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Sanvee_R

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Posted: 7 years ago

hello guys..this is me sanju .sorry..due to few issues..i created a new account...

so..i'm removing the previous links...trying to post those here...

so this is RS1...story so far..but i lost 4 most beautiful chapters #4 series and #5..

(those were related to confesssion part...also tiger if u remember...)

will continue this story here...

Edited by ...SA... - 7 years ago

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Sanvee_R

@Sanvee0812

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Posted: 7 years ago

it's been 3 months since their marriage .She never imagined that things could turn this way. She did it. She achieved her mission . Dayawanti Mehta was behind the bars .and who helped avni...Rhea. ...it came as a shock. but yes ..it was rhea who gave solid proofs for all crimes of dayawanti at the last moment.. when they lost all the evidence they had...because of amol.

Many things changed ..like reha and avni's bond ...they became great friends. There were some visible nazdeekiyan' between ali and rhea. And neil ...he helped her the most. He was there with her ..supporting her since the day he got to know complete truth. they were staying in neil's apartment. Shweta never accepted her as her DIL...but neela wanted them to give a chance to this relationship...even prakashji thought the same. Avni started a new small business and was doing pretty well in it.she and nei have been very clear about their relationship ...they just thought they were...not sure about it. They are just friends...and will fake this relationship few more days before filing for divorce..Neel told avni about the pandit being fake at the very beginning . They became good friends lately .if these are the things that changed...topping the list of things that didn't is amol. She is still blinded by ...by something nvm...and wants to ruin avni even after knowing that she is his sister .

It's one of those most common tiring days...and neither of them wanted to cook.

A: aaj tumharaturn hai na neel

N: acha kal khaana kisne banaya tha?

A: oh hello...i made rotis yesterday..

N: I made the curry..

A: I made the salad.

N:salad toh koi bhi banasakta hai...flat no:901 mein jo baby hai na woh bhi banasakti hai..

A: baby kon?

N:arey woh 5 saal ki bachi hai na..kal lift mein mili thi hume...who..

A: oh..

N:kyu tumne kya socha?

A: kuch nahi...kyu

N:I thought u were jealous.😉

Avni's eyes just popped out ..her heart saying...tumhe kaise pata chala...but in a reflex she said mai kyu jaungi...defeding herself she continued...kuch khana banaye..i'm hungry..

N: maggi?

A:perrfectt..

A:mujeh soupy wali Maggie chahiye..

N:nahi dry maggi banegi..

A:no ..i want soupy Maggie..

N:toh kudh banalo...

A: fine...maggie ...let's see kiski maggi zyada tasty banegi

They start making maggi...and avni finishes first . she added too much of water in it and it tasted aweful...but she didn't say that..neil also finished cooking and it was tasting time..

A: ab taste karte hai..

N:ek min ek min...kudh ko judge karogi kya?let's exchange...agar u liked my maggi u can eat it completely...and viceversa..ok?

A: r u sure?

N: haa..ya..kyu?koi problem hai?

A:mujeh kya problem hogi...(problem toh tumhe hogi)

N:ok start...and tastes soupy maggi...

A: yummm...ye best maggi hai...

N:par yeh nahi hai...(yuck)...

A:🤣

N:mujeh meri maggi wapas do...abhi..

A: Mr.Neil...aapko yaad nahi hai?...aap ne abhi abhi kaha ki if I like your maggi...I can eat it completely...so ye ab meri maggi hui.

N:not fair yaar avnii

And he tries to eat that soupy maggi making faces...

A:acha theek hai...she get's another bowl and shares maggi with him..

N:thanks...dekha so finally my maggi is better...

A:ha...toh isse kya decide karenge hum?

N:kya decide karenge?

A: ki khana har roz tum hi banoge...

...

They sit on the opposite counters In the kitchen...

Avni sits with her legs crossed on the counter top...and neil tries to copy her but fails with his head hitting to the shelf above his head...and the sight leaves avni in uncontrollable laughter..

N:haan thaak hai...ab iss pe inta bhi kya hasogi?

And they continued talking about their day..work..and their most favourite topic...when to tell everybody about their divorce...

he just came back from work and she was sitting near the window .They thought of making that area near bay window a bit comfortable and so got some customized mattress and pillows for it. after all it was wide enough for three people to sit and had an amazing view. she was sipping onto her coffee and reading a book. she saw him at the door and gave a warm smile.

A: hi

N: hello madam..

he said walking towards her after leaving his shoes near the rack...

A: baito...how was your day?

N: hectic yaar...jo case main handle karraha tha na usse lekar bahut badi problem hogai...jo eye witness tha woh ek accident mein mar gaya aaj...and i'm sure ye accident nahi hai...

A: oh...acha relax ok...abhi tode der keliye kaam ko chodo..coffee lau tumhare liye?

N: ya...i'll take a showe n be back

...

he came out of the washroom and noticed she was humming that tune again...he thought of asking her about it...it wasn't new...it was her daily routine..and he was curious to know about that song..

avni turn's back and says" ye lo coffee" and goes back towaards the window...

N: ye konsa song hai?

A: kya?

N:jo tum har raat humm karti rehti ho woh..

A: lori hai...iss lori se bahut yaadein judi hai...mere mumma k...pata nahi..automatically hum karne lagti hu...sukoon milta hai jab bhi isse sunti hu toh..

N: toh mujeh bhi sunao na ...mujeh bhi sunkoon chahiye yaar avni...

A:u know i can't sing well..

N: oh hello madam...mai ache se janta hu ki tum bahut ache gaati ho...and i love your voice ...abhi bahane mat bano okay?...

A: kya kaha tumne?..😲

N:don't try to divert the topic...start karo...

A:mai nahi tum divert karrahe ho topic ko ...u said u love my voice?

N: nahi toh...maine kab suna..tumne abhi tak kabhi kuch gaya kya?

A: acha toh tumhe kaise ppata ki meri awaz achi hai ya nahi?

N:tum baat karti ho na...pata chal jaata hai😳ab start karo..he said taking a sip

A: agar azaw sunke dhar-war gaye toh batadena...😆

she sat near window...resting her back on the wall and started singing

Aa leke chalu tujhko

Ek aise desh mein

Aa leke chalu tujhko

Ek aise desh mein

he observed her closely...there was this faint smile on her lips while she started...he kept the coffee mug on a tea table and went and sat beside her...

Milti hai jaha khushiyan

Pariyon ke bhesh mein

Milti hai jaha kushiyan

Pariyon ke bhesh mein

she could feel some weight on the mattress

Aa leke chalu tujhko..

opened her eye to see him sitting beside her looking at her

Ho chaand chahe aadha

Ho phir bhi roshni

he smiles at her..

