The Bodyguard- (25 Parts) Part One Complete P18 Announcement - Page 4

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Posted: 7 years ago
#31

Originally posted by: Tumpa12

awesome

love it
Cont soon


Thank you, will do⭐️
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Posted: 7 years ago
#32
Interesting :) so Avni knew who Anand is... Neil is damn cute while making Avni get jealous... wish to read the next ones soon...
A request dear :) pls a lengthy chapter next time ?
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Posted: 7 years ago
#33
Damn cute yaar! Neil trying to make Avni jealous is a treat to watch❤️
Continue soon😃
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Posted: 7 years ago
#34
Omg..avni kidnapped.
Neil gotta save her re...
Hehe neil avni ka jealousy game.
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Posted: 7 years ago
#35

Originally posted by: Avni_reddy

Interesting :) so Avni knew who Anand is... Neil is damn cute while making Avni get jealous... wish to read the next ones soon...

A request dear :) pls a lengthy chapter next time ?


Thank you!⭐️ Ill make sure the next chapter is a long one :)
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: avneil2

It's so interesting.

Continue soon.


Thank you!⭐️
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Posted: 7 years ago
#37

Originally posted by: Zara_Imam

Damn cute yaar! Neil trying to make Avni jealous is a treat to watch❤️

Continue soon😃


Thank you, ⭐️
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Posted: 7 years ago
#38

Originally posted by: Hybrid_Freak

Omg..avni kidnapped.

Neil gotta save her re...
Hehe neil avni ka jealousy game.


Im sure he will get there soon😆
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Posted: 7 years ago
#39
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"Riya now isnt the time"
Running towards his car, he got in and followed the van

Anand looked into the rearview mirror "Ah shit, hes following us"
Putting his foot down, he sped forward

Avni worked on untying her wrists, rubbing the ropes on the broken part of the inner door

Anand smiled, he had lost Neil
Parking the van, he jumped out and tugged Avni out

"No, no dont do this I beg of you "
Anand grabbed her face, her cheeks stung from his grip

"Watch how you talk to me princess, now give me the jewel"
Avni shook her head

Dragging her by her hair, he threw her onto the floor, kicking her in the stomach she screamed and curled into a ball

"Stop or ill shoot"
Anand turned around to face Neil

Avni opened her eyes, sighing in relief she slowly stood up
Anand grabbed her, pulling her to him

"You shouldn't let her trick you into feeling something for her, she did the same to me, then broke my heart and she will break yours to"

Neil gritted his teeth, pulling the trigger, Avni ducked as the bullet scraped his shoulder

Neils men ran from behind him, arresting him
"Question him and get all the answers tonight, I want to know who hes working for, why hes working for them and his past with Avni"

The worker nodded as he dragged Anand along
Avni stood up slowly, with a cry she ran over to Neil

Wrapping her arms around him she breathed in his scent
She could feel his heart beat quicken, matching hers

As she pulled back, she stopped, her eyes drawn to Neil's lips
She knew this wasnt right, he was her bodyguard

But this attraction was so intense it made her breathless
His voice did things to her she had no words for, his touch was electrifying and oh god, how he looked at her

He looked at her like she was the only thing left, the most precious thing

Neither was sure who initiated it, but their lips touched for just a mere second before they both pulled away

"That shouldnt of happened" muttered Neil
Of course, he was right.
It shouldnt have, but that did nothing to stop her craving for more

"Khanna"
"Hmm"
"Take me home"

Wrapping an arm around his she smiled, "so how was your date with Riya"

"Oh yeah, great, was the cherry on the cake when you got kidnapped"
Avni shrugged "I did tell you, you cant do both"

Suddenly her back was pinned to the car
"Oh really, are you sure about that"

Lifting her foot she traced his leg "one hundred percent baby"

Shoving him back she sat in the car, winking

As he sat next to her, watching the way her eyes lit up when she smiled he became very aware

That it wasnt guarding her and the jewel he was worried about
It was about guarding his heart


Although this isnt that much longer than usual, it is longer.
I promise the next update will be a lot longer also, does anyone have anything they would like to see happen in this story?
Thank you for all your support, your comments always make my day xxx
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Posted: 7 years ago
#40
Read all parts .
Neil's grand welcome by Avni 😆 If Neela hadn't appeared seedha hospital hi pahuncha degi .
For a change Avni is attracted and jealous too 😃 This we never get in the show . Loved Neil's attempts to make her jealous 😆
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How did she know anand ? She silently followed him without a word . I am confused . Anand is behind Avni or jewel she is wearing .

Agar bodyguard aisi irresistible hai toh Avni karegi kya 😆 I'm loving that she is leading .

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