AvNeil FF: A MILLIONAIRE'S FIRST LOVE #Thread 2(Upto Chap 46) - Page 106

Ohk... First of all...why no name for the chap.. Even a filler one deserves one... 😳

Originally posted by: blablabla_mo7

You sound irritated on your posts.. I hope you're better when you read the comments as mine may not be that nice either.

Honestly... I think I need to re read all the chapters as I could not connect the most recent one and the whole objective/ context of the story. I like your writing style but before every major turning point there's a lot of build up leading towards it hence in between I tend to get confused as it's not continuous. Typically in a novel, it's continuous as you start to read till the end at your pace but here it depends a lot on your frequency. I accept that.

Going back to the context, it's about a millionaire's first love and so far I have understood what he did and why he did but I still can't get what's next and ulitimately what will happen. The 1st drama content for this I.e Avni finding the truth has happened so I'm still figuring out what's next. Whether it's Avneil's love journey/ riya/ sth else is still bothering my mind.

Coming to the update, it's just a filler in between. The surprise party plan is yet to take place so I'm not sure is that an important part of the story also. In between there was the presentation for the contract, their date etc and this update is just an extension to that date, hence more of a well written filler as I can't visualize the upcoming yet.
My honest feedback, if this was a book, I would have gone to last few chapters to know the end and then continue reading the book again so I can relate to the story again and continuity.

I hope you'll share your Wattpad if that makes it easier, but I'm not active there. Neither I will be active on IF once NK ends. The journey of reading MFL has been great so far, I hope I will stick till the end. If the above has upset you, my apologies. I just wanted to give you my perspective as a reader.

If you're having a kindle edition, do share it. I would love to get one.

All the best

I'l get back to this one, later.!
While i assure you i am not at all upset with this, infact i am taking this positively.! 😊

Originally posted by: rilsaf

Ri😭

Why are u thinking to discontinue this? Jatke pe jatke milre mujhe aaj.

Kaha jaane vale aap?pls dont do this.

Nah saf i am not discontinuing to write this.!

I MAY discontinue to post it here.! And that too is not decided yet.! 😉
But my excitement to create a new thread is "ZERO".

About me going from here, its not very soon.! I have some time for it.! And it will be for studies, for exams, and for career.! But u know i will be in touch, so u need not to worry about that at all.!

Originally posted by: rilsaf

Awesome update ri.

It was good. Missed blue munda. But this one was much needed to breath.

Bcoz once, blue munda scene mein aajata na Humari hosh udd jaate.😉 Hahaha 😆 I will take that as compliment.! Thank u so much

Morning scene reminds me my home. Mumma ki yaad diladi ri aapne.😭

Humesha hota hai yesa. Mom five minute more. Ahhh, kitna miss karti hoon isse. Sari MoM's ek jaisi hi hoti hai.! While writing i myself felt like writing on me and my mom and not on Avni and Neela.!

Anyway bohath blabber hogai. So, update ki baath karte.😆

Yeh riya kya kiya hoga?

Why avni dont want to give any chance to her? They were so close. Suddenly kya huwa hoga? Kuch toh hua hai.! Vaise bhi joh jada close hota hai unki mistakes pe hume kuch jada hi gussa aata hai.! They tend to hurt us more than our expectation.! Bus aesei kuch hai.!

Lets see. Neela ma ko pata chalgai dream catcher ke baaremein. Ab plz mujhse mat puchna kaise.! Let that part be assumed.!

Angie and avni phone conversation was so cute.😛 Glad to know that.!

Encyclopedia ne sab kuch share karli.

Wow, its trending. Kya baath hai blue munda.

I really like angie. She is so cute and sweet. Thank u so much.! She is my created character so i will take all the credit.!

Hmm, millionaire ki call aaghai.😉

Eagerly waiting for next update.

Continue soon.pls dont discontinue ri.

Its a request.

Hey saf,

Thank u so very much for ur kind words.!

And i will reconsider ur request.! Pakka.! Tujhe pata hai na i cant deny you.!
I myself dont want to discontinue the story from here, IF has always been my prefered site to post anything, but things here are just repulsing me, so much that it affects my writing.! This update took me a span of 3 days to write when i know its no more than a work of 2 hrs for me, the disappointment was that grave.!

