AvNeil OS: DON'T YOU GIVE UP

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Globetrotter_me

@Globetrotter_me

Voyager

Posted: 7 years ago

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Kmhcrazyfan

@Kmhcrazyfan

Inactive

Posted: 7 years ago

So emotional one

Loved both their pov

Their helplessness had written so well

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Globetrotter_me

@Globetrotter_me

Voyager

Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: Kmhcrazyfan
So emotional one
Loved both their pov
Their helplessness had written so well

Thank you! :)

Happy new year!

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Sanvee_R

@Sanvee0812

Inactive

Posted: 7 years ago

Rula diya... Emotional one yet Beautiful...❤️

Loved it puja di.. (get used to the di tag😛)

N happy new year🤗

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-WingsOfFire-

@-WingsOfFire-

Voyager

Posted: 7 years ago

😭I'm in a pool of tears . Very heart touching.Wonderful OS Puja di.👏

Edited by -SaskatoonDan- - 7 years ago

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docritu99

@docritu99

Sparkler

+ 6

Posted: 7 years ago

Beautiful.!!

I loved the parallels u brought in this one.!
Very beautifully written.!

Loved it to bits.!

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Anu

@RomComFan

Rocker

Posted: 7 years ago

I love the way at you tapped into their emotions and vulnerability..terrific job

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Spacebound

@Spacebound

Explorer

Posted: 7 years ago

Beautiful❤️

I want Neil to be there when Avni is crying in Neil's office..He needs to see her breakdown.

I loved this OS. Thanks!

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Nivedita

@Nivedita_SS

Dazzler

Posted: 7 years ago

Why is it that I felt few tears almost after reading this wonder piece of writing from your side. No way to welcome a new year. But seriously, it was just amazing, spellbinding. We all have that in our mind isn't it: never give up. Personal as well for our fav telly couples who get us hooked to their story (no matter how and which road their story takes 😕). Avni hopes to get out of the prison and Neil hopes to get forgiveness from Avni. Wish this piece gets extended, can't see them breaking down like this.

Advance Happy New Year! Few more hours to go 😃.

Love,

Nivi