The Unforgettable Memory:ff (part 3)updated

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Sorry guys for my late update.i had got busy with studies but i hope u enjoy the avneil scenes.'

She drove to the place which Ali had mentioned in the paper. There was no one to be seen there.It was all dark and suddenly someone tapped on her shoulder. She turned around and saw Neel who was looking so handsome in that darkness that his scent and appearence made Avni feel queesy.He gave Avni a gift and asked her to change. By the time Avni got changed Neel had lit up the place which was decorated with flowers and candles. Neel looked at Avni. He felt that everytime there eyes had met he had lost his concious. He felt that her eyes were as beautiful as a bright star contained he depth of ocean.He just wanted to stare Avni for the rest of his life.Avni spoke with zeal in her tone."Tillu ji kya main itni hot lag rahi hun ". "Bas wifey itni sundar ki meri nazrein tumse hat nahi rahi" neel said with course in his voice which made Avni blush profusely.Neel bent down to his knees and held out his hand for Avni. She held Neel's hand. Neel stood up and kissed her soft hands gently.There bodies swayed with music. She had forgot all the misery and pain in her life looking at him. She could feel a cold wave flow down her spine as he pulled her closer.They closed there eyes as there lips met.They kept kissing as there fingers explored each other. Neel cupped Avni's face.The kiss seemed to go on forever.They both were transported to another world where thay were only there and with them was there happiness without any problems. They finally parted as Avni started panting.He tucked her hair behind her ear and said,"I love u Avni Ayesha Neel Khanna.U r the most beautiful wifey of the world.".Avni too confessed her love too as passion filled the air.They both held hands and went back home.

precap: Avni surprises Neel.

Do comment. Suggestions are welcome.


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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: sugar_candy15

Sorry guys for my late update.i had got busy with studies but i hope u enjoy the avneil scenes.'

She drove to the place which Ali had mentioned in the paper. There was no one to be seen there.It was all dark and suddenly someone tapped on her shoulder. She turned around and saw Neel who was looking so handsome in that darkness that his scent and appearence made Avni feel queesy.He gave Avni a gift and asked her to change. By the time Avni got changed Neel had lit up the place which was decorated with flowers and candles. Neel looked at Avni. He felt that everytime there eyes had met he had lost his concious. He felt that her eyes were as beautiful as a bright star contained he depth of ocean.He just wanted to stare Avni for the rest of his life.Avni spoke with zeal in her tone."Tillu ji kya main itni hot lag rahi hun ". "Bas wifey itni sundar ki meri nazrein tumse hat nahi rahi" neel said with course in his voice which made Avni blush profusely.Neel bent down to his knees and held out his hand for Avni. She held Neel's hand.Neel stood up and kissed her soft hands gently.There bodies swayed with music. She had forgot all the misery and pain in her life looking at him. She could feel a cold wave flow down her spine as he pulled her closer.They closed there eyes as there lips met.They kept kissing as there fingers explored each other. Neel cupped Avni's face.The kiss seemed to go on forever.They both were transported to another world where thay were only there and with them was there happiness without any problems. They finally parted as Avni started panting.He tucked her hair behind her ear and said,"I love u Avni Ayesha Neel Khanna.U r the most beautiful wifey of the world.".Avni too confessed her love too as passion filled the air.They both held hands and went back home.

precap: Avni surprises Neel.

Do comment. Suggestions are welcome.





Do post this on wattpad and telly updates. Message me on wattpad, my username is SamilovesAvNeil there. And on telly updates - Sweetgirl7
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Nice update
They confessed their love and kissed
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Nice update...
Finally confession... Loved it...
Update soon..
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Posted: 8 years ago
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This story is amazing sis! 😃 Please do send PM when ever you give update.

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