Avneil OS :- I won't let you go part 3 in pg 6 - Page 3

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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: avishimishra

Fabulous chapter. So the reason behind Neil's behavior is exposed. Avneil understanding is too good.Their love for each other is so strong. Neil wants to keep away Avni from danger & Avni wants to share his pain with her.Can u please update one more.because I want to read their conversation & their love for each other.


Thanks a lot dear... I will try for another part
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Nice, continue soon
Please pm when you update :)
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Awesome... Waiting for next update😳😊
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Posted: 7 years ago
#24
Finally, everything gonna sorted out...
AvNeil are made for each other..
They can't live without each other...
Just waiting for everything to clear out...
Update soon..
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Thanks dear 😊
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Originally posted by: anjoriii

Nice, continue soon

Please pm when you update :)


Thanks dear 😊 Will surely pm for the update
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Awesome... Waiting for next update😳😊



Thanks dear😊 Will update the next part soon
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: rinku95

Amazing
Continue soon


Thanks dear 😊 will update soon
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Posted: 7 years ago
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wow
so beautiful
loving this avneil so much
cont soon
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Hi hello friends... Im sorry😭 for updating it too late as I was busy with m Diwali vaccations and some personal works... I started as One Shot but you guys made me to write more... So Im ending this story with four parts... So next part is the final part... Im sorry for not replying to you guys... For everyone a Big thanks for your lovable comments... Happy Reading 😊

PART 3
Neela opens the door and finds Neil standing with pale face and guilty filled eyes... It pained Neela to look at him and she knows that whatever Avni said were true... Neil is never Ashish Mehta...But still leaving Avni in the marriage altar brought back when Ashish Mehta left Ayesha.. Neil wasnt able to meet Neela's eyes because he was feeling guilty.. He have broke his promise.. he have broke her heart but he needs her... Neil starts Neelama..".. Neela stops him by showing her hand and said "No nned explanation Neil... Ur explanation will not erase all those things. I thought I made a right decision by giving my daughter in your hands but today you proved me wrong..Again you made her face the thing which her mom faced due to Ashish Mehta.."... Neil was beyond shocked when he heared these words from Neela... He felt like a bucket of ice was poured on him.. He freezed.. Has he done the same thing what Ashish Mehta done??? Did he make his Avni to suffer like her mom Ayesha??No.. he is not Ashish Mehta and Avni is not Ayesha.. He wont leave her and he loves her too much... Neil's eyes starts to flow with water and he looks at Neela and says "Neelama... I know I have done mistake but that doesnt make that Im Ashish Mehta.. Im not Ashish Mehta nor Avni is Ayesha.. Im Neil Khanna and she is Avni Ayesha Neil Khanna.. My love My life... Please Neelama give me a chance I will solve everything.. I want to meet Avni.. Please I will make everything fine... Please.. ".. Before Neela answers it they hear a voice saying"Im making everything fyn Mr.Neil Khanna".. Neil looks at her and says "Avni"...
There was silence in the room... Everyone are present in Neela's house.. Bebe, Prakash, Swetha, Juhi, Ali , Neil, Neela , Nanno and Avni... Neil was constantly looking at Avni but Anvi ignoredd him which hurted him most... Avni looks at everyone and then at Juhi.. None understand whats in Avni's mind..Avni walks towards Bebe and kneels down,she helds Bebe's hand and smiles at her,Avni says "Bebe,Your the most beaautiful person whom I met.. I always longed for a happy family Bebe... My own grandmother wanted to kill me but you made me to realise what is love and care... Thanks Bebe..thanks for being with me always.."Avni says with tears filled eyes and Bebe gently kissed her forehead and says "Avni.. I have never met someone who is so beautiful from heart.. You always make me wonder whether ur a girl or an angel to our family... Avni smiles and then next moves to her favourite person Prakash Khanna... Avni says "Papa.. Im really luck to have you... I always wonder why wasnt my papa was like you..I always yearned for papa's love but I thought God will not provide it but then I got you.. You always stood like a pillar for me papaji...Thanks for ur love papa"... Prakash gently stroked her hair and says "Avni beta..Ur always my sweet daughter.. I never thought you like my bahu.. when Neil married you I wanted to be your papa because I longed for a daughter and I got you beta who is so pure by heart.. whatever happenes I will be your side and love you beta.."Avni hugs him... Everyone loved their bond and had tears in their eyes... Avni then moves towards Shwetha and calls her Mummyji but Shwetha hugged Avni and cries... Shwetha says "Im sorry Avni beta for hurting you many times.. I never undestood your importance nor ur character..When I wholeheartedl accepted you but things are not falling in right place beta... Because of me you suffered a lot Avni please forgive me Avni..."Shwetha cries holding Avnis hand..Avni rubs her tears and says "Mummji please.. I dont like tears in ur eyes.. Always keep smiling please.. for me??".. Shwetha smiles and hugs her... Neil looks at his Avni and his family's bonding and smiles... Neela looka at her daughter who have gained love and care from them.. Ali smiles at them and wishes to provie happiness in his friend's life... Juhi looks at everyones bonding with Avni and then looks at Neil who waas watching his wife without blinking.. Juhi thinks she can never be Avni nor she cant never fill her place in this family...
Avni walks towards Neil and stands before him... Neil looks at her with tears filled eyes but still his eyes provide the love to her ...Avni have a cold expression and says "Neil I dont know how to thank you for the help you done to me.. I married you b betraying but still you helped me in everything... Because of you I got love and care from the family.. you stood with me in all my odds.. Thanks for it Neil...I know because of this relation I cant able to give you happiness you deserve..So I will free you from this relation Neil...".. Neil was confused by her talk and ask "what does that mean Avni???"...Avni closes her ees and takes a deep breathe and says "You have to live with ur daughter Neil so lets divorce so that you can live happily with ur love and ur daughter.."... Everyone were shocked to the core hearing it...Neil was standing in a shock he walks towards her... Neil says "Avni... Did you say that you want me to go away fom me?? ARe you serious?? I know that I made a mistake but please dont kill me with this punishment... You know that I love you more than myself.. How can you say like that??? Please Avni give me a chance I will solve it but dont leave me.. I cant live without ou.. Avni I love you so much I cant able to think a life without you.. Please undrstand me..."... Avni wipes her tears and says "Neil Please understand.. you have a daughter I dont want another Avni Ayesha to come.. For my happiness I cant able to make that child to suffer.. Please free from this relation and leave me.."... Neil shouts "Avni... YOU CANT LEAVE ME I LOVE yOU I will DIe without YOU"... Everyone were watching them with tears and doesnt know what to say... Avni removes her ring which Neil made her wear after confessing their love.. Neil breaks down looking at that.. It pained everyone to watch them... Avni rubs her tears and walks towards Juhi... Juhi was shaking her head but Avni places the ring in her hand but Juhi shouts"Its not Neil's bachi"...

So friends comment your views... I will update the next part soon...

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