loved how he recalled avni words "he'll be fine neil and with that his eyes shot open realising that avni came to meet him despite whatever happened between them...liked how neil knew he had behaved wrong during that time...loved how he thought of calling avni to let her know that his dad is ok but decided against it and call dd who got the hint and dd texted avni to let her know...loved how avni was happy that neils dad is ok but wondered y didn't neil call and also loved how she realised at that time they were not on talking terms and was thinking as to y she reacted that way rushing to neil room... I just love ishika despite neil didn't say anything to her the advice she gave him was bang on
#35 loved how neil was back from delhi and made a mind to say sorry to avni...also liked how he knew avni had dumped all the right things he needed in his bag...loved how he was looking for her when he had reached to the sets...haha kk makes me laugh...loved how neil noticed avni eyes twinkled seen him but kk had to disturb that moment...awww I was just happy to see avneil trying to talk to each other especially I love it when both don't know what to say they copy each other ...finally neil said sorry but they couldn't speak properly as others were looking at them and happy how he decided to drop her home...I was able to imagine neil leaning against his car door and loved how she smiled unknowingly...loved how neil told her he was really sorry and how he realised his mistake long back...loved how they were trying to sort it out although it was not sorted out properly and neil had noticed that... haha loved how avni toldneil to drop her home as its 1 and neil was like its only 1 to which avni smirked as usually they would be having their late night convos...liked how avni told him about her father speaking to her...aww loved how neil noticed avni didn't say good night to him and didn't even turn around and whispered good night before leaving but damn he missed avni turning around at that time smiling... loved how when he was about to sleep he got a notification to see it was avni message saying good night and he smiled replying back
#36 loved how too many things were running in neil head thinking what if the show ended then would it mean it's the end of their journey,,, what if they don't remain in touch...oopps avni still had what neil said to her about the drink thing yesterday...liked how avni said no to neil when he offered to drop her but neil tried to convince her but she agreed and thought she could ask him about why he said about the drinking thing...so finally avni asked him as I was reading along I knew it was going to be another argument...omg I was actually shocked with avni outburst and loved neil reaction that time...u nailed it so well sanju baby...when neil was like "avni that wasn't me it was a mistake I promise to never to that with his voice breaking my heart went out to him...loved how avni looked at neil and could see him shaking making her anger vanish...hehe avni was ok no but neil still wanted to make sure with it and hear it from her... finally they let it all out..
#37 awww I loved your nor meets avneil on insta that was a cute edit...now coming to the update happy things were getting better between avneil... loved how they were shooting with each other again and hum celebrated 400 epi... hayeee I just loved how neil show no conscious feelings while looking at avni these days and his would stare at her for little longer,,, loved how he was observing her while they were playing the thumbs game...loved how at night he was thinking about her and thought he would never get tired of seen her...loved how he texted her asking if she slept to which she said no and he replied back saying he is coming and avni texted back saying terrace...loved how she was already at the terrace and was startled when she heard him speak...haha avni was looking for neil car but neil knew she would be watching from upstairs so came from the back gate smart boy I must say.,,,hehe I just love it when he winks at her...actually loved avneil convo had a big smile on my face... haha loved how neil teased avni with her height when he bent down towards her height and was like " yaha se toh nahin dhikega to which avni defends herself saying she is not short...loved how neil told avni to remove her shoes and step on his feet and hold the top railing but she still couldn't see and loved how neil lifted her up holding her waist...haha neil is such a nautanki ...loved how when she was about to get up how he told her to sit for sometime while folding his hands under his head...liked how when avni looked up at the sky neil was staring at her while avni was aware of that...i actually loved the game they played especially the question where they asked about who do they see along with them after 5 years and loved the teasing answers they would give and while playing the questioning game loved how neil kept tucking avni hair behind her ears while she allowed him to do that... I loved how neil asked avni if she believes in love and glad avni told him about y she doesn't believe in love due to what happened with her bua...wow 3;30am...loved how at 5am in the morning he made coffee for both of them and when she goes to take a shower he goes down to get a spare teeshirt...hehe loved how avni asked if he always keeps spare to which he nods and when she asked y loved how he hid his smile and said "bas aise hi adat hai
#38 glad how since they were early they decided to take a power nap...haha loved neil teasing mode during the segments...haha loved avneil teasing each other during the segments especially with the scissors bit...avneil were confused and hope everything is fine the director walked in with the rest of the crew...hehe loved how avneil looked at each other when the producer said hum 1 year older...and how they were thinking about time going so quick.,... no I was shocked when they announced hum is going to pulled off loved how avneil look at each other during that time...that actually made a shiver run in spine just thinking about hum ending as I don't know how I actually would react if nk went off air and hope that doesn't happen...loved how neil holds avni hand in a firm grip trying to assure her while with her other hand she holds his wrist..loved how all were trying to cheer all up... aww loved dd he got avneil a girl and showed the biggest box... haha loved how avneil were telling one another to open it not knowing what could be inside it..wow sanju baby I was actually able to imagine that photo frame loved dd for this gift...liked how u described about all the pics...loved how u mentioned about the last pic where both was sitting close to each other with neil hands around her shoulder while her hand resting on his thigh looking in the dame direction commenting on ppl dancing...loved how neil traced that pic thinking and avni smiled and placed her hand on his which was on the pic... haha loved dd when he said "wow I thought u guys would ask me now about the single gift thing but seems like u aren't bothered about it...haha loved dd message to neil when shweta asked avneil what gift they had got...so finally it was two weeks and the last day of shoot...I loved how u mentioned about the fans trying their best to save the show...loved avneil interview for the fans ... loved how neil was going to drop avni home...loved how they took a selfie...haha loved how avni was surprised that the check shirt neil was wearing was actually his loved their "sharif wala teasing convo...glad they had fun with the rest and reached back to avni place at 2am...loved how when avni was opening the gift while neil was looking at her while avni was looking at the keychains which Had their pics and she does something which made neil heart skip a beat while she continues to pout and neil calls out to her while she looked at him to continue pouting and omg did I read that right? He pecked her lips?