Umeed jo na chhute

Har baat hai bani

she smiles back

Raato ke sur se nikle

Subah ki ragini

he slowly takes her hand in his...even he didn't know y he did that..

Lori tujhe sunau

she looks at him raising her brows once in a questioning way...asking what happened ?

Lori tujhe sunau

Bachapan ki ek mein

Lori tujhe sunau

Bachapan ki ek mein

he just nods in a no..and asks her to continue..

Milti hai jaha khushiyan

Pariyon ke bhesh mein

Milti hai jaha kushiyan

Pariyon ke bhesh mein

Aa leke chalu tujhko..

he could feel the pain in it...he knew about her...he could imagine how her childhood was...but listening to this from her was different...it felt different.

Mein aasam ko khidkiyon se

Ghar mein laayi hu

he leaned in and placed his head on her shoulder...

Mein aasam ko khidkiyon se

Ghar mein laayi hu

she looked over her shoulder...to find him looking at her...

Saare ke saare taare

Yahan chunke laayi hu

Sapno mein rang man ke

Yuhi bharte aayi hu

she started caressing his hair...with the other hand...and continued singing..

Har dard bhool jaau

Yuhi khel khel mein

Har dard bhool jaau

Yuhi khel khel mein

Milti hai jaha khushiyan

Pariyon ke bhesh mein

a lone tear rolled down her cheek and fell on his arm..

he looked up at her...wiped off the tear gesturing her not to cry

Dena tu man ki shakti

Maalik mere mujhe

Meri katha vyatha

Hai sab pata tujhe

Mein jab bhi dagmagau

Tu thaamna mujhe

she looked at him while singing the last line..again..it was a different expression altogether...she was still caressing his hair ...he wrapped on of his arm around her as if to hug her..which he really wanted to at the moment when he saw that look on her face ...he just wanted to protect her from everything..

Chhode hai swapn saare

Teri deh rekh mein

Chhode hai swapn saare
Teri deh rekh mein

Milti hai jaha khushiyan

Pariyon ke bhesh mein

she looked at him...his eyes were slowly closing ..he was tired and sleepy...

Milti hai jaha kushiyan
Pariyon ke bhesh mein
she smiled at him...he looked soo innocent ..just like a baby...

Aa leke chalu tujhko..

and when she stopped caressing his hair ..he felt something missing and frowned a bit ...she chuckled ...

shhh...

and she continued caressing his hair...it's soft she thought ...she continued untill she herself fell asleep...

...it was quite uncomfortable position actually...she was resting her back on walll...his head which was on her shoulder last night dropped down a bit and was almost on her chest...her both hands were secured around his neck...him one arm was around her waist...and his one leg was dangling down from the mattress...but for them it was not..they found it very comfortable ...neil was the first one to wakeup...

he wokeuup with a smile and looked up..and soon realised the uncomfortable position...he got up...she is looking cute when she's asleep...her mouth slightly open...her back must be aching he thought...she was in same position since last night..

he slowly picked her up and placed her on his side of the bed...covered her with a blanket she turned to one side and curled holding onto the pillow on her side...

he silently laughed at her...

N: ajeeb ladki hai ye😳

he said before walking away to washroom..

#2 b

She slowly opened her eyes. and turned to other side . he woke up early?..she thought. Suddenly she remembered last night... it was almost 3 in morning when she checked the time before she fell asleep...last night happenings flashed ..and she was shocked ...mujeh ho kya gaya tha?...she remembered caressing his hair...he fell asleep on her shoulder...hum dono ho kya gaya tha?..ok...neel must have got me to the bed...par who hai kaha?..

She looked up to the wall...it was 11. He might have left for work..she thought.and grabbed her mobile to check if he left any message...and she was right.

Neel:9AM.. good mrng.leaving for work. Will be late.😊

Avni:Good mrng😊

She smiled and dragged herself to washroom though she was still sleepy..

Came out of washroom..when to dressing table... blowdried her hair..opened the draw and there was a wooden box ..she hesitantly opened it...there was her mangalsutra and another small sindoor box in it...the box was gifted by neela.

She remembered their wedding day...

The pheras

The moment when he tied this mangalsutra round her neck

And then he filled her mang with sindoor...

She took the mangalsutra in her hand...and was staring at it..

There were these mixed emotions..

Her mobile rang breaking her trance...

"I'll be there in 20 minsshe said before cutting the call .

She placed the mangalsutra in the box carefully..and closed it.

Ye mai bhi kya soch rahi hu...she thought...closing the draw.

She hurried and grabbed her breakfast which he already packed and placed it in her bag...gulped ddown the entire juice in one go...and locked the door out before rushing out.

#3 A

Another random day ...sorry evening...and they are busy packing . Neil's bebe is going to come tmrw.. for a week. And prakash ji wanted both of them to come to Khanna house and stay there till bebe was there. Not that he never asked them to stay there after their marriage . both of them discussed and neel said he want's to stay in his apartment only becuz of his work conditions...but the actual reason was he thought they can be more comfortable ..and don't need to act all the time. But this time they didn't have any other option. Bebe is coming!

A:Neel do I need to wear sarees all the time?

Neel chuckles "relax okay...bebe is very sweet and modern..u can wear whatever u want...she is my cool dadi...(imagine bua dadi from dbo)..

A:phir bhi..pehli baar milrahi hu ..na...its liye..

N:jo tumhe theek lage who pehen lena avni..no compulsions.

They completed packing the stuff...after a pillow fight over some silly issue.

N:avni ...time dekho..it's 11 already.let's have our dinner..kal subha jaldi unta hai..we have to be there before 9.

Both of them walkk to wards kitchen...

A:time save kardi maine tumhari...dinner is ready...remember aaj tumhara turn tha..so u need to compensate .

N: okay okay...done...so kya banaya aaj?..

A:i made this aaloo mutter sabzi...internet se dekha ye recipe...

N: letme taste..

A: khanlena before that...take this bowl towards the window...I'll get the rotis..

N:yes madam..

They sat near the window..place the dishes , plates on the tea table o side...completed their dinner talking about all the things..

Later after cleaning up the plates and kitchen neel grabbed the extra set of pillow and comforter from the cupboard...both of them wentto their respective sides...neel occupied left side and avni right...

Neel lied down with his head towards the headboard.annd avni with her head towards the opposite side of the headboard..and they were facing each other...

N:good night.

A:good night. 😊

at@1:00AM

a: neel...

she switched on the dim lamp on the side table..

a:neel uthona..

n:kya hua avni..abhi 7 bajgaye?

A:mujeh neend nahi aarahi..

N:mai kya karu...?...lori gau kya?...dekho pehle hi bata raha hu...I'm a very bad singer .

A:nahi..baat karo mujhse

N:kya?

A:haa..please neel..

