AvNeil RS : FALL IN LOVE, TRY thread2 (NOW COMPLETE) - Page 18

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Posted: 7 years ago
This was best and beautiful update.
Oh god,it's so cute Sanju.😛
Wat an amazing chapter. 👏
I already read two times.
I have to say,this chapter is my most favourite one in this FF.
Mere Nazar ke saamne horaha tha SaB kuch. I imagined adiza in this update.
His confession was Hella cute. I can feel sincerity in his confession. He really love her very much.😳
She's so lucky man. Iam very happy for her. Iam glad she got over her insecurities.👍🏼
How she got over that? I think his one glimpse help her to got over that doubts.😃
I really loved his confession. He voiceout everything wat he feels. It was one of the best confession I have ever read.
I always love simple confession. Bcoz it's reality. I can see that in this chapter. Uff iam so happy for them.😳 And u add real offscreen part in it. I died there.
I really loved his confession and I had tears in my eyes.😭
I want her confession also. Hope she also voice out wat she's feeling about him.
He asked her to move in with him.😲
I don't know wat she gonna do now.
Awesome chapter.👏
Tum end kyu karogi iss FF Ko.
Pls yesa math karo pls Sanju.😭
Bohath saare track Lao but katam math karo. Pls.
Continue soon.
Edited by rilsaf - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
Finally confession and Huggie for giving it🤗 this is such a beautiful confession I have come across for adiza I'm just in love with the way he was assuring her and making her understand that his commitment is for a lifetime with her, each and every promise he made to her was dayum sooo sooo cute and honestly my heart was racing fast when he went to her house the way you explained gave me goosebumps I was actually virtually imagining the whole scenario words fall short to explain how much I'm loving this chapter infact every chapter finally I'm so happy that he succeeded in breaking all her insecurities and she gave in to her feelings for real once I want a ilu confession from Avni too and I'm so so eager to see her reaction about his sorry their house will she move in with him? how will she react when she sees the house ?so excited for the next update already pumped up so please update soon and please Sanju I know you're coming up with new track but trust me this was so awesome too your story has still so much potential kindly continue writing more and more like this no matter how many threads it takes 😆

Special mention for giving some special memories:pink + white theory ,scissor story and then leap ,taunting ,she completing his sentence I just loved how you incorporated all this real life memories to your stories it just adds up the Beauty of each chapter to another level literally like "sone pe suhaga" is the perfect word I could use

Special thanks for updating chapters regularly and back to back Varna I will die with curiosity and then you have to face the consequences😆

Please.see:btw I have a doubt why did avni didn't bag any award ya it would have been nice if she did

Much love to you
🤗
Edited by Afsana103 - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
It's too cute yaar. I'm just loving this story 👏👏. Pink plus red theory. Adu will surely beat him. Meri bubbly aduu patli ho gayi. But she will look more beautiful. I hope so. I'm too excited for upcoming updates.
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Posted: 7 years ago
Maaahhnn m just hooked to this story so badly.. .Dint want this to end... Hey just keep continuing if possible...with some new track..
Edited by InderAnoop - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
Superb
Loved it
thnx for pm
update soon
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Posted: 7 years ago
Awesome update Sanju. Thanks for the update. Nice
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Posted: 7 years ago
Honestly by far the best adiza/avneil FF I've read. You're one hell of a writer. Only...y didn't she get an award?(sorry) Amazing job
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Posted: 7 years ago
What a beautiful confession
Neil repeated all those hum moments and he told her who won the best pati and best actor she gave him a beautiful peck. She should have given him on lips ☺️😆 and dear do not end this story soon plss kuch toh teasing honi chahiye frnds and fans ki taraf se 😆 also end after their honeymoon if you want not after their marriage pls pls pls😆
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Posted: 7 years ago


FD dream comes true

👏👏
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Posted: 7 years ago
This is the star of all updates you gave . I was dying of anxiety thinking Avni's reaction . Thank God all her doubts vanished and she too accepted his proposal . I am waiting for the day she proposes him . Thank you for giving such a beautiful update . It left me in tears with every dialogue of Neil where he assured her he can never fall for anyone so like he had fallen for her and promised he will taunt her , tease her , allow her to complete his line , mimic her , bring her scissors to cut the tape , enjoy more pink + white moments . These made his confession so realistic and beautiful . Dil choo liya yaar ! 😭 With each dialogue I found myself falling for him . How can Avni deny ! My heart went to him at the moment he saw her and asked what have you done to yourself .😭 Back to back emotional updates . Simple , heartfelt and beautiful confession . I didn't expect him to climax with her .☺️ It was shocker to me as to how Avni allwed him though she longed for him . Even the last scene where she holds his awards was so emotional .
Not fair ! Rula rahe ho yar 😭 FD ki dream aise to poore hue

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