RS:A double drabble: (26-09-17) :New Beginnings - Page 3

its amazing do continue soon please

Originally posted by: Deepti_98

Wow Sanju this is such an amazing RS!
It was really heart touching!
They understand each other without words, perfectly explained 👏
I loved forehead kiss, it was beautiful ❤️
Your RS are a treat to read
Keep writing:)

Originally posted by: rinku95

its amazing do continue soon please

Originally posted by: vu1998

Thank you Sami... And I am personally gonna kill the editors if they edited it..

Originally posted by: ...san...

Thank-you Sam...😃

I will checkout them soon.my birthday...told u already..😉

sanju baby i just love it when u write too many rs...i know i have few more to read and i will and hopefully comment on the other rs which i need read and u will get my comment for all of them soon...loved how shweta hugged avni as i thought she would only hug juhi and just like the others even i was shocked... loved the way avni was lost in her thoughts thinking about what happened at the rang mehal... loved how neil hugged avni tightly at that moment she only needed him and when they broke the hug and how avni placed her hand on his face just to feel him that moment and loved how neil said to avni " we will be back home wifey away from all this , soon i promise "... avni came out of her trance when she heard neil... loved how neil understands avni and knew she was thinking about something loved it when avni said "toh yeh bhi bataoo ke kya soch rahi hu mai and the way neil answered her saying "yaha batke yu muskara rahi ho toh zahir si baath hain ke mere baare mein soch rahi ho and with that both burst out laughing... Loved how neil told avni that juhi decided to leave as he told her about him and avni and she was happy for them and how she told neil that she would call avni... When avni replied "hmm loved how neil was caressing her hand... Loved how they both were leaning against the headboard looking outside the window...aww loved the way neil head was on avni shoulder with his hands wrapped around her while avni hand in his hair and how she tried to get up seen shweta but neil positioned himself properly on her shoulder pouting in his sleep...and was happy that shweta witnessed all of this... I actually loved the convo between shweta and avni and see even in the show they showed shweta accepting avni just like in ur rs... awesome rs sanju baby and I promise to comment on the other rs soon love from your shona

Originally posted by: Raina_Malik

simply awesome so peaceful 👏

Originally posted by: preya_radev

sanju baby i just love it when u write too many rs...i know i have few more to read and i will and hopefully comment on the other rs which i need read and u will get my comment for all of them soon...loved how shweta hugged avni as i thought she would only hug juhi and just like the others even i was shocked... loved the way avni was lost in her thoughts thinking about what happened at the rang mehal... loved how neil hugged avni tightly at that moment she only needed him and when they broke the hug and how avni placed her hand on his face just to feel him that moment and loved how neil said to avni " we will be back home wifey away from all this , soon i promise "... avni came out of her trance when she heard neil... loved how neil understands avni and knew she was thinking about something loved it when avni said "toh yeh bhi bataoo ke kya soch rahi hu mai and the way neil answered her saying "yaha batke yu muskara rahi ho toh zahir si baath hain ke mere baare mein soch rahi ho and with that both burst out laughing... Loved how neil told avni that juhi decided to leave as he told her about him and avni and she was happy for them and how she told neil that she would call avni... When avni replied "hmm loved how neil was caressing her hand... Loved how they both were leaning against the headboard looking outside the window...aww loved the way neil head was on avni shoulder with his hands wrapped around her while avni hand in his hair and how she tried to get up seen shweta but neil positioned himself properly on her shoulder pouting in his sleep...and was happy that shweta witnessed all of this... I actually loved the convo between shweta and avni and see even in the show they showed shweta accepting avni just like in ur rs... awesome rs sanju baby and I promise to comment on the other rs soon love from your shona

Awesome update

Originally posted by: plmzaq

Awesome update

Love it

Beautifully written

Continue soon