Unnamed Feelings : Avni SS (updated Page 3)

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Posted: 7 years ago
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A New Avneil SS. My Diwali gift to all.Hope You will Like it. Next chapter on your response.😛



"No Rhea this is too much." Avni chided her best friend as she applied lip gloss on her lips.
"Nothing is too much. You are looking perfect." Riya said fixing Avnis hair.

"Do you think this Shirt And Skirt are fine?" Avni asked nervously. "Juhi is wearing a short frock."

"Forget her.She is idiot. I mean who wears a Short frock for skating."

"Will Neil Like me?" Avni again voices out her insecurities.

"He does. He just needs a reality check.He needs to See the difference between that juhi and you." Rhea said gritting teeth at mention of Juhi.

"Come on lets go Everyones started." Rhea said taking Avni with her.

/ / / / / / / / / / // // // // // // // //

"Hi Neil." Juhi said skating close to him making him comfortable.

"Hi." He said weakly. The attention he was getting from past one week was above his intelligence. Two weeks of hard labour at his grandma's field and he had formed a great physic and now girls who first ignored him now were walking to and fro to have him as their prom partner which really made him uncomfortable as the women he was close to was His grandma, mom, Rhea and Avni.

The moment he saw her his thoughts came to halt. She was Wearing a crop top and skirtand makeup. Never in his life had he seen the tomboyish Avni wearing Girly clothes and makeup except festives.

He saw Rhea pushing her towards him as Juhi left his side annoyed due to his lack of attention.

"Hi!" He greeted her as they skated along. "Hi" She repiled back matching up with his pace.

They were soon joined By Aman, Avni's younger brother and Neils childhood bestie,DD their common bestie and Ali Neils elder bro with his Girlfriend Rhea.

They soon skated and chatted but what caught up Neils whole attention was Avni, Seeing her in a whole new way stirred something in his heart that even he was unable to name. All these years he thought her to be kind innocent but felt she was Beautiful.


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GumnaamHaiKoii thumbnail
Posted: 7 years ago
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Index


Part one: Page 1
Part two: Page 3
Edited by Radiant_Eyes_ - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
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It is such a cute picture that I imagined on reading this. Do continue :))) And thank you for this lovely diwali gift!
Edited by Bhavsss - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Hey! That was sweet! ❤️

Juhi here too?

Please do update fast. I would like to read more. :)
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: Ashi3

Hey! That was sweet! ❤️


Juhi here too?

Please do update fast. I would like to read more. :)


@Italic Aww...Thank you.

@Bold Yup . Neil jaha jaha rahega juhi ka saaya saath hoga 😆😕
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Thanks Sweetheart 😳
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: docritu99

A different story..!!
Intresting..!
Continue soon..



Thank you. Btw What do I call you Docritu?
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Thanks Yasharan. Am glad you liked it. Tysm.
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Posted: 7 years ago
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It's so cute...
AvNeil college wala romance...
I loved this part...
It's like when Neil was not handsome, everyone including Juhi, ignored him. But not Avni coz she is his tomboyish best friend. But now he is getting every girls attention but his heart is waiting for hers only...
Please do continue...
This is really an awesome Diwali gift for us readers...
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: Kshailja

It's so cute...

AvNeil college wala romance...
I loved this part...
It's like when Neil was not handsome, everyone including Juhi, ignored him. But not Avni coz she is his tomboyish best friend. But now he is getting every girls attention but his heart is waiting for hers only...
Please do continue...
This is really an awesome Diwali gift for us readers...


Thank you so much Shailja . Love ya.

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