N:fine theek hai

He turned and lied down in the same way as avni.

N: toh kya baat karna chahti ho?

A: tumhe baat karna hai ..remember?not me..

N:kudhse baat karu kya?

A: mai hu na sunne keliye?

N:acha ?..theek hai..toh..kya baaat karu..hmm...umm..avni ajeeb lagraha hai ..ek kaam karo tum kuch pucho aur mai answer karta hu..

A:okay.. to jab tumhein pata chala ki riya ke jagha mai thi..dulhan banke..tum kaisa feel hua?...kya chal raha tha tumhare mann mein?

N: wah madam...bas yehi sawal puchna tha tumhe?...okay...mujeh actually acha laga. U know I didn't want to get married to rhea. Aur mere paas aur koi rasta nahi tha to keep an eye on dayawanti Mehta. So I had no choice except to marry rhea. Issiliye mai gusaa hogaya tha ..that u messed my plan to keepan eye over her.

A:tumhe acha laga ?..ye kaisa jawab hai?..that means u wanted to marry me?

She asked straing towards the ceiling..

N: pata nahi..matlab I was not feeling right marrying rhea. Kuch ajeeb sa feeling tha...jaise mai koi wrong step leraha hu.

A:aur mujeh dhek ke ye feeling nahi aayi?

She asked turning completely towards him..

N: nahi...shocked toh tha mai..par mann mein jo ajeeb se feeling thin a...who wrong step wali..woh nahi tha...

He said still staring at the ceiling and then turned his head to right and noticed her smiling

so ..bas acha laga.. he finished off stretching his right hand above her head.

There was no reply..

N: kya hua?

A: kuch nahi...tumhare koi girlfriends the...kabhi?

Neel turned towards her and ...mai juhi se bahut pyaar karta tha..karta hu...mere saamne ..ek accident mein uski mauth hogayi...6 saal pehle..

He looked lost...she cupped his face with her right hand and caressed his cheek with her thumb...

N:mai theek hu ...

A just gave a soft smile

A: neel..agar tumhare shaadi rhea se hojati...kyat um kabhi bhi usse apne dil mein jagah de paate?

N:mere dil mein juhi ki jagah koi aur nahi lesakta avni...

A:mai juhi ke baare mein nahi bolri hu..juhi ke jagah tumhare dil mein koi bhi lesakta...nahi lega..kya koi apne liye toda sa jagha banasakta hai?...kabhi bhi?

His heart knew what she wanted to ask..but his mind didn't want to think about it...so he just replied

N:shayad...

A smiled and placed her head on his arm which was above her head.

He just smiles ..

A: pyaar tumhareliye kya hai neel?

N: mai define nahi karpaunga avni...but pyaar ek cheez se nahi banta...pyaar ke liye trust important hai...pyaar tumhare liye kya hai?

A: pata hai neel...mumma aur Ayesha ma dono ke saath jo hua na...uske baad mujeh pyaar pe se vishwaas utgaya...mai soch thi rahi ...ki pyaar meri naseeb mein nahi ayegi...na kabhi main aanedungi..

N:aura b?pyaar mein vishwaas karti ho?

A:shayad..she smiled wide..

He smiled wider...as she tried to copy his answer ..and knowing its true also.

...it was 4 in the mrng...when both of them actually fell into deep sleep after more of such talks...