#39 I loved it sanju baby I just loved everything about the moment avneil shared like the way u described the kiss how neil started at avni caressing the mole and moving in to kiss her again I wont go in much details as I just loved that whole portion ... If it was in my hand I would have copied the whole part of avneil romantic session but I know u will know and this is my fav chap...loved how their legs were intertwined... I knew avni will think about what happened with diksha and she is scared what if it happens with her and neil... somewhere neil tried to tell her not everyone is the same and all and put his point across but couldn't when avni was taking in neil face just like him even I knew what she was going to say and do and while reading that half portion bought tears in my eyes and I mean it... It was heartbreaking to see avni push neii out telling him to go away while neil was trying to stop her but no luck...neil banged the door for a while but after avni heard it stop and knew he went... I actually want to applaud u for this chap sanju baby like I know I haven't mentioned everything but like I said if I had the chance I would have copied the whole chap because all the scenes were my fav
#40 awesome update sanju baby felt so sorry for avni and neil... to forget neil avni decided to go back home for sometime... loved how the previous night incident kept coming back in her head...phew I was glad neil called but felt so sad when he spoke in a broken voice...when avni said "tomorrow you will meet someone else shoot with them... maybe you will forget me...maybe ill forget u lets not make this more complicated and loved how neil hand anger in his voice while he was shocked when he said "you think I will feel the same for the every person I shoot with?...loved how neil knew avni was crying and told her to stop lying...neil was trying to make avni understand but she couldn't as she feared falling out of love from neil or he falling out of love with her...damn avni had already gone when neil reached to her house...was really feeling bad for avneil... Happy to see neil going to avni house everyday to see if she is back but also felt sorry for seem him in that condition...liked how neil decided to go to delhi to get a break from all the things...loved how that despite how he was trying to enjoy after coming back to Mumbai he felt something different and missed avni ...loved how neil was going to perfrom in sitara channel awards and also got nominated...loved how u described how neils life was every week it was like I could actually imagine it...loved how he got the flashback of the game they played that actually bought a smile on my face...yay happy that neil finally got his own house...yay happy that neil got two awards one for best pati and the other for best actor popular with shivay... And the speech neil gave was like the best especially when he said avni name ... loved how when he got of the stage abhi rushed to him say u know what u did right to which neil replied I guess I know n im happy...loved how when neil looked at the hum team he saw everyone was happy where dd gave thumbs up...fatima was shocked...dolly was jumping in joy...yes finally neil is going to avni house and hoped she was back./
#41 loved this part loved the way u described how avni was feeling all this while...loved that nor came over to see avni loved how avni told noor exactly what happened...loved how she also had shared her confusion with saba as she knows saba would give the best advice...felt sad when avni had broken down in front of noor...loved how avni had saba and noor to share things with... I just cant wait for avni reaction when she gets to know saba is ishika... I just loved noor she knew if avni is in Bikaner then avneil wont meet anytime soom and loved how she tried to convince diksha to send avni back to Mumbai
#42 ughhh I loved the this part sanju baby it was the best confession ...loved how neil was thinking about their first meeting and all... loved how when he got out the car he removes his coar and puts it on his left forearm could actually imagine him doing that ...loved how neil saw the dim light in her house and was happy and im so happy that avni had left the door ajar...loved avni reaction when she turned around and saw neil...loved how he quickly walked over to avni and pulls her close resting her head on his chest...loved how the first thing he said was "what have u don't to yourself avni...loved how neil ignored avni question as to what he is doing over here and instead he asked another question "what happened to u...ok I loved everything and I mean everything about the confession... The walls avni had built finally broke... im happy neil finally convinced her... the best part when he said I love u avni...loved how when avni asked what if we fall out of love and the answer he gave her... I loved it when he whispered in her ears saying I love u avni while rocking her back and forth in his arms... and omg I had a naughty smile when neil said "we will even make s lot of pink plus white equal to red sessions also I will teach u many such theories and learn from u as well which made avni blush...glad that after two month they were finally happy been with each other...loved how they cuddled on the sofa and also loved how she traced his abs which were visible through his shirt... glad how he told her about the awards and how she placed a kiss on his cheeks...hayee neil knows how to blush loved how he was blushing while saying "thank u well something happened after that when I received the awards while pulling her closer and when avni asked what he told her she will know herself and here comes back his winking...loved how when thet were going down and avni asked neil "aise kya dhek rahe ho to which neil replies " just thinking tumne ye pink top pehna maine white so we can try the pink plus white equals to red theory which made avni blush and hit him across his arms...loved how neil was seen how avni was happy seen the awards and then how he told her about the house and omg did he just ask her to move in.,..ahhh im going to faint
