Avneil OS :- I won't let you go part 3 in pg 6

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Hi hello friends... After seeing the olvs and spoilers my mind is running out with different stories... So it's a one shot regarding the olvs... Happy Reading :)
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Avni looked at herself in the mirror... Her eyes are red with tears flowing continuously from her eyes... She looks at the ring in her finger and remembers how Neil left without completing the rituals in the wedding... She remembers her Ayesha ma's face when her father Ashish Mehta didn't show up... Does the history is repeating...No it can't it shouldn't... Neil is not Ashish and either I'm not Ayesha ma or Neela ma... I'm Avni.. I'm Avni Neil Khanna... She looks at the pics in their room... And she can hear everyone banging the door... Yes it's been a long time since I'm inside here alone...
She looks at her wedding dress... She is thinking about how much she felt happy but now y??? Y does she always suffer??? Anger raised in her and she breaks the mirror... Everyone outside are terrified hearing the sound... Neelama shouts "Avni.. bachha please open the door.. please"... Avni shouts " y?? Y it's always me?? What mistake I have done?? Is loving someone is a mistake?? All I wanted was a complete family to live with.. am I bad that loving me is a sin? Y does God made me meet him?? Y does he made me marry him?? Y does Neil wasn't like Ashish Mehta?? Y does I fell in love with him?? And y does again the past in ruining my happiness?? As DM said I'm sinful... I shouldn't get love?? I don't deserve anyone!!".. Avni drops down in the floor and cries aloud... Hearing these everyone's heart pained... Shwetha" Avni please once listen to me?? Please open the door we can talk beta?"... Everyone were asking her to open the door but Avni doesn't want to... "Please... Not anymore.. I'm also a human with all kinds of emotion... I'm not a machine to restrain it... It's paining a lot... Enough of it... Let me complete it... Avni is going away from all of you"... Everyone are shocked to hear it... Neelama cries and says " Avni is this you?? Please don't do anything stupid!! I'm there for you beta... Please listen to me"... But no response from otherside.. Fear was found in their faces.. they started to bang thee door and calls out for Avni...
Neil enters the house to apologize for his behaviour... He knows that he hurted everyone mainly his Avni... He shouldn't have done like that but circumstances made him like that... But he hears everyone's panic voice calling out for Avni and banging the door... He instantly ran towards their room and finds everyone worriedly calling out Avni's name.
. He runs their and ask everyone what happened but everyone are looking at him with extreme anger... Neelama"Avni... Please don't do anything stupid... I'm here for you... Will be always please open the door"... No response... Neil was feeling worried hearing Neelama's words... Does his Avni ??? No... He started to break the door and he succeeded...
Everyone are shocked to find Avni lying unconscious with her hands full of blood.. Neil's heart stopped at once... His ignorance his stupidity made Avni like this... He ran towards her and patted her cheeks to wake her up... His eyes are flowing with tears... He finds the mirror broken but he can understand it's not mirror it's Avni's heart... He broke her heart... Avni opened her eyes and everyone were relieved...
Neil smiles with tears in his eyes and says "Avni please forgive me... I didn't mean to do these things.. please... Jus give a chance I can solve everything...but I want you with me... Don't leave me... I can't able to live without you"... Avni looks at him and says " I don't want to live with you anymore"...

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Hey very well written... do continue atlest another shot... update soon
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Nice shot dear...😃
Though u want a happy end for avneil...I likes it..😳
Keep writing more...
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: AvNeil_TV

Hey very well written... do continue atlest another shot... update soon


Thanks dear... Will try to write another part..
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: ...san...

Nice shot dear...😃

Though u want a happy end for avneil...I likes it..😳
Keep writing more...


Thanks dear... I too want Avneil together but sometimes Neil needs to know that in this Juhi case he will lose Avni
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Posted: 8 years ago
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IT is awsme one short.in serial Avni should be like this.poor girl always suffers for love.please continue it.I want to read Neil's condition after Avni's denial
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Nice one
Plz write next part of it
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Nice peice dear
Do write more
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Posted: 8 years ago
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wow beautifully written👏... so realistic with the show😳..
pls continue
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Originally posted by: avishimishra

IT is awsme one short.in serial Avni should be like this.poor girl always suffers for love.please continue it.I want to read Neil's condition after Avni's denial

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Thanks dear... I'm will try to update the next part soon...

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