#2 Mr IRRESISTABLE Khanna : AvNeil Different Shades Series! - Page 2

Originally posted by: avneil2

Awesome os.thank u so much for showing women also have this type of feeling.😉desperate avni and irresistable Neil.😳its so hot.i loved it.do write more shade.iam in love with ur series.this one was treat to read.aapne Neil Ko eye candy banathi.☺️

Aww such an awesome comment.!
Women are also human. And feelings to feelings hoti hai.
Genrally Men are very much expressive and vocal about such feelings and desires and women try to hide. Thats y i made it like a role reversal.

Thank u for ur so aweaome words of appreciation.
Much appreciated.!

Neil to sach me Eye candy hai ⭐️

Originally posted by: neeraja91

Absolutely love it! Can't wait to read more.

Thank u so very much..!
Keep reading and commenting.!

Originally posted by: paayaal

Loved loved loved it!

Neil proved to be too haanikarak for his wife's peace of mind😆😆

& wow what a kiss😳

You can continue writing such scenes and in much more detail without any hesitation😉

Waiting for the next part😃

Thank u Thank u Thank u so much..
Socho bina kuch kie itna Hanikarak hai to jab kuch karega to kya hoga. 😳

Ohh thank u so much.
Means a lot to me.
Will definately try my hand in such peices more.!

Originally posted by: AgnesFan

Haanikarak😆

This was fantabulous . Great relief from what is going on in the show . Loved it to bits . I wish we could have got Avni's POV in show too . You owe Neil's POV😳sorry for demanding .

The kiss😳I never felt it as a make out session . It was more like I myself craved for Avni and Neil to have it .

Neil definitely and undoubtedly is IRRESISTIBLE !

I knew thay was coming in my way.
Even when i was writing, i itched to write Neil's reaction but then reminded myself that Its Avni's POV and i have to focus there.
Maybe some other time but i'l surely think about writing Neil's POV too.!

Bold - coming that from a reader means a lot to me.

Thank u so very much for such awesome comment.
Keep reading and keep droping such long comments for me. 😉

Originally posted by: Afsana103

Your ff are Irresistible now it's awesome keep writing more

Aww thats so sweet of u.!
Thank u so much.!

Originally posted by: sweta2005

awesomeee lovely too good

Thank u dear.!
Keep reading and enjoying.!

Originally posted by: RomComFan

Loved the swriesvand thus story, esp teasing Tillu and Avni making the moves. Terrific job, can't wait for more

Thank u so much buddy.!
Means a lot to me.
Keep reading and njoying.!

Originally posted by: nlisa

You shouldn't be nervous! This was really well done! I want to see a continuation of this! Maybe that's the. Next shade of ACP Khanna.

Aww thank u so much dear.!
Much appreciated.!
Yeah the continuation is another shade which is already posted.!
Keep reading.!

Originally posted by: Avni_reddy

It was beautiful :) no lust was seen dear it was pure love btwn dem so it wasn't cringy at all...and as far as Avneil are concerned any kind of scenes don't look lustful they are always seen as love filled one... And yeah indeed Neil and Zain are both irresistible !! **wink**

Yayy.!! That was such a relief to hear that.!

The last line though 😆 no doubt about it.!
Thank u so much for ur valuable response.
Keep reading.!

Originally posted by: taarey25

amazing series👏

Thank u so much. 😊 😊