'VIGILANT IN LOVE!'-THE NEO DIARIES-AVNEIL SS-COMPLETED

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blablabla_mo7

@blablabla_mo7

Voyager

Posted: 7 years ago

#81

Subtle yet sexy... you wrote it well.. I just loved it when you had their dialogues repeated letting the other have the same pinch! Too good. I like the pace and how you keep everything short and sweet too.. good going!!!

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theodyssey

@theodyssey

Inactive

Posted: 7 years ago

#82

Wow! This story has everything. I absolutely love it. The part where they keep on realising that they know that the other one knows made me nostalgic! It reminded me of F.R.I.E.N.D.S where it's Rachel & Phoebe VS Monica & Chandler as they try to crack them and get them to come clean about their relationship! Absolutely loved it!

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Thesweetsoul

@Thesweetsoul

Explorer

Posted: 7 years ago

#83

all the fun of story and suspense finishes when u read it in on go...it always happens with me...GROAN! big groan from my side...Hey mandy..i love the way u write..why not publish a book...hehehe i was joking dear..but really am loving ur writing skills...👏

can we be friends from now? my name is Samiksha and u can call me Sami

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Veenapai

@Veenapai

Rocker

+ 9

Posted: 7 years ago

#84

It's awesome.Loved it.Both are smart.Thanks for this beautiful SS

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sky-if

@sky-if

Dazzler

Posted: 7 years ago

#85

Aww! Lovely end! 😃

"So which actress has recently broken up with her boyfriend and all the fans want her to date her co-star who is way hotter than him?" asked Avni.

😆

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sky-if

@sky-if

Dazzler

Posted: 7 years ago

#86

Originally posted by: MrDarcyfan

As Promised, here is the link to my Index!

"Say My Name!" - My AvNeil-NK Index

Thank you! Bookmarked and hoping to read more AvNeil stories from you!

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-Rehanna-

@-Rehanna-

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 7 years ago

#87

Originally posted by: jarianasuslove
Wow! This story has everything. I absolutely love it. The part where they keep on realising that they know that the other one knows made me nostalgic! It reminded me of F.R.I.E.N.D.S where it's Rachel & Phoebe VS Monica & Chandler as they try to crack them and get them to come clean about their relationship! Absolutely loved it!

I was just thinking that!

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Mandy

@MrDarcyfan

Stunner

+ 6

Posted: 7 years ago

#88

Hey thanks guys for your comments and loving the ending! Special thanks to those who compared the chapter to FRIENDS! That used to be one of my fave shows!

What I always loved about AvNeil is that they are as smart as the other! I could not have Avni not realise Neil was playing her! They give as good as they get! Remember the night after the gazebo when Neil pretended that sab kuch hogaya and as soon as Avni realised he was lying she turned the tables on him!! It was LOL. I kept to the spirit of that here too!

Glad you guys liked it!