...

~~~

It was 9..bebe was back home..

Shweta: bebe bhi aaygae...par ye dono abhi tak nahi aaye...aur toh aur neel phone bhi nahi utaraha kya karu...she called up ali...

Ali: hello auty...kya hua?itne subha subha call kiya aapne?

S:ali ..tu mere liye ek kaam karega?...she told him everything. Asked him to take keys from her and go and bring them both to khanna house.

Ali was with rhea..she said she'll come along...she was doing her daily vlogs...so ali went to khanna house first ..took keys from shweta...while rhea was waiting out on his bike...

Then ali and Rhea went to neil's apartment...

R: taking to her cam ..recording her vlog...and we are here...'neil's apartment.'..i'm very eager to meet avni now..

A:rhea ...baad mein vlog karlena...abhi keliye stop it..

He said while walking out of the elevator..

R: nah ..she said moving her head side to side..

He took the key and opened the door...

R:dhekhiye iss ladke ko...kaise door khol raha hai

Panning the camera towards him..

R: ali..pehle door bell toh bajadete...aise koi oopen karta..she stopped her line mid way when she noticed avneil..

And accidentally her camera panned towards avneil...

and there they were...sleeping with there heads opposite side to the headboard...avni's head was on neil's right arm...and both her hands were holding onto neil's T shirt...like a small kid..and neil's left arm was carelessly over avni's shoulder..

R: what a huge development...😲

A: HUGE indeed!😃😉

There reaction was acceptable ...only these two know about avneil..and that avneil are planning to for divorce after 2 months...but they could see this increasing soft corner for each other in them(avneil)

And ali looked at riya...

Her cam wwas panning avneil...

He hit on her head...and said pointing towards the cam issiliye bola maine tode der ruk jha... "

R: sorry...

She switched off the cam..

And they walked inside...

A: Neel..avni...

They were in very deep sleep and didn't even move a bit..

R: ek min...ye aise nahi uthenge..

She went out and pressed the door bell continuously...

N: avni...door kho la...dheko kon aya ..

He said in his sleep..

Neither of them opened their eyes...

Ali was grinning...

He rushed towards the door...got cam from rhea..and started recording the whole thing...

A:neel...sone do mujeh...kudh jaake kholo door.

She said snuggling more close to him...

N: jane do. ...jo bhi ho door pe..wait karke chalajayege

Avni smiled a bit

Ali gestured rhea to press the door bell again..laughing silently..

rhea was tired pressing the bell and now she was pissed off...

she started pressing the bell in a pattern..

A: neel alien aya hai..dheko na jaake

N: konsa alieeen?

A:jadoo..wahi sound bajraha hai

N: oh ha..jaadooo...

They didn't speek for a min tryin got register that in mind and meawhile rhea who was tired of pressing that bell ...came in ..grabbed a jug from kitchen counter...and poured it on them..

They both got up with a jolt...

And ali immediately stopped the cam and hid it.

Ali was laughing like a manic and rhea was standing there with a frown and the empty jug

#3B

R: it's 10:15.

Avneil: shit!!

Ali:go get ready guys...quick...me and rhea will wait on terrace..neil ..call me..when u guys are ready...come rhea..

Neel locks the door..

N: tum pehle ready hojao...I'll sleep till that time...mujeh neend aa rahi hai.

A: okay..

She grabs her dress(the one from recent seg where she's getting ready) and rushes towards the washroom

...

R: ali..tumhe kya lagta hai?

Ali: I think they started liking each other..

R: duffer..like toh pehle se si karte hai..i thnk they are In love..

Ali: ha..

R:bas realize nahi ki ...ab tak..

Ali gets a call...it is from neel.

A:okay...hum neeche aarahe hai.

R: ready hogay?

A: yaa..chalo ab..

N: sab car mein ek saath chalet hai na..

Ali: nahi neel...mai bike leke aaya hu...so..i'll come there..aap sab jayiye..

R: ali..mai bhi tumhare saath aaungi..

Avni: rhea...humare saath aajao..ali aajayega...kyu ali?...rhea ke bina nahi aapaoge kya?

Neel: correct avni: ...rhea chalo humare saath...

Avneil look at each other and smirk...

Ofc it was visible to everyone...

Except ali and rhea...

R: nahi...tum dono aajao...chalo ali...saying that she dragged ali to the parking lott..

Avneil:😆

They reach khanna house

Bebe was very happy to see avni..she was very much impressed by avni.they spent lot of time talking about all the stuff and neel was super happy...there was always a saasbahu thing between his mom and bebe...but avni gelled up really well with her...and they had a really good time...even ali and rhea were there till evening .

After dinner...everyone retired back to their own rooms

And today both have their heads towards the head board

@12:30

Avni: neel

Neel:hmm

A: sooye nahi abhi tak...?

N:socha ki tum aajtoh mujeh zaroor uthaogi ..isiliye.

She hit him,...u mean to say mai roj tumhe sone nahi deti?..

N: 😆

A: has kyu rahe ho?

N:kudh hi socho..

A: kya?...

N: dumbo..kuch nahi..leave it

A: nahi batao..u mean that only na?

N:aur nahi toh kya?...dheko mere dark circles...ye sab tumhare wajeh se hue hai...she said dramatically..

A:fine sojao...mai tumhe disturb nahi karungi...

She turned to other side..

N:arey avni...sun...ok sorry...I thought,,..naya place hai na..tumhe neend nahi ayega..so...

scramble khele?..

A: mujeh ice cream bhi chahiye..

N: theek hai..

They sit near the pool area...dip their legs in the water...scrambble board in between them...one chocolate ice cream tub with a spoons in it..

Bebe noticed someone's shadow near kitchen and followed that person..

B: ye toh neel ke kamre ke taraf jar aha hai..

Then she see avni coming out with some box ...and both of them slowly waking towards the pool...she slowly follows them...

She stays by the door and observes them..

Ye ladki mere bache keliye perfect hai she thoght..

A: aisa koi word nahi ha neel...tum cheat kar rahe ho..

N: hai na..kal google karke dheklena..

a: I won't accept..abhi tumhare mobile nikalo and google it.

N:room mai hai mobile..

A: urggg...tum humesha aise hi karte ho...cheater. ...she pushes him

N: arey...humesha??..madam...maine cheat kab kiya bolo...he pushes her back...

She stumbles back a little...A:

She pushes him again...and this time a with a bit more force...

And he falls into the pool.

Bebe:😲😆😆

A starts laughing...and suddenly neel pulls her down...

Now neel starts laughing..

Bebe smirks...and thinks takkar ke hai dono..

A starts coughing

N: hey avni...r u ok?

She nods yes but continues coughing

N grabs her by her wrist...and rubs her back...kuch nai..u'r fine okay...chalo..let's get out of the pool..

Neel goes up ..and helps her to come out ...

A starts laughing ...and shivering at the same time...

They quickly go back to their room and change into some comfortable clothes..

A:good night..

N: good night.

Shweta: indo ko ho kya gaya hai?...phir se late...10 baj rahe hai...

Prakash:oh ho shweta ji...relax kijiye..

Bebe: shweta ...ek baat bolu..

Shweta was shocked...bebe was talking to her this softly...she knows bebe doesn't hate her...but they are always like that...fighting ...mocking eachother..

S: ji bebe..boliyena..

Now it was time prakash to be shocked...his mom and wife are talking to each other without mocking and sarcasam..

B: tumne best life partner chuna hai neel keliye...pata hai...humdono mein utna nahi jamta...par...I always adore your and prakash's Jodi..because mujeh tum dono mein who pyaar dikhta ha...theek waise hi mujehavni aur neel ke beech bhi who pyaar dikhta hai...best bahu mili hai tumhe shweta..

Shweta was shocked...she just smile...

S: ji bebe..

Shweta thought...kya wakai aisa hai..kya maine avni ko sahi pehchana nahi...kya who mere bache ke kiliye perfect hai?

Prakash could sense what shweta was thinking...

P: shweta...ye dono abhi tak ute nahi?

S: pata nahi...mai dhek ke aati hu..

B: soone unhe..kal raat der se soye dono...

Shweta and prakash..: kya?

Bebe: ha...who pool ke paas baitakar ice cream kha rahe the ..and they were playing scramble...

