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Posted: 7 years ago
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Prakash pulled the car door open for Avni
Getting out she stared at the prison , it had been so long since she had seen her father

Prakash wrapped an arm around her shoulder "Have faith you can do this"

Avni nodded smiling, but she still felt scared

Would he want to see her? Would he hate her?

Before she knew it she stood infront of a dark cell
Her heart beat so loud it made her ears thump

"Papa" Avni called
Ashish stood up, his hair long, and a long beard

"Avni" his voice was raspy , like he had just uttered his first word in years
"Hes the most dangerous criminal here, im sorry Prakash ji but I cannot let her in" muttered an officer

Avni turned to face them "Hes my father, hes not dangerous just let me in"

The officer seemed worried but agreed
As the jail door was pulled open Avni ran forward wrapping Ashish in a hug

His hand rested on her head as he cried
Holding her chin he smiled "You look exactly like your mum"

Avni lifted her hands wiping his tears "Dont cry papa im going to get you out of here"

Ashish fell back as Avni grabbed his arms
"Papa whats"

Ashish closed his eyes as if in pain "I have to tell you something"
Prakash stepped in the cell "Is now the right time"

"Then when will it be" asked Ashish
"Papa youre bleeding, dont worry just tell me another time"

Ashish shook his head "I must have just pulled my stitches, im fine but listen to me"

Avni grasped his hand as she tried not to cry
"Aman, hes " closing his eyes again he looked away

"Hes what papa"
Ashish began to shake as blood poured out his mouth

"Help, help somebody help me" Avni shouted
Ashish was dragged away by a guard and put onto a stretcher

Running after him she grabbed his hand
"Papa "
Lifting his other hand he wrapped it around his throat

Slowly his fingers left hers as she sobbed
"I cant lose you to"
Turning around she hugged Prakash as she cried




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Posted: 7 years ago
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"Neil, stay with her please I need to speak to the doctors" asked Prakash

They were now at the hospital and Avni couldnt stop crying
Neil went to hold her hand when she yanked it away

"Its because of police officers like you that my father isnt safe" shouted Avni

Shweta walked over to Avni "I know youre upsett but this isnt the way to talk to your best"

Stopping herself she coughed "best chance at getting justice for your father"

Neil raised his eyebrow but chose to ignore it

Prakash walked back "Ashish was poisoned but hes okay and he wants to speak with you"

Avni thanked him and ran towards the room
"Papa"

Crashing herself to his chest she held him tight
Stroking her hair he smiled "My Avni, so brave"

"Who poisoned you "
Ashish gulped "Im not sure, but theres something you need to know "

Avni waited with bated breath
"Aman is classed as mentally insane Dayavanti ruined him, scarred him for life and now he has nowhere, he ran away from a hospital but you have to find him and help him, hes the only one that knows why Asha sent you to the Khanna's"

Avni nodded, "I want to stay here with you tonight"
An officer shook his head "Not unless an officer is willing to stay with you and it must be outside of the room"

Avni nodded "Neil will"
The officer nodded as Neil was brought into the room and given strict orders

Avni's hair fell forward as she hugged Ashish, a scar both thick and deep covered the top of her back

Neil lifted his hand to touch the ragged skin on his shoulder
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Avni sat next to Neil outside the hospital room
Passing her water, she thanked him as she rested her head against the wall

His phone dropped to the floor, bending down he picked it up
Avni focused on the scar at the top of his back

As he sat up, he looked at her
"How did you get that scar"

"Childhood accident, how did you get yours"
Avni gulped " the same way"

Neil nodded suspiciously
"Ill be right back"
He nodded

Running into the bathroom, she got her pictures out of her bag, looking through them she stopped at a picture of herself and a boy

"It cant be" she whispered
Pushing the bathroom door open she ran to reception

"15 years ago, there should be a record under Avni Ayesha, what was the boys name that was admitted with me"

The nurse frowned "I'm sorry I cant reveal that information"
"No, look im Avni" sliding her ID across the desk

The nurse agreed and looked the records up
"Neil Khanna, both brought here after you were kidnapped for child trafficking"

Avni thanked her and walked back over to Neil, but before she could say anything, as he turned to face her

He fell to the floor, a knife in his chest

"Neil" she screamed as she dropped to the floor with him
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: Tumpa12

interesting

update soon


Thank you⭐️
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Avni held Neil's hand as he slept in the hospital bed.
The knife had just missed his heart and she was thankful for it.

Prakash called Avni outside the room
"Uncle, I know Neil was kidnapped with me as a child, but why, why did my mother send me to you"

Prakash scratched the back of his neck
"When you were young, our family used to live next door to yours. Every day you would play with Neil, but Dayavanti wanted you gone, out of Ashish's life"

Avni sat down, closing her eyes tightly she took some deep breaths.