Having said that all, My love for IF and this story and my loyal readers is too much to be denied.! So i will surely rethink.! My Inbox is already flooded with PM's regarding this.!

Thanks again for being there with me always.!
Highly appreciated.!
Much love to you.!

Originally posted by: ZaraSajad18

Amazing update please update soon

Thank u so much.!

Originally posted by: ff_fan

Hi! Hey.!

I am mostly a silent reader in the forum. I aplreciate ur efforts to drop down ur thoughts about the story. Mostly because I feel I cannot convey my feelings about the stories in proper words as you writers do in an amazing manner. Trust me when i say this, we donot expect perfect words either.

This does not mean I do not appreciate your efforts in writing the story. I am sorry if you feel that your efforts are getting wasted. It was a gradually oent up emotion from last few chaps, that just outbursted when i saw a good chap going down the same drain.!

Please continue with the story as you are an amazing writer.👏 Thank u so much. I will try.!

Coming to the story, I feel Neil of your story is every girl's dream man. His love is boundless and unconditional. Indeed.! He is here to set the bars high.! 😉

The relation between Neela maa and Avni is of pure love and respect. Their conversations many times reminds me of the conversations between my mom and me. The way Neela maa guides Avni and love her is so beautifule to see. So glad to know that.! I am happy u could conmect with those parts

I love the way you describe the emotions of your characters. Your story always feels so seamless. Its amazing. That was a huge compliment for me.! Thank u so much

Thanks for letting us read your story.😊 Thank u for taking the time to read

Hey,

Thank u so much for ur kind words.!

I am honoured to know that there are a bunch of silent readers too who do appreciate and like the story. Thank u for giving me this new insight.!

Much Love.!

Awsome n i love neela n avni a lot best mother daughter jodi n ohh hoo so everywhere song is trending not bad vaise bhi neil gaaye n trend na ho aisa ho sakta hai kya pls update next part soon

Okay. So first of all, it gave me a shock that neither the index, nor the chapter had any Name.









The whole story till now feels like a movie, and this feels like the interval or near to interval.

Originally posted by: Ankita713

Hey is there any problem regarding reviews of your story? I mean you sounded so low in the update and seems like it's bothering you too much. I couldn't figure out the the exact issue but I am really upset to know about your thoughts on discontinuing this story. I know appreciation means a lot to a writer and it works as a motivation and absence of which demoralises one but trust me there are readers who love your story by heart and I am happy to say that I am one of them. I really don't know what's the matter but all I can do is to request you not to discontinue posting it. You are an amazing writer dear and I am sure know it too. I just wanna tell you that there are many such writers whose works are not appreciated or even read but at some point of time people do begin to love them. If your story has that captivating power then mark my words, it will reach the topmost position. Dear don't sink your heart with negativity instead feel the positivity around you. Good luck!

Hey Ankita,

Thank u so much for ur amazing words of encouragement.! They did affected me in a good way. I am touched and all thanks to you.!


As for the issue is concerned, i am no impulsive person to react on basis of one instnace.! There was gradual diminition over past few chaps.!

I know it is insane to expect good response in each and every chap, coz some are fillers, some are ohkayish, while some chaps do not have much to talk about, and trust me such chaps garnering less response doesnt botter me.! I am sane enough to underatand this. But sometimes there comes a good chap, which u have written with ur heart and soul, expectations are ought to come with them, and when such chap fell flat on ur face, it hurts.! So the bottom line is - "Do not Expect.!" even when u know this is a good chap.!

The lattest one is more like a filler, and such chap being ignored is understandable.! But last one came like a breaking point for me.!

Anyways, that was an impulsive outburst and i should betted be careful with this.! I am a writer, my work is to write and post. I cant control the fact whether someone is liking it or not. 😊 So i should stop thinking about it and accept whatever little good is coming my way.!


Thank u so very much for ur constant Love and Support.!
I heartly appreciate it.!

Much love to you.!

Originally posted by: ANVESHIKAMS

nice update

missinng neelama in show

Please do not stop posting it here Riya

as I'm busy with my real life problems not getting time to reply n sorry for that n update soon n try to reply for upcoming updates

Thank u so much.!