Avneil -a thousand year of love and wait part 3(updated7/11/17) page 3

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Doc.Dreamer

@tasnimrayian

Voyager

Posted: 7 years ago

Good mornig,people.I am writing a fiction on Avneil.And it's partly different form the show as I am starting it from the Rang mahal mission being successful.

Here I am commencing the promo or trailer whatever you say.Hope you like it and let me know I should continue it or not.

AVNEIL-A THOUSAND YEARS OF WAIT AND LOVE

Neil P.O.V-

Its been 2month that I am still searching Avni like crazy.She has not been found after the day.I curse the day!! How failed and useless police man I am!! I couldn't save my wife form the wrath of few peole whom I am trained to beat always.I wish I could turn back the time and go back to you.Where are you?I have no effort left to find you.I cant live this burdened life.

From the last two month ,its just you whom I have been searching for.I haven't taken up any other case.Come back to me,Avni...Wont you come?

Avni,please come back for me,please..please.

P.O.V ends

Somewhere in a kind of palace-

Everything is so beautifully lighten up.Lights,flowers everything is being decorated in a festive way.The palace is nothing sort of a beautious garden.Durga Puja is going on and that is why it is so chirpy and lifghty.In Australia,Durga Puja isnt celebrted still the peole of this palace celebrate this in a grand way like anyone could have ever imagined.

A LADY enters.She is wearing a red bengali Saari and with all her marital ornament and looking like a goddess,she is appearing to be the owner of the palace.She calls out her servant-

"Have you given her todays dose?"

"No,mam",the person standing in front of her was shivering out of nothing.

She shouts,"DUGGA!!!! DUGGA!!GOOO..AND DO IT RIGHT NOW"

The person rushed to the upper floor of the palace.He went left,right then right then U tern and at last a room appeared.He opened the door.

The room is very neat and clean but lacks enough light.Still it is well decorated room with nothing but a bed and a chair and a big table where a big box is kept.There is also another thing in the room.Actually not thing,it is a life.A girl lying in the middle of the room in the bed.She is sleeping.Such a tired and lifeless body it was!!It was looking like every day one inch blood is getting away from her body.Her eyes were so fatigue and swelled too much.It had black spots around her eyes.Hearing the door sound,she kind of got scared.She opened her eyes.And saw The man she sees everyday in front of her eyes.

The person went tothe table and opened the box.She brought out two injections.And walked to the bed.

The girl knew what was going to happen with her.She knew she doesn't have the strength to stop him still tries to move a little.

"Please don't do this...Please...please..I beg you..." Before she could say more,the perosn injected her left hand with one injection of seductive medicine and the other hand was engulfed in a drug fillled injection.She again went into her effortless sleep.This is what is happening to her since past two months.

The person after giving twoinjections,covered her body with a blanket and went away.

The girl was in subconscious mood.She remembered all her past moments.

Suddnely a weak sound echoed in the room,"I HATE YOU NEIL..I HATE YOU "

PROMO ENDS HERE...

So,yes I know you ppl have guessed out that the girl is Avni and she hates neil.And obviously there is a strong reaosn.I hope you guyz will wait for my next update...till then enjoy it!!!

RAYIAN

I dont know how did the font got so big..sorry for the inconvenience.I am still at this things

Part 1-http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=4916120&TPN=2

Edited by tasnimrayian - 7 years ago

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docritu99

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Posted: 7 years ago

Sounds Intresting..!!
Avni hates Neil, now thats a shocker.!
I just have a little request plz dont take ages to update😆
Nice story, Looking forward.!

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Doc.Dreamer

@tasnimrayian

Voyager

Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: docritu99
Sounds Intresting..!!
Avni hates Neil, now thats a shocker.!
I just have a little request plz dont take ages to update😆
Nice story, Looking forward.!

Thanx and there are many aspect in the story...will be back in a day inshallah😊

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Asr_Kkg122

@Asr_Kkg122

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Posted: 7 years ago

Interesting 😊 Continue soon looking forward to reading it 😊

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AvNeil123

@AvNeil123

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Posted: 7 years ago

DIfferent concept, looking forward to it

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Chocolatebond

@Chocolatebond

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Posted: 7 years ago

It's really good and interesting just a request please don't make Avni's character weak or as a rape victim that doesn't suit her she is a bold courageous like a tigress she never gives up I don't want to see her weak and scared emotionally or physically her bold trait is something that I really feel inspired from Avni's character

Edited by Afsana103 - 7 years ago

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Doc.Dreamer

@tasnimrayian

Voyager

Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: Afsana103
It's really good and interesting just a request please don't make Avni's character weak or as a rape victim that doesn't suit her she is a bold courageous like a tigress she never gives up I don't want to see her weak and scared emotionally or physically her bold trait is something that I really feel inspired from Avni's character

