My Lover, My Cheater, My Arranged Marriage In Drogheda (P16 PG23) Comp - Page 8

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Posted: 7 years ago
#71
Beautiful .Neel is on the path to making amends! Love the idea of a surprise date...that's all avni needs to slowly forget the wound and pain he gave her...she needs to see that he will only love her. But he needs to do a lot more till she heals fully. Maybe a part of her will never heal also but it'll take many more such gestures for her to believe him. Great chapter! Waiting for next!
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Part 8-
Neil and Avni had spoken for what felt like hours, finally deciding to return to the warmth they ran to the safety of his car from the pouring rain
Avni got in first, shivering from the cold she turned the heater on as he switched on the engine
"I think it will take time, but maybe there is another chance for us" Neil spoke

Avni sat quietly "As much as I want a fresh start we cant forget what happened, it takes time to move forward and thats why I agree, we need a fresh start, get a divorce and if fate leads us back to eachother then okay, but I wasnt joking when I said I needed to find the me without you"
Neil huffed "So you want to be single first, to see if we're right together"
Avni nodded then a shape in the road appeared "NEIL" she screamed

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Avni's POV-

I woke up, upside down, Neil's bloody face the only thing I could focus on, he was right infront of me, his eyes closed
My throat burnt, my legs stinging from the seeping gash on my thighs
"Help, somebody help" I cried
I needed a phone
"Neil, Neil wake up"
I tried to touch him but my arm was jammed, the seatbelt across me burning into my skin

Neil opened his eyes "Avni, god I love you, we're not going to make it, im gonna die, look after my family please"
"No Neil, we're gonna be fine" I said, not believeing it myself
The sound of loud sirens giving me hope
"Take me just please keep her alive" he sobbed
My eyes widened at the blood pouring from his abdomen

"I love you Avni" he shouted
Then my head jolted as I jumped up from the impact of something, the last thing I saw was Neil's worried face as I blacked out

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Neil's POV-

"I want to see my wife, why cant I see my wife"
"Im sorry Mr Khanna, your wife has head injuries and is in the ICU"
The nurse tried to pacify me but I pushed forward
"I said I want to see my wife, why wont anyone give me any answers, I just need to know shes okay, what kind of job are you doing here"

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2 Weeks Later-

"Mr Khanna, we're going to wheel you around to your wife now"
Neil nodded, happy to see Avni, to know she was okay
His heart raced as her face came into view
She smiled softly and waved
"Neil, I am so sorry, what a day to ruin our wedding anniversary"

Neil paused, wedding anniversary? That was months ago
He turned to the doctor, fearful
"Mrs Khanna, how long have you been married for"
"6 years, its our wedding anniversary today, no" she asked, confused
Neil shook his head, the doctor escorted him out "Mr Khanna it looks as if your wife is suffering from memory loss, returning to a time when she was most happy"

Neil looked at her through the window, it seemed fate had given him a second chance to make this right, she hadnt remembered, but then he was unsure if hiding what he had done was correct
The doctor patted him on the shoulder
"Remember, do not stress her out, it can be dangerous, this could be temporary, it also may not be"

Neil wheeled himself through the doors and smiled at Avni, "Avni, how much do you love me"
"More than myself" she smiled
"Why would you ask me something like that"
"Because I dont think you will love me after this"

I know how many of you want this to be a mis-understanding, so I thought I would just clear this up, I have decided that it will not be, because it will take away the point of this story, I apologise if this isnt what you wanted but as humans, we make many mistakes, we love, we lose and we learn
And perfection just does not exist, so this is the imperfect version of Avni and Neil and I hope you will all continue to read as you have been doing

I apologise for how short this chapter is

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Posted: 7 years ago
#73

Originally posted by: neeraja91

Beautiful .Neel is on the path to making amends! Love the idea of a surprise date...that's all avni needs to slowly forget the wound and pain he gave her...she needs to see that he will only love her. But he needs to do a lot more till she heals fully. Maybe a part of her will never heal also but it'll take many more such gestures for her to believe him. Great chapter! Waiting for next!

Thank you Neeraja, you have a beautiful outlook on life!
I have updated!
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Posted: 7 years ago
#74
hey babe, thank you for 2 updates! bonanza hai! oh damn...accident hogaya aur Memory loss hogaya. did EK takeover your writing?! sorry i'm just pulling ur leg.😆 i like the twist. but i'm hoping that neel will tell her the truth. and from ur ending it does sound like that...she deserves to know it. and the beauty will be how they overcome all this to still be Avneil! chapter 9 main kya hoga?? jaldi update karna...
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: neeraja91

hey babe, thank you for 2 updates! bonanza hai! oh damn...accident hogaya aur Memory loss hogaya. did EK takeover your writing?! sorry i'm just pulling ur leg.😆 i like the twist. but i'm hoping that neel will tell her the truth. and from ur ending it does sound like that...she deserves to know it. and the beauty will be how they overcome all this to still be Avneil! chapter 9 main kya hoga?? jaldi update karna...

Hello! No problem!
Im afraid she has! 😆
I will update super soon!
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Posted: 7 years ago
#76
awesome, will be waiting for it!
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Posted: 7 years ago
#77
👏 oh dear you never cease to amaze me with your work! I'm loving part 8 so so much. Can't wait for the next part. So beautiful thank you. You nailed it in part 8 right into my heart. Keep up 👏
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Posted: 7 years ago
#78

Originally posted by: Mamisha

👏 oh dear you never cease to amaze me with your work! I'm loving part 8 so so much. Can't wait for the next part. So beautiful thank you. You nailed it in part 8 right into my heart. Keep up 👏

Aw, thank you! Im glad you liked it!
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Posted: 7 years ago
#79
Oh damn ! They met with accident when they were trying to start afresh . Looks like God has given Neil an opportunity to make his wife feel his love . I guess Neil can't afford to lie to her after all that had happened . He will definitely disclose the truth once he gets a chance . Hope she becomes well soon . Has Neil got fractured legs ?
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Posted: 7 years ago
#80
Awesome twosome chapters. Ek ke sath ek free free free aur wo bhi bilkul amazing . Loved it update the next part soon .

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