Avneil -a thousand year of love and wait part 3(updated7/11/17) page 3 - Page 2

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Posted: 7 years ago
#11
Hey dear
It's very interesting
There was a some misunderstanding between AvNeil
She is suffering so much because of that MU
After having physical pain she is thinking about Neil
It's something very big it seems coz she chose to get tortured rather than staying with Neil 😭
Amazing update
Eagerly waiting for next part
And all the best for exams


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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: Zenab78

Hey dear

It's very interesting
There was a some misunderstanding between AvNeil
She is suffering so much because of that MU
After having physical pain she is thinking about Neil
It's something very big it seems coz she chose to get tortured rather than staying with Neil 😭
Amazing update
Eagerly waiting for next part
And all the best for exams


Aww!!!! Thanx tweety for the wishes...inshallah next update will be worth your expectations
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: AgnesFan

So this is a revenge for Vidyut being killed by Neil . But why Avni hates Neil It was so scary to read her hurting herself .


Soon you will get to know it!! And yeah vidyut and avneil MU also😆
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Here is my 2nd part----


Neil searched Avni everywhere he could.He made his best try.Then why couldn't he find her? What lacked in his effort-he wonders all the time.He used to get frustrated at very small things.He felt utmost hatred on himself for not able to accomplish his mission.

Failure in everything you do or try to achieve leads one to self-pity.Thus compassion makes you very vulnerable to your weakness and you start doing silly mistakes loosing all trust on yourself.That was what happening with Neil.He couldn't bear his loss nor he wanted to.An inch bit of hope of finding Avni could enlighten the spark inside him where every step of falling was being proved as a fall kff to him Neil searched Avni everywhere he could.He made his best try.Then why couldn't he find her? What lacked in his effort-he wonders all the time.He used to get frustrated at very small things.He felt utmost hatred on himself for not able accomplish his mission.

Failure in everything you do or try to achieve leads one to self-pity.Thus compassion makes you very vulnerable to your weakness and you start doing silly mistakes loosing all trust on yourself.That was what happening with Neil.He couldn't bear his loss nor he wanted to.An inch bit of hope of finding Avni could enlighten the spark inside him where every step of falling was being proved as a stigma of his police uniform.

From the day he has been searching Avni has conducted many missions to track RM (ragini pandit).He had stirred the whole country wherever it had a slightest chance of her being there with his Avni.He failed everytime.DD had helped him all the way he could.

Neil kind of disowned his family not by words but by actions.He didn't visit them since 2 month.From police starion to his condominiums then again police station.Actually most of his dayb were being Spent in different cities.He had a bigger mission than just sleeping over in his home or gossiping with his family.He didnt care for them in those days at all.

Dark carcled around his eyes proved his so many nights to be spent sleeplessly.He would do many sharp home work on RM and her people.Even if he wanted to sleep,he couldn't.He used to have so many nightmares of Avni.

"WHERE COULD BE SHE?IN WHICH CONDITION THEY HAVE KEPT AVNI?IS SHE FED WELL?"

Neil sobed very miserably at night.Whenever he remembered their sweer memories,he had his fear.He had his fear if his girl is touched by any other man badly.He couldn't have afforded to finish his thought.Before that he collapsed in his anger.His fist had endured so of his anger.that it is also now used to it.

It was 1st November.A new month and a new start of everything.Not actually a new start,its the continuation of the old ones-Neil knew it better.It is the last chance he might have got.DD had brought him a approximate postion of RM.They were not in India and how perfectly they had flew off to abroad was still a question to Neil.They exactly were not sure but the Information said they were having their share market business in Austrialia.

Neil didn't want to be sure of the position.He was ready to do any experiment in his mission.Be it Australia or the northeast corner of the world,he would visit at any cost.He couldn't have had the strength to let go any chance of finding Avni.

Phone beeped.He was waiting for it since morning.

"Sir,Your seat is booked and today afternoon is your flight"-DD immediately said on the other side of phone.

