AvNeil SS: Us Against the World | CHAPTER 15 UP: PG-39 (Apr 17)

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Sash

@sash4love

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Posted: 7 years ago

#21

wow very unique in the story line...6 months seems a lot💔.. and the way u described the❤️ emotions. 👏

the suspense u ended chapter 1..'JUST TELL ME AVNI IS FINE DAMN IT!'' ...cliff hanger

can't wait for the next update...will be waiting eagerly

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theodyssey

@theodyssey

Inactive

Posted: 7 years ago

#22

Alright I'm absolutely in love with this story already! Your writing style is wonderful! Too good, can't wait for more!

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Chocolatebond

@Chocolatebond

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Posted: 7 years ago

#23

It's really very interesting please update as soon as possible

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srinithi

@AgnesFan

Sparkler

Posted: 7 years ago

#24

Moi DD 😭💔 I always wanted him to be Neil's brother . I loved it thoroughly . I wish they put DD to use in the show too . He is such a sweetheart and greatest devotee of AvNeil .

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Wingsoflove_2

@Wingsoflove_2

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Posted: 7 years ago

#25

Dd,I love his character in shaw and ur stotry.he is an pure soul.cont soon.its amazing.I love your stories.

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SUCHISMITA

@Suchi_ASR

Explorer

Posted: 7 years ago

#26

wow..just wow

reading it from DD's perspective was so beautiful

i hope avni gets fine yaar.. poor neil..🥺

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Firedrakes

@Firedrakes

Beginner

Posted: 7 years ago

#27

Hey when are you going to update the next part...

Please do it soon damn interesting

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Smitakshi Guha

@SimiSays

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+ 8

Posted: 7 years ago

#28

Originally posted by: Firedrakes
Hey when are you going to update the next part...
Please do it soon damn interesting

Next update will come tonight!

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docritu99

@docritu99

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+ 6

Posted: 7 years ago

#29

Masterpiece.!
Totally in awe of it.!
Such an emotional and heartwrenching update.!
Loved the fact that it was written from DD's POV.
The end though, Damn.!
Cant wait Now.
Update soonish.!

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Kanika

@ITV_lover

Dazzler

Posted: 7 years ago

#30

Originally posted by: Simi1711

Tysm! :)
My ArShi stories are all on my Wattpad profile. You can read them there. :)
I update my stories on AvNeil too, over there!

Hey please do update your AvNeil stories on Wattpad soon all of them... it been long time Simi