Shweta was shocked...and prakash was happy shocked ...

Just then avni comes down..

And wishes everyone good morg

Shweta: avni neel kaha hai?

Avni was shocked..this was the first time ..first time after marriage shweta sounded ..sounded this calm ...there was no sarcasam..no hateread...but the voice wasn't that soft either..

A: ji ..woh autny ..woh bas ready ho raha hai...aata hi hoga..

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Posted: 7 years ago

#3c

Bebe: bahut pretty lag rahi ho bacha..haye..nazar na lage kisi ki..

Avni just smiled..

Neel came down...they had breakfast together..and shweta was busy noticing these two..

They were smiling at each other..

Neel loved aloo ke parathe ...after serving one paratha for each...all the aloo k parathe were done..and only plain parathe were on the table...neel quickly completed his paratha..and then started looking for one more aloo ka paratha...and made a sad face when he saw only plain paratha on the table...

Avni who was eating a bit slowly observed him...and chuckled

She tapped his arm and guestured to take that paratha from her plate and he gave are u sure look...she just nodded..he grinned ear to ear ..and closed his eyes for a second so as to say a silent thanks ..and took the paratha from her plate and she took one plain paratha ...this whole exchange was done very silently ...but yet shweta observed the whole thing...she was shocked ...her tillu never ate food from anyone's plate...and did he just take that paratha from avni's plate?..

She couldn't help but smile a little ...this smile only showed happiness...and nothing else..

Later they all went to temple...for some pooja and ritual which all the newly married couples' should do in the khanna family...

When bebe asked shweta if avneil completedthis ritual...she said no ..so bebe asked them to complete it today itself..

The pandit over there asks avni about sindoor...and says that sindooor is important part of this ritual..

Bebe: arey ha...mai ne bhi notice nahi kiya...shweta kam se kam tu bata deti avni ko..

Avni was a lil nervous..she isn't used to wearing mangalsutra everyday...but she wore it while coming to khanna house...but she forgot to put sindoor today..

B: kya putttar ...bhool gayi?..

A: bebe..ji..woh...

N:it's ok..it's ok..hojatahai kabhi kabhi...sindoor hona compulsory hai na...wait..

He said trying to coverup for her...he asked pandit it there was any sindoor available...and fills avni's maang ...

He could understand her expressions...by now he became an expert in reading her expressions...

Her eyes widened a bit...there was this light pink hue on her cheeks...is she blushing...omg..i didn't know that this girl can blush also..he thought...

He smirked

And her heart skipped a beat..she quickly broke the eye lock and started looking everywhere except him..

shweta was smiling and prakash ji couldn't belivewhat he just saw...is shweta smiling...that too when neel just filled avni's maang...?.

And bebeee..she was in total fangurling mode with her one hand supporting her cheek and her expressions just saying...awwwe...she becam avneil's shipper...

The pooja continued till evening...later they came back home...and during dinner bebe asked avni to call the family tmrw for lunch...

Neel and prakash were talking about some work related stuff...

And bebe called shweta and avni to her room...

She asked shweta to get the family album while coming..

Both S and B were in bebe's room..while avni knocked the door..

B:aaja bacha..aao..yaha baito she said patiing the space beside her and shweta...

B: oho...shweta...muhurat nikalwana hai kya..?...shuru karo ...open the album ..

B: yeh...pura family pic hai...she said showing it to avni...aur guess karo..neel kaha hai?

They spent hours talking about all the memories...

Bebe fell asleep in a short time...

N:okay dad...goon night

P:good night beta..

He goes to his room..and notices avni's absence there..

The searches the pool area..kichen and goes to his parent's room...

N: dad..

P:kya hua..

N: aapne avni ko dheka?

P: woh...bebe ke room mein hogi..shweta bhi wahi hai...shayad theeno aaj wahi soyenge..tum bhi sojao..

N: okay..

Shweta and avni got off from the bed..went to the couch and continued seeing the album..

Avni was hesitant to ask anything about the album...till then she asked bebe ..and bebe was telling about the pics..but now..?

Yet she hesitantly asked...

A:aun..aunty..

S:hmm..

A:ye pic mein kon hai?

S:ye pic...she noticed that scared expression of avni..

ye toh tab kicha tha jab neel 5 saal ka tha..she replied softly..

soon that awkward talk became confident,warm...and different conversation..

shweta aunty to bilkul aisi nahi hai jaisi woh dhikate hai...who sifr mujh se gussa hai...jho kuch bhi hua..uskeliya avni thought...

S: aur ye..

She stopped there to find avni smiling at her..

S:kya hua?

A:nahi aunty...kuch nahi...

They continued talking...

Neel slowy opens the door to find avni and shweta on couch...both were talking something...later shweta was explain something animatedly ...and avni was laughing..and by shweta's actions..he was sure that she was telling avni about his childhood cricket story..he smiled seeing both of them like this...and went awy closing the door behind him silently..

Bebe slowly opened her eyes to check on them ...once she saw that both of them were talking and laughing..she smiled and closed her eyes again..

Neel goes back to his room..switches of the light ..

He closes his eyes ofr sometime..but starts feeling uncomfortable ..he turns to other side...and then again rolls back to opposite side...then he get's up..deciedes to call dd...he sees time..it's almost 1:20...so he decides against calling him ...he works on some case for an hr or so...and a sound sleep seemed no where close to him...he went to kitchen to get some coffee for himself...he had to walk past bebe's room to go to the kitchen...and he thinks of going in and checking once again,...but soon he convinces himself to go to kitchen directly...

He enters kitchen...searches for a dimlight...and makes a cup of coffee...he goes to the pool area and sits on the chaise lounge

Shweta wakeup to see avni's head in her lap...and thinks...buri nahi hai ye ladki...she slowly places her head on a cushion ...bebe was not in her bed..so she might be down ...s walks out with the album..

She sees bebe standing near the arch...

S:aap itne subha utgayi?

B smiles at her..

B:itte aa shweta..aur dhekh apne bete ko...avni biwi ke bina need nai aayi hogi...

S:neel yehi sogaya?...bahar?

B: haa..chal ja..tu bhi fresh ho jao..mai bhi jaati hu..

S: ji bebe...she says thinking about avneil..

avni goes to her room...she is still sleepy...opens the cupboard...selects one dress..and walks towards washroom..

at the same time neil walks out the washroom and collides with avni..

avni looks up and her eyes pop out ...and she quickly turns back and says "sorry

Neel was only in his towel ..his expressions change from shock to naughty smirk...and he says in a very sweet tone...kya hua avni? he asks as if he is least affected by her presence...

A:I'm sorry...mujeh pata nahi tha ki tum washroom mein ho...mai to bas..

she couldn't complete her sentence as neel pulls her by hand...

N: ha..batao...tum to...

she was shocked...

A:ne...neel..☺️

N:kya?...kya hua? Arey...ye tumhare cheeks phir pink kyu horahe hai?...jaise kal hue the?..😉

He said cornering her ...

A:aaiis..aisa kuch na nahi hai..

N: kya...mai samjha nahi...kaisa kuch nahi hai?

She looks at him...

N:tumhe kuch hora hai kya?...kahi fever toh nahi hai..he said...touching her forehead and trailing his fingers to her neck..

Her breath hitched ..and she stared at him...😲

He could sense her becoming stiff..

She then observed smirk on his lips..

He noticed the change in her expressions...from shocked to frown and then a twisted smile...and she moved closer to him...wrapped her arm around his neck..and trailed a finger down his jawline...and it was his turn to get shocked...

A:kya hua neel?...she asked

A: u are sweating...?

