#4 Mr. NAUGHTY Khanna : AvNeil Different Shades of ACP Series..!! - Page 2

What a great read loved naughty Neil , would be great to see this on screen after Chuhi leaves . I don't know why Avni resists 😳

Uff... steamy erotic and marvellous ! *wink* as usual Neil rocked ! His dialogues omg... made me blush hehe

World outside was seeking us but we would be happy to hide ourselves inside the other 😳👏 I loved this line .

This was simply amazing ☺️

Originally posted by: avneil2

Iam blushing.☺️how good is ur writing style.its awesome.hope,hume yese kuch scene miljaye.

Aww.. Thank u so much dear.!

Issi hope ke sahare to Nk dekh rahe hai or chuhi ko bhi bardasht kar rahe hai.!

Originally posted by: sp13

What a great read loved naughty Neil , would be great to see this on screen after Chuhi leaves . I don't know why Avni resists 😳

Thank u so much dear.!
Naughty Neil is fun to write as well.!
Avni wasnt resisting, she was just shy and tubelight. Being experiencing something so intense for the first time in her life. M sory i couldnt convey her emotions properly.

Originally posted by: Avni_reddy

Uff... steamy erotic and marvellous ! *wink* as usual Neil rocked ! His dialogues omg... made me blush hehe

I could see this being enacted by Adiza... would love to see such naughty stuff (a little of this atleast) onscreen too... this intimacy is much needed after all this crappy shit of chuhi...

Thanks for writing and pls update next one soon :)

Thank u sooo much for such words of praises.!
Neil's dialogue part was too challenging for me too.

Bold - completely agree with u.!

Next part will be up soon.!
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Originally posted by: AgnesFan

World outside was seeking us but we would be happy to hide ourselves inside the other😳👏I loved this line .

It's really been ages we got this naughty Neil giving his sweet dose to wife . I just die when he does ministrations with Avni . Neil's favorite pastime is playing with her hair strands , staring at her and new one is nuzzling her to give a sweet torture .

I badly wish something similar to this happens in show too . Our cute little Cupid of AvNeil always does her job perfectly .

I really feel bad for Neil being deprived of kiss . This was such hot and steamy . I can imagine AdiZa enacting it .

Thanks a ton for such beautiful updates😃

I look forward to ur comments dear.
M so overwhelmed after reading this.!

About the last line, i feel that the story remains incomplete if the end is not griping coz thats what remains in readers mind for long after reading the story and while commenting so yeah i always end with a strong punchline or something like that.!

Blod- so true.! Agree with u cent percent.!

Presently only Mishti is shown as Avneil shipper so cant resist myself bringing her on this story 😆😆
M glad u liked it.
Thank u sooo very much for this comment.!
Keep reading and appreciating.!
Means a lot to me.!

Originally posted by: Simi1711

This was simply amazing☺️

Thank u so much. 😊

Originally posted by: taarey25

amazing

Thank u. 😊