"She sent some people to kidnap you and sell you, but they took Neil to. For 9 months we couldnt find you, until we found some evidence and could save you, the reason we kept you both apart is because"

Avni looked towards him "Because what"
Prakash closed his eyes, as if in pain

"You were with a place interested in child marriages and"
Avni stood up, shaking her head

"Well this can be fixed right, right" she shouted

Prakash sighed "We did all we could when you were young but agreed it would be best to keep you apart incase they ever returned "

Avni gulped "returned for what"
"What they think they own, people who get away, they want dead"

"So you think they stabbed Neil"
Prakash nodded

"Well how do we get them to leave us alone"
"There isnt a way, we have tried for years"

"Unless we give them what they want"
"Which is"

Looking towards the door to Neil's room she walked forward "Our marriage"
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Hmm nice jhatka of child marriage... now i understand why she and he are drawn towards each other so quickly
Do update next one soon :)
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: Avni_reddy

Hmm nice jhatka of child marriage... now i understand why she and he are drawn towards each other so quickly

Do update next one soon :)


Thank you! I will soon:)
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Okay so just a quick note : I am not a supporter of child marriage or trafficking or forced marriage. Its just something I deemed necessary for the story.
I am a firm believer that you should be allowed to fall in love and make your own choices when it comes to life long relationships.

It had been a week that had passed since Avni had spoken her mind.
The family had agreed but Neil would not speak to her

It bothered her immensely that he wasnt speaking to her.
It bothered her even more that it bothered her in the first place.

"Neil look, I know that I have upsett you, I dont want to force you into a marriage I just want us to be safe"

Turning to face her he pointed to outside and walked away
Following him quickly she tripped, knocking him over as they rolled down the hill

Her body lay pressed up against his, her hands tight on his shoulders, her eyes squeezed shut

"Are we dead" Avni asked
And just like that, the negative energy was gone

Neil couldn't stop laughing
As she opened her eyes, she was awe struck at how he looked when he laughed

She couldnt put her finger on it, but there was just something about him that she wanted

Her hair tickled his chin , twisting it around his finger, he pulled her closer

"If we are to get married, I dont just want a marriage of convenience , we have to do this properly"

Clearing her throat "Properly"?
"I will be your husband in every sense of the way but you must be my wife in every sense of the way"

Avni gulped, she agreed, but now with the way his intense gaze fell upon her
She wasnt sure she could keep herself to herself

Pulling herself up, she held out her hand, as he took it, her hand tingled at his touch

"Avni"
"Hmm"
"I have a wedding present for you"

Pointing over to the trees Ashish came into her view
Running forward she hugged him

"Papa how did you"
"Im innocent superstar, Neil found proof I didnt do it"
"How" she asked

Neil walked forward "We did all the checks again on the body, seems Ashish has a reliable alibi"

Avni furrowed her brows "Whos his alibi"
Neil pointed to himself "My father and I , if you trust your father then so do we"

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Posted: 7 years ago
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Thank you x
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"We found him" huffed Neil
Prakash stood up "Really son"

Neil nodded "Aman is in a hospital setting to help him, he had been staying with an elderly homeless couple, who we found a place to stay "

Prakash patted him on the back "Good son, youve done well"

Shweta smiled "As soon as you and Avni are married, that group will leave us all alone and we can be a happy family again"

Neil grasped Avni's hand "Lets go see Aman"

*An Hour Later*

Aman sat on a hospital bed, swinging his legs back and forth he laughed
Avni focused her gaze upon him through the glass on the door

"Doctors said he will improve within 6 months, then we may be able to take him home"
Avni grasped Neil's hand

"I dont know how I can ever thank you for all youve done for me and the small family I have left " muttered Avni greatfully

"Marry me, but not to be safe, marry me because you know that we can be happy together"
It was a request that Neil was scared to even ask for

But he hoped, that what he felt for Avni, she would feel to and that maybe one day, they could fall in love

Avni leaned forward, wrapping her arms around him she nodded her head

"One day Neil, im going to love you, I just know it"
Neil smiled at her answer

"Ditto Avni"

A man watched the couple, picking out his phone he called his boss "Theyre getting married , this job is no more "
Smiling he slid his gun into his pocket and turned around only to be grabbed by DD

"If there's one thing you should know about Neil Khanna and his to be wife, its that they never leave a job half done" said DD as he cuffed the man

Hi! So, when I initially started this story I wasnt very keen on it. I have completley lost motivation for it, but didnt want to leave it without an ending incase anyone was actually interested.
So, although its a shit ending and very rushed, its an ending atleast.
Thank you for all your support and I will be focusing more on my other story Bodyguard.

I promise no other stories will end as fast or as rubbishly (if thats even a word) as this one.

Xx

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