N: mai..?..nai toh..😕

A:aahan?

He just looked away..

Avni chuckled ...and he looked back at her astonished..

A: mujh pe ye kabhi try mat karna okay?..she walked back a bit...warna...

N: warna kya karlogi?

He said coming close

A just looked down and gave an evil smirk...she snatched the towel and quickly turned back so as to not see him..and rushed to washroom...

He was shcked😲😲😲..and grabbed the comforter and rushed to the closet

And when he came out dressed..he shouted "avni ..u'll pay for this

And she laughed out loud in the washroom..

He smiled and walked downstairs..

Neela..nano ali..rhea came to khanna house...

Avni rushed down and hugged neela and nanno...

Neela was surprised when she noticed avni this happy...

Avni introduced all...neela..nanno..ali..

And ye meri behen hai bebe..she said pulling rhea close..

Then bebe thought of completing one left over rasam ...told about the rasam to everyone...after the rasam today evening avni will have to go will neela..and neel will come and get her back tmrw...

They completed that rasam..and all chatted for an hr or so..and then shifted to the dining hall for lunch..

@dining table...

Avni sat beside neel and everyone started eating...neel winked at her and she knew he will do something now...so as to take revenge...neel grabbed avni's right hand below the table in a firm hold...and she was trying her level best to let herself free from his hold...

Bebe:avni...tum left hand se kyu kha rahi ho ?

Avni: bebe woh...mai bas aise hi left hand se kha rahi hu..hihi...i just wanted to try ki left hand se kana khana kaisa lagta hai..she smiled..😳

Neel looked at everyone..when no one Is looking at them...he whispered in avni's ear..not at all convincing Mrs.Neel😆

A: neel..haat chodo..please..

He ignored her and..ali ..zara woh curry pass karna..

Ali observed both of them kuch toh horaha hai'

"ye lo he said

...he dropped down a spoon..

Slowly bent down..and got up smiling wide..he was trying hard to his laughter...and rhea who was sitting beside him nudged him with her elbow and he pushed the fork lying beside her plate down..and asked her to bend and take it...even she noticed avneil and started smiling...nanno hit ali on his head...and gave him what's happening look'...avneil were lost in eachother that they failed to notice all this...soon ali guestured everyone silently and asked all of them to do as he is doing..he bent down..and everyone on the table except avneil did the same...they immideatly got up..and everyone were smiling ...

After 5 mins...

A: neel...leave my hand na..plese..mujeh bhook lagi hai..

N: ye mujh se panga lene se pehle sochna tha

A: dheko agar tumne mera haat nahi choda na toh mai...

N: kya karlogi?

A: mai haat upar table pe rakhongi...tab sochnedo sab ko ki kuya horaha hai..

She started lifting her hand up..and before she could keep her hand on table ..he left her hand...

Then she started eating with her right hand..

Rhea:avni..tera left hand trail hogaya kya?

n laughed silently..

A: huh?...ha..hogaya..she said smiling sheepishly

She then turned to neel and he blew at kiss at her...she started coughing ..

Neela:bacha..kya hogaya?..tum theek ho?

She said handing her a glass..avni took a sip shooting a glare at neel..

They finished lunch and ali came with a bowl of chits...they played for sometime and slowy all started dancing and singing... then dd came with drinks after a while as ali asked him to get them..

And only ali knew about the drinks ..he got them for neel and himselff

And unknowingly...avni and rhea also got drunk..

Then the hungama started..

#3e

@7pm

R:ali...ali tum kahaaa hooo??

all(shweta,neela,nano,bebe,DD,prakassh ji) were shocked..

"mai yaha hu rheaaahe screamed as he slid down the staircase railing..

Rhea:

"neeel avni called out..

Bebe: avni puttar...where r u?..kaha ho tum?😕

A:bebe..mai yaha hu...

Neela: kaha bhacha?😕

And a hand rose behind the sofa...

A:yaha...avni presenttt..😳⭐️

Neel:avnii..😊

Neel slowly came down...he looked better than those 3...

N: avni...kaha ho tum?

A:neel mai yaha hu..she tried to get up..but she slumped down...

She tried again...and she fell down again..

N: rukho..i'm coming...mai help karta hu...

DD found this super interesting..he started filming everything...

And neil is the sober one?..out of the four..?...till now he seemed so..

And now..he was walking towards avni

He was wobbling and finally...reached the sofa...he got onto sofa...and avni...I'll saave u..tum nahi dubogi...

A:neel..mai kaha dubungi?😕

N:arey tum pani mei ho na...I'm on land..mai tumhe bacha lunga..don't worry..

A:neel mai pani mei hu?😲

N:ha..abhi mere haath pakdo..😳

DD couldn't help but laugh seeing the whole scene..

And slowly he pulled her over the sofa..and she fell on him...both started laughing like mad persons..🤣

Shweta: hey godss!! aaj tak pineke baad ek kho sambhalna hi mushkil tha..

She says this seeing prakash..who gives what did I do now wala look...

Aaj charo ko sambhalna padega kya?😲🤪

Neela was too shocked to utter anything...

And bebe and nanno toh were speechless..

A vase broke and grabbed their attention ...it was ali..

A:rhea..chalo hum drive pe chale hai..😎

Rhea:tum mere liye ghadi ke door open nahi karoge ali?

A: oh...hihi...sorrryyy

He opens the door for her..

Rhea sit's on one arm chair..

And ali closes the dorr.goes to other side and sit's on another arm chair...

A:rhea...seat belt pheno...

And soon he makes an action of turning the steering...and makes zummm' sound

😛

Nano: ye ho kya raha hai?

A:neeiiil

They all again turn back to avneil

Avni was on top of neel and they were blabbering something...

N:bolo avni...chila kyu rahi hooo?

A:neel..mujeh na ek baat batana hai..kal na...main na..jab wapas aarahi thi sham ko..tab mujeh ne...kuch gunde warn karke gaye..

N:kya?😲

And now dd was also paying attention..

A:mujeh bohot dar laga...kuch tiger ke aadmi the..

All the fam members were shocked..

Avni made a dull face and hugged neil..

Neel tried to concentrate on what she said but he couldn't...he was fully drunk..

But dd understood about what she was saying..that man TIGER is creating lot of problems recently...he even planned an accident and killed the witness of the case..and only thing neel could reply was " kuch nahi hoga tumhe..kuch nahi honedunga mai...

A:mujeh dar mele liye nai lagraha hai...tumhare liye dar lag raha hai..

Shweta was shocked😲 ...and so were everyone in the hall

N: mujeh bhi kuch nahi hoga baba 😊😳

Saying that he hugged her

Ali came to them...yaar..chalo hum gumne jaate hai ..he said like a kid and started pulling neel's hand..

Rhea also came there..:aww tum dono kitne cute lagrahe ho...

Ali:rhea...bolo na inhe,,,..humbahar jaayenge..mujeh cricket khel na hia..neel chalo na..

They dragged them both ..and walked towards the door..

Neela: ek min..kooi kahi nahi jaaye ga...wapas aao sab..

Shweta: avni ..tillu wapas aao dono..abhi ..

They both had a tough time running after the kids..

And finally they sit on the sofa...

Shweta:neela ji

Neela:ji..

S:ab aaj keliye bas hoaya...ye log toh dinner karenge ..aise nahi lagraha..toh ek kaam kijiye..aapko avni ko rasam keliye ghar lejana hoga..to abhiu 9 hogaye..so aaap jaldi dinner kijiye aur avni aur rhea ko apne saath lejayiye..ali yahi rukhega..

B:ha ye tune theek kaha shweta...DD ..kya tum inke saath waha jaake inhe saath rukhsakte ho...kya hai ki indono ko sambhalna mushkil lsagraha hai..she said pointing towards avni and rhea..

Nanno: nahi nahi ji..hum sambhalenge...neela aur mai hai na...mai phone karke hetal ko bhi bulaungi...hum manage karlenge..

Shweta:phir bhi nanno...bebe theek kehrahi hai..

~~they went to rhea ans avni...

Neela: bacha...bahut hogaya...ab chalo yaha se...hume ghar jaana hai..she said pulling avni's arm..rhea chalo utho...hume ghar jaana hai..

rhea was sleepy...she just said

R:ali kho bhi bulao...and closed her eyes...

Nanno:zid mat karo bache...chalo...

Avni:hum ghar ja rahe hai?..rukho main neel ko bhulangi ...NEEEL..she screamed..both ali and neel were playing some stupid games they came there...

