Tell Me What Makes A Man (OS)

This isn't goodbye

Neil had told Avni the truth about why he had jailed her, but the hard look in her eyes never left

"There is no place for you in my heart or life anymore" she had muttered, her eyes had never left his

Even as I watch you leave


Neil watched as she walked away from him, every step away made his heart beat faster, she was leaving, leaving him

Nothing he could say or do to stop her

This isn't goodbye

Neil shook his head, he wasn't one to give up, he would never give up, not on the love of his life


I swear I won't cry


Neil had to look down, anywhere but at her leaving form

Even as tears fill my eyes
I swear I won't cry

Neil sighed heavily, his eyes now teary as he watched her leave, he wondered if it was possible to feel his heart breaking

Any other girl I let you walk away
Any other girl I'm sure I'll be okay

Visions of Juhi flooded his mind, what he felt for her was nothing in comparison to what he felt for Avni, what he would always feel

Tell me what makes a man want to give you all his heart

Avni tried not to cry as she walked away, she wanted more than anything to turn back and run into his arms and forgive him

But she was tired of being left in the dark and being walked over
No more would she be weak

Smile when you're around and cry when you're apart
If you know what makes a man want to love you the way I do
Girl you gotta let me know so I can get over you

Neil dropped to the floor, Avni had cast her spell on him, he would never be able to move forward, he didnt want to

What makes us so right
Is it the sound of the laugh
That look in her eyes
When do you decide
She is the dream that you see
That falls in your life

Avni stopped, turning to face him, she looked at him sat on the floor, his eyes red with unshed tears

She couldnt stop herself as she walked back over to him

And you apologize no matter who was wrong
Would you get on your knees if that would bring her home

Neil looked up at her, on his knees
Putting his hands together she grabbed them, shaking her head

"I have to do this for me Neil"

Tell me what makes a man want to give you all his heart
Smile when you're around and cry when you're apart
If you know what makes a man want to love you the way I do
Girl you gotta let me know so I can get over you

Neil watched as she stepped back, he wanted nothing more than to be selfish and make her stay

But he couldn't, this was her time, her journey, her fight

But he would always stand by her side

Other girls that come along they always knew
But what's the point when all I ever want is you
Tell me

Neil stood up, his heart belonged to her, forever
He would wait, as long as it took for her to come back

No matter what it took

Tell me what makes a man want to give you all his heart
Smile when you're around and cry when you're apart
If you know what makes a man want to love you the way I do
Girl you gotta let me know, let me know, so I can get over you

Because the truth was Avni made him the man he wanted to be

He knew what made a man, and that was the woman walking away from him

Omg this is so beautiful❤️

Originally posted by: Mohabbatein.

Omg this is so beautiful❤️

Especially these lines , He knew what made a man, and that was the woman walking away from him

My heart hurt for both Avni and Neil.

Very beautifully written👏

well done, their pain depicted well here, keep writing loving the ones I read so far

My heart broke for both 😭

Originally posted by: adventure_gurl

well done, their pain depicted well here, keep writing loving the ones I read so far

Originally posted by: AgnesFan

My heart broke for both 😭

Beautifully written 👏👏 U brought out their pain so beautifully . Song was cherry on the cake

ESP the lines he knew what,made the man the woman walking away ⭐️💔

Beautiful OS😊

It so painful😭 awesome dear. I loved it. My heart broke.💔

Originally posted by: avneil2

It so painful😭 awesome dear. I loved it. My heart broke.💔

Originally posted by: Kmhcrazyfan

Beautifully written

Emotional os