Unnamed Feelings : Avni SS (updated Page 3) - Page 2

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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: NarbhiForever..

Amazing start!

Loved it.
Continue asap:)



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Posted: 7 years ago
#12
AMazing start, do update soon
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Posted: 7 years ago
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It was so cute! Ali as Neil's Bhai 😃 Aman as Avni's elder brother 😲 I would have loved if he was younger . Sorry if I had hurt you .
So AvNeil have feeling for each other .
Who is his granny ?
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: AgnesFan

It was so cute! Ali as Neil's Bhai 😃 Aman as Avni's elder brother 😲 I would have loved if he was younger . Sorry if I had hurt you . No its fine. I will see if anything can be done about it.

So AvNeil have feeling for each other .
Who is his granny ? BeBe😎



Thanks Dearie.
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: Tumpa12

interesting
cont soon




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Posted: 7 years ago
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CHAPTER TWO



Avni Sighed as she placed the skates aside and sat on the bench looking at her friends. Time flies so fast. She thought. She still remembers the first time she met them. 10 years ago.


"Hi Raj Hi Shweta Bhabi. Welcome. Please come inside. " I saw my Pa Mr. Ashish Mehta greeting a tall uncle who smiled at me and my Brother amol giving them chocolates. Amol a year younger than me grabbed the chocolates but my six year self was still hesitant but took it when Asha ma introduced them, " Beta this is Raj Uncle and Shweta Aunty. Our family friend Say hello to them."

"Hi Uncle." I said shaking hands with him and soon we striked a good bond in the front porch of house itself.

"Ali Neil what are you two doing inside come out." Shweta Aunty Shouted and One tall curly brown haired boy came out literally dragging another boy with black hairs and a bit younger than him.

"Mom look at him he wasnt ready to come out." Ali Bhai that I fondly call him said annoyed.

"Tillu. Behave." I hear Shweta aunt glare at the boy who had been hiding all while behind her And I really found the name really adorable.Tillu.

"Leave it Bhabhi kids are like that. Let them play here with Avni and Amol." pa said laughing

"Neil come out look who is here." Raj uncle said making the boy peer at me hesistantly he was a handsome boy with brown orbs and a cute lil nose.

"This is Avni and that is Amol" We were introduced and soon left to ourselves as Elders went inside the house.

"Hi. Am Ali." Ali bhai said and "this is my idiot brother..."

"Tillu?" I asked laughing

"Ya." He replied laughing seeing his bros face going all red.

"Hey! Dont call me that." He Said angrily.

"Dont shout at my Didu" Amol said defending me. Aww. While Ali bhai tried to stop the two infernos.

"Then tell your Didu to keep quiet. As if I dont like girls." He spoke rudely.

"And I dont like Rude Boys. Kadoos." I said stomping off .


Rest evening went in blur as I and Ali Bhai played badminton well tried to and Neil and amol patched up and played football.

The Elders who met after long years chatted for hours long while Ali bhai and Amol slept leaving me and Neil alone. I am a girl who loves to talk so I thought why not be the bigger person and make up with him.

"Why you dislike girls?" I ask him sitting beside him near the pond in our garden startling him.

"Because all they do is play with barbies and cry at every single thing." He said rather rudely.

"But ma says Am brave and I didnt even cry when doctor gave me injection. Am so strong And I dont like Barbies I love remote control cars. You can like me." I said innocently.

And then for first time he looked at me and Smiled.

"Friends?" I ask.

"Friends." He said shaking hands.




Pls. Comment.


Amol demoted from elder to younger brother.😆

Edited by Crazy_Saks_ - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
#17
Awesome update
Love it
Flashback is really good
Continue soon
Thanks for pm
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Posted: 7 years ago
#18
Awww this is so cute
She likes remote control and doesn't cry on small things so he likes her or not it was to cute
Loved it dear
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Hii meri saku thx for the diwali gift... ur sami...back with another account. I was missing u a lot..u didn't reply to the pm.. or is it deleted. .. it was so sweet...god juhi...Please throw out juhi..neil ke chipke huye hai..avni...aww..I was imagining avni...ohh god neil's stare. ..I will read the 2nd part now
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Posted: 7 years ago
#20
Wow you kept my words . That was so sweet 😃😳 Love you
Avni is always a Tom boy 😆 Even in show .
Oho ! I could imagine Neil when Avni called him Tillu 😳😳 His big brown eyes . 😳
Update soon.

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