A:neel hum ghar ja rahe hai..aur maa aur sabbhi humare saath aayenge..

N:acha...theek hai...keys kaha hai..he started searching is pockets..

S:neel kya search kar rahe ho..?

N:ghar ke keys...

Then it struck them...avneil were thinking that theya re going to neel's apartment...

Neela: nahi...neel...hum avni ko apne saath lejarahe hai...rasam hai na...

Neel was shocked...: nahi ...he screamed...🥺

Avni kahi nahi jaogi..

A: mai kahi kyu nahi jaungi neel?...

N:tum mujh chodke chalijaogi?

A:kabhi nahi..she came forward and pulled his cheeks..

Shweta and prakash looked at each other...so did neela and nanno

He smiled like baby

N:avni ...tumhari nose bahut cute hai...

A:sachi...?

N: haa

Bebe: shweta...rehnede...kal avni ke bina neend nahi ayi toh bahar pool k paas sogaya...aaj pata nahi kya karega...neela ..aap kal avni ko lekejayiye...

Shweta:aap sab aaj ke liye yahi rukh jaayiye phir..

Nanno: nahi shweta ...hum kal aake avni ko lejayenge...

Prakash:shweta theek keh rahi hai...waise bhi rat bahut hogayi...aap rukh jayiye...mana mat kijiyega..plese

Nanno: theek hai beta

They turned back to see avneil sleeping on sofa..

Prakash : shweta ji...get some blanket's for them..

Pointing towards avneil...riya who slept on armchair itself..and ali who slept in the swing..

Shweta: okay...Oh DD...ab toh recording bandh karde...bas hogaya aaj ka..

A servant got few comforters..and neela took one immediately and covered avneil...they were in very compromising position...avni was completely lying on neel..

Nano did the same with ali and rhea..

Shweta:kal subha inn sab ki kabar lungi...😳

#3f

Preta were talking...

Shweta:prakashi ji...kya aapne dheka aaj?...maine kabhi nahi socha ke tillu aage bad payega...kya aapne dheka unn dono ko?...ki kais eek dusre se todi der kiliye alag nahi rehparahe hai?

Prakash:..ha shweta...par...change undono mein hi nahi...aap mein bhi dheka maine..aap avni ko accept karne lage ho?

S: mujeh mere tillu ki kushi se badkar aur kuch nahi chahiye...mai avni se issliye gussa thi kyu ki mujeh laga ki wo mere bache se zabardasti shaadi ki...ki mera tillu kabhi uske saath kush nahi rehpayega..agar who kush hai toh mai kush kyu nahi hongi?

Prakash just smiled at her...

Neela had similar thoughts...she had faith in neil that he'll never let anything happen to avni...but she couldn't belive...they were in love..she always fought wid herself..that did she really do a the right thing by getting them married like that..but now she knew...they loved eachother to moon and back...and she wanted nothing more than their happiness...avni went through a lot ..she now deserves happiness...she deserves that love...

It's 12:30 PM...

Ali was the first one to wakeup...

Ali:argg...my neck!...ohhh ..my back..

He slowly open's his eyes...he see's rhea on the chair..he wondered how she fit into that small arm chair completely...he dragged himself to her chair..

Ali:rhea..he shook her gently...rhea get up..she got up and her head was heavy..

R:ali..

Ali:Utho

he helped her to stand..

They went to avneil...

Avni was on neel...and both were in soundsleep hugging eachother..

Ali:neel...avni...

He shook both of them..they didn't move a bit..

Rhea:ab kya kare??

Ali:ye dono toh utne ke naam hi nahi lerahe...chalo yaha se nikal lete hai...nahi toh aaj bahut sunna paregaa..

Rhea: haa ha..chalo..

Shweta:rukho.

Dono jana hai toh washroom jao aur wapas yahi aake baitjao..

ALEA looked at eachother...and they felt as if they were back in school..

they went came back and sat on the small two seater..in dono ka utne ka wait karo...

Ali: par autny..ye dono toh ghode bech ke sorahehai..

Rhea:utna der wait karna padega kya?

Neela:humne nahi wait kiya kya tum dono ke tune ka..theek waise hi tum dono bhi wait karoge..

After an hour neel slowly opened his eyes..he looked at avni...and tried to remember last night happenings...his head was blasting...he couldn't get up...he didn't want to disturb her sleep either...so he didn't move from that place..he slowly started caress her hair...

Ali was tired signaling ...and he wasn't allowed to make sound or call neel...

Ali thought abey neel...ek baar iss taraf dheko...hum bhi jinda hai...kamine ko sirf apne padi hai...aankh khul gayi tho utjata na...nahi..lekin sir tho apni madam ko dhekh ne mein busy hai..'

Rhea was sleepy and fell asleep on ali's shoulder..

Neela and shweta were also seeing him and smiled at eachother..

And avni stirred a bit..and neel shut his eyes and avni slowy opened her eyes..she didn't have such acomfortable pillow and such a peaceful sleep ever..she looked down to relaize she is on neil she gotup slowly...and sit beside him..

Ali made a I'm hungry guesture to nanno' she gave back chup kar wala look' and asked him to bhi silent

Ali again thinks' arey avni...atleast tu toh dhek..'

Avni covers him again with blanket and moves her fingers slowly on his hair..he smiles a bit ..and avni get's shocked..he was awake the whole time...?

Rhea looks up at shweta and neela...and murmers'ab toh dono utgay...na..kyu wait kar rahe ho?she glared at ali'kyu uthaya mujeh..kamse kam ek aur ghanta soleti mai 'she says

Neel opens his eyes and smiles at her..

A:tum utgay the?

Ali couldn't wait anymore...hum bhi utgaye

Avneil turned to left side...

Ali: neel...ek ghate se avni ko dhekta raha...ek baar...bas ek baar iss taraf dhek leta yaar...

Neel got up...

Now four of them were standing in a row and DD was called...he played the recording in fast forward mode...since that was in fast forward more they couldn't hear their voice properly ...all they heard was the chipmunk voice ...but they could see what all they did...avneil were going red...clearly embarrassed...and were feeling very awkward..

Shweta: bas DD...itna kafi hoga inkeliye...

Neel for a moment thought that his mom was apt for investigation department...

Neela:kisi idea hai ye?..kon laya drinks ghar mein??

Shweta:o my godss...muh kholo...batao...

Bebe:avni..rhea..yaha aao...aur tum dono she said (pointing towards zain and ali)tum dono jawaab do..

Ali:bebe...indono ko koi kuch kyu nahi kehta..hum dono ko hi kyu bol rahe ho?

Rhea : ALI??

Bebe: kyu ki indono ke chehre pe saaf saaf dhikraha hai ...ke in dono ne kuch nahi kiuyaa...abhi jawab doge yaa...dono ko saza du?

They remained silent..

Bebe: toh theek hai...aaj khana tum dono banaoge...and menu ye dono decide karenge...she said pointing towards avni and rhea...

Both the girls beamed with happiness...rhea already started giving list to ali..

Ali: ye kya hai?...aaj ke liye list do pure week keliye nahi..he said pushing rhea back..

Neil asks dd to give the recording to him...

And soon boys were in kitchen..

Neel: toh decide kiya aapne?..kya chahiye?

Avni: rajma chawal..says excitedly..

Neel smiles seeing avni like this...

Rhea:chef ali...kuch spl banayiye...choice aapki..

Ali:yes madam..

After lunch avni left with neela and nanno...

Bebe:neel kal subha jake wapas leyana...

It was weekend...bebe is leaving today..neel went and got avni back..

Bebe called everyone to living room...

Bebe: shweta tumhe yaad hai na..ki tumhe kya karna hai?..

Shweta: ji bebe..

Bebe: avni ..neel..idhar aao bache...she gifted them something...and blessed them...humesha kush raho...

Avni hugged bebe...

Neel and prakash went to drop bebe..

Shweta: avni...idhar aao..

She took out a huge box...and gave it to avni..

Avni:aunty..yee

Shweta:mom bulao..avni..i'm sorry mai aaj tak tuhare saath rudely behave kiya...but trust me..i don't hate u ...mai bas mere bache ke kushi chahti hu...aur maine dheka..mere tillu ki kushi tumhare saath hai..issliye...mai chahti hu ke tum dono apne life mein kush raho...i accept u as my daughter in law...Mrs.Neel Khanna..welcome to family beta...

Avni just hugged her ..

S: aur ye humari khandani jewelry hai...ab ye tumhara hua..

A: par

S:par war kuch nahi...neel bas aata hi hoga...who kehraha hai ki use aaj hi wapas apartment mein jaana hai..so tum pack karlo...jao..

Avni couldn't say anything..she just nodded and left for packing...