Dont worry she wont be physically rape victim.its just the concept of her bondage situation right now

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Chocolatebond

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Posted: 7 years ago

Thank you waiting eagerly for update

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Doc.Dreamer

@tasnimrayian

Voyager

Posted: 7 years ago

SO HERE I AM PRESENTING THE FIRST PART

The person being gone,The girl tried to wake up but in vain.She didnt give up.She kept on trying.Finally she lifted her head a little from the bed but suddenly everything started spinning in front of her eyes.She couldn't hold the weight of her tiny head and needed a support.She started searching anything in near to grab.Her hand was like rummaging in the air and in a time, she hit her hand with the corner of the table beside the bed she was lying. It had a sound but no pain.Maybe,it is a positive side of getting drugs.One doesnt feel the physical much due to its effect-she was consoling in her mind.She wasnt happy that she didn't get hurt.

Just when she pushed her hand to herself, she hit her hand with a glass kept in the table and it hitted so hardly that it ended up creating a hole in hand.Yess!!!!! Finally blood came out and she could feel the pain.She was happy in mind to be the only in this whole world being happy in pain.She had the joy of feeling her pain which overshadowed the seductive drugs.It was not a pinned blood,it started flowing systematically-first in a thin line and now it is drenching the bed.She neither had the courage to shout for help nor did have the wish to do it.She never was scared at her injury.SHE is not that type of girl to cry over such a small thing.How brave she is! !!

Actually how brutal I am!!!!!!!----she said to herself.

.The head spinning got more severe and she collapsed on the bed finally.Blood was oozing from her hand.She was unconscious not because of it but the drug was powerful which has made her so vulnerable to This beatiful ife,To herself, To her own body,To her mind,To her strength.

She started laughing very sarcastically,bold enough to keep her eyes open overcoming the extreme drowsiness."I am Avni ayesha who has never bow down before anyone.Even at a small age,I had the gut to stand against my grandmother.She resembles all the bad things of this society.I was never reluctant to give it back to the one who appeared to be the hindrance of creating my existence.I stood against all odds alone in my life.Not that I was alwasy winner.But I was the one who never even thought of giving up.All my life, I just had received deceit or betrayal.My father never kept her promise to give me his name.AND Another perosn in my -my husband who happened to be most cruel,liar and a spineless bimboo that I have ever seen. NEIL!!!!!"

She clutched the bedsheet with utmost hatred and anger. Blood oozed more from it.She couldn't handle it. "AHHH!!! You bloody hand!!!"Avni shouted very weak.

"Why an I feeling so hurt?Noo...I am not sad.Its far way better living here rather living with that Neil Khanna...yeah,it is better..better", she echoed the lines many times but it didnt make any sense.

IS IT REALLY BETTER TO LIVE HERE?---she wondered.

Getting two dose of drugs every day,she was getting killed.Her body was getting so poisonous that it could kill other perosn also.She was being tortured like hell.Drugs were so painful causing severe stomach pain.She didnt have the strength to cry over her pain at all.How ironic life could be to her. The blood couldn't let her think anymore.She dozed off in a crying state.

After two hours,Thr Durga puja being over, the person again came to see her,actually to check her.He entered and saw Avni lying with a bloodied hand.And it looked very scary.He rushed downstair and called,"Panditji,She..."

The lady turned to him.It was Ragini Pandit.She yelled,"What she???What happnee?"

The person was so terrified still managed to say" She is injured,panditji.Her hand is bleeding.I dont know how all this happened.RM just pushed him and rushed the room,made her men lift Avni and took to hospital.It was done very quickly.

Avni was bandaged and nothing serious happend except one thing.The doctor approached to RM and wanted to have a private talk-----

"I want to share a very important news about the patient.She is actuely a drug addicted and her lung and stomach condition is very poor.If taken one more another dose,she can fall prey to her death."

RM was hell angry." Who asked you to do the blood test" She shouted.

The doctor smartly answered,"It is our duty to do so" "Keep your duty to yourself and we will look after It",Rm snapped at The doctor.

She came back at the palace.When her servant came,she slapped him."How dare you to keep broken glass in the room.She isnt supposed to die so soon.If her husband doesn't see her dying in front of his eyes Then how will i enjoy my revenge?He has killed my soon in second but he will get to see her dying every minutes.How enjoyable It is gonna be!!!Now get lost and give her the injections.

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So,guyz.I know it is a short update as I am having exam.So,Avni is having a big misunderstanding and what made her think that will be revealed after a few shots.Till then watch the poor condition of Avni and how Neil Gets her.And yes,as i mentioned in the Promo,Avni is in Australia.Hope you liked it.Me signing off.

Rayian