#8 MR. LOVING Khanna :AvNeil Different Shades of ACP series.!!

Thank you dear for updating now I'm going to read it and then I will give comments again

Res ri,I need this dose right now.will be back soon.thank u so much.❤️

👏👏thank you dear it's mind blowing and so soothing after today's heartbreaking episode for me

Wow 😳 Iam in love with this version of Neil khanna 😳

Another shade and another new facet of my hero... kya bolu Riya ? It was just so soothing to read... fell in love with him again... sry for my repetitive comment but i can't resist saying that 😊

Ohhh...Riya !!!! This was a "MASTERPIECE"... well even this word cannot do proper justice to ur beautiful story..!!! Reading this one was a BLISS...pure BLISS...especially after today's episode...!!! Can't thank u enough for giving such a Lovely story...loved it from every bit of my heart!! Loved it to the bits from the beginning till the end..!! It had everything!!
Completely loved the opening...u started the story with the romantic note..which was to die for!! Very well written !!
Loved the romantic-cum- humorous elements u added amidst all the teasing comments like the " Ride of paradise"..the "Suhaagrat" one was hillarious..the best one!!.. it left me also wondering is neil really shameless
😛 hahaa!!And of course "Neil's accusations" were bang on and true..."Wifey's retaliations" were no less..."Wifey Card"...nonetheless. .My favourite one ..the "CHECK" one literally cracked me up...Lol..that was hillarious... all were awesome!! Such a light hearted story ..!! Loved this..!!
And then is my favourite part...(though the full story is my favourite..so consider this part to be the favourite of my favourite).. Right from the description of the weather and the surroundings. ..followed by their conversation which was beautiful ...so genuine ...so real... and the breathtakingly beautiful.."LAST PARAGRAPH" had my heart.. so genuinely written..nothing of dreamy sort...all of it felt so soothing to the heart while reading...well- portrayed emotions..Ohhh..girl i can't describe enough the way i felt reading that...The "RAINS"..." THEIR DANCE ALONG THE SONG U CHOSE".."THE WEATHER & SURROUNDINGS" u described...Especially "THE SUNRISE " at the end...it was breathtakingly beautiful!!!!! Such a BLISS!! of course the silver lining was the "Last line"... loved it till the end...!!!!!!!!!!

Can't resist myself from praising u..(albiet appreciating the story meant that only but still bear some more words )...U started story with such light-hearted track or more precisely the " Carefree and Affectionate love"..and ended with such beautiful lines ,putting differently "Deep and pure love"..take a bow to ur writing...the way u blended the elements,emotions and theme of the story..i didn't even realise when i went from laughing to complete awe!!!That's called a clever writing u surely know how to keep the readers engrossed..."Not even a single line of this story can be deprived of appreciation "..Loved it Riya...Lots of Love to u...pls continue to write ..such amazing write-ups..!!! Looking forward to more..!! Thank u so so so much for this!!

P.S. Like i had told u ...u made me fall more for Neil khanna with Ur something " DIFFERENT AND UNEXPECTED "!!!! Who other than u can do proper justice to his different shades..!!! Waiting for possessive one!!!

It is awesome. Plz write something on jealous and possessive neil khanna👏👏👏

Beautiful update

lovely update, so sizzling hot