AvNeil FF: A MILLIONAIRE'S FIRST LOVE #Thread 2(Upto Chap 46)

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chavi12345

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Posted: 7 years ago

#41

Nice.chap... avneil are getting close...

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Redrose1208

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Posted: 7 years ago

#42

Riya...first of all thank u for these quick updates... First one to like and read the update... Yyyeeeaahh..... Though i doubt i will be the first one to comment... Coz thd time it takes me to write the comment is too much...😆

Now coming to the chap... I still cant decide which line was the cutest... I was like aaawww...in the entire chap... N that hug... So so so so heavenly... N those rains were 'sone pe suhaga'... Seriously... 😳

But the real romance started after separating from that hug... Neil ke thoughts dekh ke lagra tha aaj control hoga ki nhi isse... It was so smokin hot but at the same time adorably sweet...

Neil was toh always affected by avni's beauty...aaj pehli baar avni ke dil ke armaan bahar aaye... Abs n toned chest n ol... . Uuuhhhuu... Uuuhhhuuu... 😉

Neil ko widout shirt dekh ke avni ke neurons shortcircuit kaise nhi hue... Mere toh ho jate... 😉

But but but never expexted avni to call neil inside the house n take him to her room... That too so late at night... But wat a pleaseant surprise... Bas neil ko towel dene ke saath usko dry bhi krke jati toh it would hve been awesome... 😳

I loved those lines you used in the middle.. Are they of a song??...

N ofcsre ur love fr arijit ka songs... ❤️

2 months ke realationship mein yeh haal hai indono ka.. Shaadi n SR tak ke kya hoga... Aag lag jaygi forum pe... 😆

If possible aaj raat neil ko yahi rukado avni ke paas...thodu sa embarassy moment wid neela ma or maybe shweta too who comes to find neil wat wid him not cumin hme entire night...

However 25th chap was dhamakedaar n now 26th is gonna be more special... Haina... 😊

Waiting fr the next one... Aise hi jaldi jaldi updates dete raho...

Ab bas karti hoon... Varna main tob iss story ke baare mein nonstop bak bak kar sakti hoon...😆

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docritu99

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Posted: 7 years ago

#43

Originally posted by: rilsaf
Res ri mein aaghai

Unress soon.!
Waiting impatiently.!

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Prnmani

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Posted: 7 years ago

#44

Hi, I am new here.

congrats for the second thread. Thanks for the update. Really like it.

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Wingsoflove_2

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Posted: 7 years ago

#45

Originally posted by: docritu99

Unress soon.!
Waiting impatiently.!

hogai😉

Awesome update👏

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srinithi

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Posted: 7 years ago

#46

Aag barabar hai , yahan bhi or wahan bhi !

This day will the best ever day in his entire bachelorhood ! 😆 It's raining man . I'm getting many songs in my head after visualising the sequence

Yuhi Baras Baras Kaali Ghata Barse
Hum Yaar Bheeg Jaaye Is Chaahat Ki Baarish Mein
Meri Khuli Khuli Lato Ko Suljaaye
Tu Apni Ungliyon Se Main
To Hoon Isi Khwaayish Mein
Sardi Ki Raaton Mein Hum Soye Rahe Ek Chaadar Mein
Hum Dono Tanha Ho Na Koi Bhi Rahe Is Ghar Mein !😳😳.

Both are in a hormonal override with their open ogling session . Blame the weather ! Bheegi bheegi mausam and both totally drenched will definitely turn them on 😆 How are they able to have self control ESP Neil ! 😆

How can Avni allow him to fall sick that too with presentation coming up !_Obviously andar toh bulayegi Na !_

Avni Tubelight toh hai but she could understand too . She got his message 😉 And she doesn't care of being caught by Neela !_Wah ! todi sharmana banta hai

Batein kuch ankahi si kuch ansuni si hone lagi

Kaaboo dil mei raha Na hasti hamari khone lagi !

Today I'm getting so much songs !_Mere andar ki Majnu ko jaga diya tumne !😆

How can get Arijit songs for every moment ! Sitam hai yeh !_

You have decided to push me into AvNeil world with Arijit songs in background ! I'm in a daze !

I can only remember Avni drying his hair after emptying the entire jug on him 😆 They are a dream . Neil ka din ban gaya . Uski khayalon ki mallika ke room mei wo bhi bathrobe mei !_Wah ! Luck is so unpredictable ! I'm can't imagine what will come next 😳 He is lying with open arms in her bed 😳 Avni will stress him to stay . Whether he will stay or not only you can say 😆

Edited by AgnesFan - 7 years ago

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LadyWhistledown

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Posted: 7 years ago

#47

Superb ri and romantic also😳

The song you chose it was the best

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-WingsOfFire-

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Posted: 7 years ago

#48

Awesome update Ri di👏. After reading Neil's condition I had a song in my mind for the scenario, pehla nasha pehla khumar from the movie Jo jeeta wahi sikander,it would suit him a lot. If you can then I would love to read it in ur update. Well it's up to you. Coming to the update as usual too beautiful. And another thing the appreciation and attention di you and your story are getting is a gift of your own character. You deserve a lot of applause.😳

Edited by -WingsOfFire- - 7 years ago

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TheLifeDiaries

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Posted: 7 years ago

#49

I'm just in love with this story of yours. This update was super amazing. Loved it to the core. The sings were perfectly put. Please update soon. Sorry for being a silent reader till now. 😳

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blablabla_mo7

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Posted: 7 years ago

#50

Such a beautiful update.. the initial feelings of being in love is indeed the most beautiful one and will be memorable in one's entire life. Very well written.. hope the next one comes soon. Thank you

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