NOTHING BUT STRANGERS... An Avneil OS

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Posted: 7 years ago

#21

Originally posted by: zeherili
please continue!!

Will surely do! 😃

Originally posted by: avneil2
Its too painful to read.I dont know how iam gonna take it in the show.awesome continue soon.

Aww... 🤗 Dun worry our Avni will be awesome! She will become kickass again! 😎

Originally posted by: Kmhcrazyfan
Outstanding update
Totally loved it
Please do continue this
Which was totally different and interesting

Thank u so much dear! 😳 Will surely cont. 😃

Originally posted by: Simi1711
Awesome
Please continue!

Thank u!😳

Originally posted by: Tumpa12
its too good
loved it
do cont soon

Thank u! N yeah will do! 😃

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Lifez_Beautiful

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Posted: 7 years ago

#22

Originally posted by: Aphrodite_NV
Nikki, right ? ( just forgive me if I'm mistaken). I just could not resist myself from dropping by after reading this wonderful pieceof writing of yours. Avni's emotions and actions were to the point. She loved Neil and more than that she trusted Neil in every decision he took, it is hard for her to see him not trusting her. Atleast that's what she would feel at that point of time, or for that matter any person on this earth. And Neil's concern as a husband is something to watch out in your OS. Under the guise of an ACP, is still a husband who can't see his wife in pain.
Do you have any plans to continue this magnificent piece? If yes, do drop me a pm whenever you update.

Love,
Nivi

Hi Nivi!

Yup Niki here!😃

N hun thank u so much for the lovely appreciation 🤗I'm truly humbled by ur kind words... 😳 N yeah, u noticed it spot on dear... I was actually trying to explore how Neil fits into the whole situation... Because we obviously would see the story through Avni's eyes because she is the wronged party in this case... But I wanted to see whether Neil can be redeemed too or not...Whether he lives upto all his claims he made till now... Whether he actually is capable of loving her through the thick and thin of life or not...😳

Also, I do actually hv plans to continue it dear and will pakka try to drop u a PM when I do, although the next chapter might be quite late. :)