"Thanx,DD" Neil finished his talk in minute.He didnt have time to talk aimlessly.

He started packing and it was all set till afternoon and he successfully reached there in time.

It was a beautiful morning in Melbourne.He just loved it.The first thing he did was checked in a hotel and then got freshen up, started making a call to his team also his mother atleast to inform her that he had reached safely.That was a sweet gesture from Him after so many days.

He nearly at noon sat on his laptop and researched a lot abot sharemarket business.He had done his homework before coming here.Now he touched up the things and also got to some influential company who had done very good in share market. But he didnt find what he wanted.Obviously, he expected no Real nammed company by RM.So he wasn't shocked at all.They might have their underworld coverage and it had to be very confidential.

He didn't bother for lunch and went out.He had to have a talk to the local authorities about his visa related.

After his meeting got finished,he went to a side by Phermacy.He was hungry enough not to avoid the headache.He bought the medicines and started going back and suddenly his eyes got stuck on a thing.


"WHAT IS THIS !!!!! -he wondered.

He saw a receipt of a unanimous perosn who was buying unsafe amout OF drugs.Being a police officer,he better knew the amount of safe drugs.Except the Drugs being added in some life saving medicine,it cant be bought like this.

"Hey mister,who is the buyer?" He asked the shopkeeper pointing at the receipt.

"Well, sir.It should not be your concern."the shop perosn replied rudely.

Okk...yes!!!! He got it.There was an illegal trafficking of drugs in the pharmacy and the real buyers of those drugs seems to be very powerful since it was not easy to befool an Australian authority of health issues.

Though he hadn't gone there for durgs issue,he couldn't let go the incident that just happened .After all,he is a cop.


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In the palace,
Avni was brought back in the room after getting discharged from hospital.She hadn't received durga for 2 days because of hand injury.RM didnt order her men to give that.She was feeling better,maybe thats why.

RM couldn't see Avni getting anyway better.Obviously the dose would be double this time.

"Have you brought it?" RM asked the man who had just returned from the phermacy.

"Yes,panditji.Sorry,it took me a little time as a random person was interrogating the shopkeeper about it? " he replied.

"What do you mean?Who was he?"

"Leave it mam.He was just a curious passer by."

He went to Avni's room.

RM thought that no person in the entire Melbourne had such courage to ask her men about anything.Who could be that person?

A sudden sound broke her thought.It came form the upper room.She rushed there.
"What happened?"

She saw pool of blood around Avni.She was vomiting miserably and everytime she breath,chokes a flow of blood from her mouth.

RM wasn't shocked instead was hell happy.She came near Avni.

"So,darling.How are you feeling?",she said cupping Avni 's mouth.
Avni just jerked her hand.RM was way more than angry.She held Avni 's hair very tightly.It was hurting.

"Give her injection fast", she shouted holding the hair.

It was given quickly.She again went into her sleep.The vomiting stopped but the blood was still flowing.Who bothered!!!

They went out of the room switching offall the lights of the room.


Precap:Neil rescue mission Avni.
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Yes,I finished 2nd part.So,Neil is in Australia now and it is gonan be very interesting how he saves Avni.

Today is my math exam.so please pray for me.And if you like it,hit the like button.Thank you.

Raiyan

Edited by tasnimrayian - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Oh my god,u potray every emotion very well.Iam literally in tears.pls continue soon.all the best for ur maths xam.do well.
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: avneil2

Oh my god,u potray every emotion very well.Iam literally in tears.pls continue soon.all the best for ur maths xam.do well.