#43 damn sanju baby I loved this part I actually don't know where to start of because I just loved every single thing... loved how it took a week for neil to convince avni to move in...loved how they had shifted few things from her house to the new one...liked how avni was shocked when she got to know how much the house was for and how neil told he will manage...loved how she crawls up to him and hugs him... haha when avni says she will pays all the bills and neil didn't agree and both continued to argue about that until they fell asleep...loved how the next morning avni decided to check the house again and when she opened the room where the door connecting the balcony with the hall loved how her heart made go awww seen the way neil slept... loved how when she was caressing his hair and how he shifts his head in her lap still sleeping while avni remembers the day after the confession...loved how avni was seen all the post she was tagged in...loved how she felt neil turn in her lap and said morning while neil said best morning and hides his face in her lap...loved how only abhi saba and noor knew about them moving in to his house...loved how they were getting to know more about each other...haha neil khaana believes in ghost that made me laugh but I felt so happy when neil got scared when the power cut happened and how avni had to take him to the balcony and diverted his mind and both fell asleep.;...liked how most of the time they would usually sleep on the sofa or the floor cuddled close to each other...awww loved how neil tried to calm avni down when she was crying when the song bhare naina played and how he took her in lap hugging her and rocked them back and forth while whispering something now and then until she fell asleep...loved how when avni returned from an ad shoot she saw the frame that dd had gifted them on the wall along with the other pics that were from fan...loved how avni would look at him whenever he prays making her fall in love with him even more...haha poor dolly she had no clue about avneil living together but was pissed as she got to know neil changed hyms when he was the one to ask her to leave her gym to join his...loved how she knew the reason behind it... happy how avneil did work out in the same gym...hehe poor avneil where neil was aroused most of the time while avni felt like running her hands on his body...hayee loved how avni would sometimes see neil half wet only in his towel... or how he would help her with the back zip and neil was having his moment while caressing her back but abhi called the wrong time... haha loved how u said baba abhi... omg neil cracked me up when he curses abhi that he would stay single for life if he will call him again at such timings...loved how when neil would speak to his mother he would sometimes keep it on loudspeaker so she could listen to...loved how sometimes avni would miss neil when he would be busy with ads or events...awww loved how neil decided to teach avni driving...haha loved how neil would purposely keep the horlicks bottle on the top shelf so that avni could call him...haha when avni was In weith two mugs with coffee for him and horlicks for her loved how he did miss the sly smile on her face... Haha loved how neil peeps in the kitchen the next day to se her standing on the stool to grab a bottle of horlicks...omg the jealousy thing made me laugh loved how avni started hating the actress just because neil liked that video which was vm and neil teased her about it...haha and now it was neil turn to get jealous when avni was just going on about ranveer singh I cracked up when neil loses it and turns of the tv before storming off to his room when avni hands were under her chin with a huge smile on her face and how lips part in the middle of the song and avni got a chance to counter neil on that ...haha both needed cold showers and they also knew the reason behind to it but just smiled it out...loved how at midnight neil heard the shower from her room and thought if it was the same thing like him.,.. loved how he laters walks to her room when he head the shower turn of and hayee loved how in the dim light avni could see neil leaning against the soor looking at her intently...uff this scene was just ufff I cant describe it loved it loved the dialogues between them like when neil says " who was troubling u at this time? To which avni says u and loved how neil was likegd coz u trouble me too " and then continued "I can help u with that if u want me to to which avni says goodnight and he knew she was blushing while he smirked and said night
Ufff sanju just loved the last two chap of avneil the best baby...do update soon lots of love from your shona
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