AvNeil TS : Renewal of vows : last and final part updated pg 8 - Page 4

Originally posted by: docritu99

Hey buddy.!hello😊

First of all sorry for being so late.! No problm.I knw u were busy😳

Loved the whole piece.! Thnk u😊
It was so soothing to read. I had a permanent smile plastered on my face while reading it.!Aww.So swt of u to say dt.

Neela-Avni and Neil-Neela bond are so precious. And u have depicted them so beautifully.! Thnk u again.Glad to knw I ws able to do justice.

Overall, Love was in the air and i could feel it, just like in the show.!

Plz do continue it.!
Would love to read it further.!

Originally posted by: drbeth

Thnk u so much Riya😊

Its my first attempt.Gives me immense pleasure dt u liked it.

Really.? It doesnt feel like to be ur first attempt.!

If i wil sahre with u my First Piece na, u will die laughing.! It was so bad, i cant even tell u 😆

Do continue this one and ur writing too.!
Would love to read from u more.!

Originally posted by: docritu99

Really.? It doesnt feel like to be ur first attempt.!

If i wil sahre with u my First Piece na, u will die laughing.! It was so bad, i cant even tell u 😆

Do continue this one and ur writing too.!
Would love to read from u more.!

Originally posted by: drbeth

Yep first tym. Apart frm some forced stories for school exam papers... Which were compulsory btw... I hv nevr attempted writing stories😆

PM me ur first piece pls😃...Nw I'm eager to read it.

No i am not doing this.!
It was so horrible.!

Originally posted by: docritu99

No i am not doing this.!
It was so horrible.!

Superb loving it naughty and bechain tillu 😳 and blushing avni 😳 my favorite

Beautiful! thank you for this...it was a treat!

it was amazing...i like it...no...no...i loved it...it was fantastic...no word to describe...truely amazing...very different, cute, and beautiful...will be waiting...do update soon😉

Originally posted by: adventure_gurl

awesome job so far