Awww...thanx a tonn
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Posted: 7 years ago
#17
Oh god
Avni is suffering badly
Neil please save her asap 😭
Superb update dear
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: Zenab78

Oh god

Avni is suffering badly
Neil please save her asap 😭
Superb update dear

Thank you😳😳 and yeah your words are much appreciative.
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: Tumpa12

sounds interesting
update soon

Will try definitely
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Here is my 3rd part-


Neil had been following the drugs buyer from the start.He had reached to the big palace.But he didn't know what to do or where had he gotten himself into?Was he right about the buyer?Was illegal drug trafficking was happening there?Was any innocent life trapped under the leaps of drug?-thousands of questions were evolving around his head.He had come for Avni and now everything seemed to be the other way happening.How ironic life is!!!

He knew he couldn't have entered the palace with being interrogated or being badly rejected by the securities.Hence,he made all his precautions.He contacted with local AUSTRALIAN cops and Yeah,he didnt forget to inform them about Avni and his reason of coming there.

Well,he didnt care about the security.He just made plan very before entering the palace.He would talk to the owner and that too very peacefully and if not by words,he would handle them by law.A smart yet foolish plan ever!! Maybe he didn't know the real owner of the palace.

How less Neil knew whom he was going to face!!!!!!!

As per plan,they entered there.Neil was allowed to enter because of the Australian cops and if he was proven wrong about his drug suspension,he would have been charged with harassment case.And that would be the worst thing for him to her mission of searching Avni.

"Call your owner.We have important talk with her", Neil asked one of the servant after entering the palace.The owner was informed about their arrival.

Initially she didnt Came out.She was busy in another come.Soon after sometime,she came down.

Neil turned around and he got stuck there.He might not have received such shock in his entire life.It was none other than RAGINI PANDIT.

He whispered "PANDIT!!!!!!"

He didn't know he should be happy or what.He had the person in front of his eyes,whom he had been searching since 2 long month!!!So the informantion was fully correct.They reside in Australia and have their share market business here.That is why he thought why the drugs were so easy to buy for her.
He had mixed emotion in his mind.Maybe,this time he would find her Avni.He was hoping for every kind of safety of Avni.He might have reached to his Avni.Yess!!!!He was close to his heart-his Avnii.

No one in the room had even slightly thought of something just had happened.Neil just rushed to Newly shocked RM and grabed her hair.

"Where is Avni?"Neil shouted at his most.

RM was just more than shocked.She didnt know such would happen.She was stirred like hell.

Just in a mintue,Neil felt a jerk in his hand.
"Mind your body language,Mr.Khanna",the cops ordered him.

Neil didnt bother of the fact that he was misbehaving with a woman.He was just in his sixth mind which has been searching his lady love like a maniac.He couldn't bear the silence of RM.
"Speak up,damn it!!" He again yelled at her.

RM did what she never even thought of doing that.She pushed Neil and made alarming sound from the button of her phone and the roiftop of the room just broke out.It was a shock.Suddenly a rope was thrown to the room and RM was pulled upside through it.Nobody expected something like this.Such a masterplan.She always was prepared for her rescue.And it worked in time.

Her men were ordered to take Avni from the backside of the palace to a isolated place.

Cops ran behind RM as she was fleeing from the rooftop and Neil started going here and there of the palace.He was on the angry zone thatRM didn't tell where Avni was.So he decided to search it all alone.

He,in the process,reached the room and opened.

He coundt belive his own eyes.He had found her Avni.People were trying to take the unconscious Avni.He pushed them all immediately and put out his gun.They ran away seeing the gun.

He turned back and saw Avni in a miserable state.He is seeing her after so many months.He so longed for her.Finally the moment had come.

He saw Avni was looking like a corpse..no life with no wish.He leaned to the bed

"AVNI,wake up dear..the dusk is over..it is the new morning"

No response.He saw her hand bandaged.He was so hurt seeing her In pain.

He picked her up and called for a emergency helicopter with medical equipments.


Precap:Avni back in India.And her hatrd starts showing effect on Neil.



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I know the whole part is very boring and also rushed a lot.Sorry for that.I had work and also the Avni in pain was not acceptable to me also.Now in next update,they will be back in India.Its gonna be new journey for their new love story.

Biding bye

Raiyan




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