AvNeil SS: Us Against the World | CHAPTER 15 UP: PG-39 (Apr 17)

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Smitakshi Guha

@SimiSays

Sparkler

+ 8

Posted: 7 years ago

#231

Originally posted by: Himani128
Welcome back Simi!!!
After a long time u updated. I hope u are fine now.

All I can say is the update is fantastic but as always u stopped at the cliff hanger

Hi Himani! 🤗

It's been too long.

How are you doing?

I am keeping better.

Hehe, some folks have named me the ''Cliffhanger Queen'' but be rest assured, you won't be disappointed as you read the next parts! 😊😆

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Wingsoflove_2

@Wingsoflove_2

Rocker

Posted: 7 years ago

#232

Welcome back simmi🤗

How is ur health?

I missed this ff so much. This ff is one of the most fav ff in my list.

Iam glad u updated it. Iam feeling so happy. 😃

Wow wat an amazing chapter. Thank god he cleared it.

Oh no, cliffhanger as usual.😉

He got angry bcoz she accused him.

Poor guys, he cant control himself after that.

Hope she's ok. Cant wait for next chapter continue soon.

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Suspended

Posted: 7 years ago

#233

Originally posted by: SimiSays

Neeraja! 🤗

Thanks a lot, hon!

I am better now, but facing the usual dryness of eyes issue post-lasik. Some days, it gets bad. But I had been willing to complete this story since so long, but had to keep myself away from I-F, because it is too addictive.
I do seldom visit the forum though, but I can't be lying that the show lost me long back and currently I am only a seasonal viewer (read: watching only AvNeil scenes here and there) because I don't feel connected to this 10 years later NK at all.

Btw , I recently sent some gifts for AdiZa, it's there in Real Vision's gift segment part 4, so that made me happy and that's how I stay gripped as far as Aditi and Zain are concerned. They are such good people, it's hard to stay away from them! Hehe 😆

How are you doing?
Hope all's good at your end!

Loads of love ❤️

I thought it was you when I saw the video only! Smitakshi...suvh a unique name! Awesome gesture and great gifts...I love that you sent a lot of stuff for our dear adu as well...varna log zyadatar Zain ko hi pamper karte Hain! Many of us are all in the same boat as you with regard to the show but only because of avneil we are tolerating it! We love them too much ! Please don't strain yourself and update whenever you get the chance! 🤗

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blablabla_mo7

@blablabla_mo7

Voyager

Posted: 7 years ago

#234

Finally updated!! Glad that you're planning to finish despite being unwell. Take your time and get well soon..

You've written the story so well so far and it got gripping... didn't realise it's been a while..welcome back and hope you're better now

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srinithi

@AgnesFan

Sparkler

Posted: 7 years ago

#235

O God simi . How I had been missing this story !

Welcome back 🤗How are you ? Is your eyes better ?

How much more heart attacks are ready in store for Neil We can't blame him too. Comparison with Ashish and accusing him to be infedil that too by his wife was the last nail in coffin for him . I expected this to happen . He was so lost in the moment that he forgot of Avni's condition . Poor man ! he was trying hard to put up this act and yet again he is getting another biggest heart attack of life ! I am more desperate to read what will happen

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Janeavneil

@Janeavneil

Explorer

+ 3

Posted: 7 years ago

#236

Wow,what a pleasant surprise, have been waiting for this update for ages,finally u came back, so happy to know that, how is your health now?teek ho na tum ,thanks a ton for the update

Edited by Janeavneil - 7 years ago

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Shaiksafia

@Shaiksafia

Dazzler

Posted: 7 years ago

#237

Welcome back simi it's so awesome to finally get update on this FF it's an amazing story , I hope you are feeling better take care

Much love
Safia

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HighOnSarcasm

@HighOnSarcasm

Dazzler

Posted: 7 years ago

#238

Hey, welcome back! Hope you are doing well now.

So Neil finally lost control on his emotions & revealed their truth to Avni...but that was bound to happen coz if anyone can make Mr.Cool Cop Khanna lose his head, itz his dear Wifey!

Her cruel words & unjust accusations snapped Neilz heart & he literally bared his soul in front of her.

I just hope & pray that he doesn't lose her but this time get his Avni back!

Edited by paayaal - 7 years ago

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docritu99

@docritu99

Sparkler

+ 6

Posted: 7 years ago

#239

Hey Simi,
I am so glad that u are back, and how.!!!!

That was such an impacful chapter, heated confrintation, full on angst and emotions.! Just the way we wanted it to be.!

Neil never looses his cool so easily, so yeah those bitter words were required from Avni, to break off the facade from Neil's side. Wow, very well written piece this was.!

I can sense this to be the "darkest night" just before the "dawn". I think Avni will get back her memory soon, maybe after she just wake up in hospital.! I may be wrong though, just a wishful thinking.! Lets see what u have in store for us.!

Can i just say, u are one of my Most Favourite writer, whose updates, i look forward too.! Simply because u bring the life to a written piece and how, by just some simple yet impactful words.! Man, i am in love with ur writing.!

Give us the next update soon.! Dont let us hang in that cliffhanger for too long.

Love
Riya