AvNeil RS : FALL IN LOVE, TRY thread2 (NOW COMPLETE)

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Sanvee_R

@Sanvee0812

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Posted: 7 years ago

#261

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Chocolatebond

@Chocolatebond

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Posted: 7 years ago

#262

Wow Sanju thanks for the double update I'm confused did she actually drink or she was acting to be drunk because of her insecurities ?it was so heartwarming to see how much he cares for her despite his anger and although his own principles of life were different from her's and he respects her space and lifestyle it was so so beautiful that nothing can change or reduce his love for her true love always outshines the flaws one holds this chapter indeed showed it yet another beautiful update waiting for more update soon

Much love to you

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Alostgirl

@Alostgirl

Inactive

Posted: 7 years ago

#263

Was she actually drunk or was she acting totally confused.

Loved the update.

Waiting for next one

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Nidhii

@Nidhii.3007

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Posted: 7 years ago

#264

Yaay

U surprised me sanju

First of all two updates and then tumne in dono ko new daily soap me sath me cast kar diya . Thank u meri baat maan ne ke liye.

I am so very much happy

Ab to tum is story ko end nahi karogi na as both of them are in the same show and segments to abhi or bhi milte rahenge and u will get the much needed masala to write the chappy.

Or update ke bare me kya kahu kuch samajh nahi aa raha hai . This Neil is so much like the Neil in show . He loves her so much even though she has flaws. This is the character which pulls me towards the show and u included Neil's this quality . That is why it is pulling me like a magnet. 😳

Is she drunk for real or she is acting to test Neil's love for her? This avni and her insecurities are the real enemy of their pure relationship😲. Very emotional one😭 and loved the care of Neil . There she was thinking that one day Neil will hate her and here he was getting all worked up for her

Loved both the chapters.

And a lot of love and hugs for u to give me this beautiful update.🤗

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Shaiksafia

@Shaiksafia

Dazzler

Posted: 7 years ago

#265

Wow sanju thanks for the double update it's wonderful 👏 , so many things stuck me today 1st how mature neil behaved with her in that drunk state he was angry but at that time it was important to take care of her and let her know that he loves her inspite of all her flows I hope avni comes out of this insecurities and finally see how much he loves her and I also hope the she respect his choices and principles I think she was just acting drunk just to get to know how he would behave which is quite childish but I guess in her part she needed that assurance from him.

Neil is a BF goal right now managing making her feel special even when he has his friends around and understanding her feelings Neil is complete package 😉

Amazing updated can't wait to read more update soon

Much love
Safia

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gvrrrr

@gvrrrr

Beginner

Posted: 7 years ago

#266

Thank you for double update, Very nice.

Is that like testing boundaries of love ??? just thinking out loud.

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nlisa

@nlisa

Navigator

Posted: 7 years ago

#267

In my last review, I said Neil was gonna be so mad at her being drunk. But, I'm so glad he ( and you) proved me wrong. I love that he took it in stride.

He was mad at the right thing- her taking a cab alone. It's not safe. I love how he reassured her that he loves her regardless. I appreciate that his love for her is unconditional. As it should be.

My favourite part definitely was the way she crawled into his bed and sought comfort in his presence, and that he didn't turn her away but rather welcomed her display of weakness and provided his strength there as she needed it.

Beautiful chapter, Sanju.

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Wingsoflove_2

@Wingsoflove_2

Rocker

Posted: 7 years ago

#268

Oh my god,its so emotional and at the same time its so beautiful.

Awesome update sanju.I really loved it.

But iam slightly confused. Is he reallly drunk? Or she is acting to know about neil thought?

Anyways,hope she come out and got rid of her insecurities soon. He love her very much.

He trying his best to comfort her. Iam not blaming avni she's right in her place. But neither neil at fault.

Hope they got rid this soon.

Blue munda kitne understanding hai. Uff,bilkul neil khanna ke tara.

I loved how he was mad only for cab thing. I thought he will be little upset. But he didn't upset on her drinking habit and he respect her choice too.

But he was only mad on her taking cab alone.😳

Its so beautiful sanju. I like this chapter very much. Its a one of ur best.

I loved last bit very much. How she seek comfort him and he comfort her.

Super sanju beautiful update.

I cant wait to know is she really drunk or not?

Pls continue soon. He's bf goals.

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srinithi

@AgnesFan

Sparkler

Posted: 7 years ago

#269

Wow a double update . Wah so much surprises on AvNeil 1 year . I too expected him to be mad but he proved me wrong. His love for her is unconditional and he has accepted her with her flaws . He was angry on her for coming alone in taxi that too in intoxicated state not because she was drunk . Avni's biggest weakness and enemy will be her insecurities. Poor girl she was so disturbed from that incident that she felt he will hate her and possibly leave her too . I loved the last bit where she cuddled up and he did not push her away but let her cry and confessed he loved her without any conditions