AvNeil TS : Renewal of vows : last and final part updated pg 8 - Page 3

Originally posted by: docritu99

So glad to see u writing something.!

Will read it later before going to sleep.!
Till then, Reserved.! 😉

[QUOTE=drbeth] [/QUOTES]

I enjoyed it throughout from where Avni freaks at the thoughts of staying away from Neil till his surprise .

Originally posted by: AgnesFan

I enjoyed it throughout from where Avni freaks at the thoughts of staying away from Neil till his surprise .

Neela catching Neil was a great fun .

Best part was that light effects he set where with each step of her one light turns on . Also the power point he made . Kaash aise pal show mei bhi aa jate

This is beautiful gives me so much happiness 👏 I loved everything about it everything we would love to see in the show anyway you made me miss Neela naa so much more 😭

Please continue to write

Originally posted by: Shaiksafia

This is beautiful gives me so much happiness 👏 I loved everything about it everything we would love to see in the show anyway you made me miss Neela naa so much more 😭

Please continue to write

Tapasi!you do have a writer in you😊

Originally posted by: darsh333

Tapasi!you do have a writer in you😊 Ya ryt😆.kuch bhi

This was good😊

Something which we many of us wanted to see..the remarriage track..haa..🥱

I wanted more of avneil scenes😆..i hope it is coming up in the next update😊

Will be waiting for the next update! Update was below it😆

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Im extremely sorry for not scrolling down!!putting it chptr wise was difficult and I hv trouble understanding forum techniques so I posted it the easiest way possible.

Just saw that you had updated the next parts too🥱

The haldi ..the mehendi..all these brought smile on my face😊Dts the intention😃

You have indeed written a lot of avneil scenes😃..especially the pull and him rubbing against her cheeks..then the suprise..😊

The updates are beautiful😊

Update the next part soon😊

Originally posted by: drbeth

Thnx fr finally reading it.

Makes me so happy dt U liked it.

Hey buddy.!

First of all sorry for being so late.!

Loved the whole piece.!
It was so soothing to read. I had a permanent smile plastered on my face while reading it.!

Neela-Avni and Neil-Neela bond are so precious. And u have depicted them so beautifully.!

Overall, Love was in the air and i could feel it, just like in the show.!

Plz do continue it.!
Would love to read it further.!