~~~

Neel opened the door...avni walked in..he locked the door and fell on the bed..finally back home he said..

Avni looked sad..

N: kya hua avni?..

A:mujeh ajeeb lag raha hai...I'm missing dad and mom...

Neel was happy but he came close and said...ghar wapas jaana hai kya?

She just nodded..

N:hum jaayenge na..weekends ko jaayenge...now cheer up ..ok?

Aur ha..maine dd se who recording leli hai...tum kuch kehrahi thin a...mai theek se samjha nahi ..so bhi phir se play karke dhekhengee..

Avni's eyes popped out..

A:neel..nahi..woh recording mujeh do...

And it went on...

~~~

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Posted: 7 years ago

#6a

after two weeks..

it's sunday today ...neil still sleeping...bebe ,shweta and prakash were going out...there was a house warming party of some person...

bebe:theek hai bahu...aate hai..

avni locked the door...

she went back to room ...

avni: neil...neil uthona...

neil: sone do na avni..aaj toh sunday hai..

avni: DD ne call kiya...ek bomb blast hua hai..

he got up with a jerk..

neil: kya?

avni:🤣

neil: aisa mazak karta hai koi...

avni:😆sorry na utho...

neil: kya?

avni: help chahiye...woh neeche ek room hai na...use paint karna hai..

neil:kyu?..tumhare kapde iss room ein bhi fit nahi horahe...

avni:shut up...uhto aur meri help karo..

neil:theek hai 5 min do...fresh hoke neeche aata hu..

he went down to that room...it was clean...why didn't he ever think of renovating this ...it was a storage place before..but it's well ventilated and spacious...

avni: coffee...

he turned around to see avni in shorts and a peeach crop top...

neil: ye tum sorts mein kyu ho?..

avni: paint karne mein easy hoga na...sari mein difficult hota hai..issliye..

she starts mixing the colour..

he sips onto his coffee...she is looking damn hot in those shorts...

and he was getting distracted...

neil: avni...tum jao...tracks pehen ke aajao..

avni: kyu?

neil:dekho itni tandi hawa aarahi hai...tumhe tand lagjayega..

avni :tumne sirf vest pehna hai...aur mujeh keh rahe ho...?mai nahi jaungi..mai theek hu..

neil: par mai nahi hu..

avni: KYA?😲

neil: kuch nahi...chalo start karo...

he picks up a roller..

neil: waise hume ye karni ki zaroorat nahi hai...mai abhi asian paints ko call karta hu...

avni stared at him...

avni: 🤔koi zaroorat nahi hai...hum kudh hi paint karenge...mujeh paint karna acha lagta hai...

neil: toh mai tumhe canvas aur paints lakar deta hu na...iss ki kya zaroorat hai?😕

avni: 😳

neil:chalo theek hai...atleast music toh onn kate hai...kaam easy hojayega...

he connects to radio...

Ullu Le, Ullu Ley

he moves his head to the tune...

Ullu Le, Ullu Ley

avni looks at him shocked...she never before saw him dance or grove to music...

Jaana Naho Jahaan Vaheen Jaata Hai

Dil Ulloo Ka Patta Hai

he looks at her and raises his eyebrows

he asks her for dance...

Thodee Takadeer Kyon Aazamaata Hai

Dil Ulloo Ka Patta Hai

she gives her hand in his...

he twirls her

Jana Na Ho Jahan Wahin Jaata Hai

Dil Ullu Ka Pattha Hai

and twirls again

Thodi Takdeer Kyon Ajmata Hai

Dil Ullu Ka Pattha Hai

and she laughs ..

and he picks up the roller...dips in brush in the paint on the tray and rolls on the wall...

Be Sar-Pair Ki Hai

Iss Ki Adatein

avni starts the camera and and places it in a corner...

she joins him ..picking up another brush

Aafat Ko Jaan Ke,

Deta Hai Dawatein

he keeps dancing crazily...

aise Aata Hai Chutki Mein Jaata Hai

Dil Sau Sau Ka Chhutta Hai

Jaana Na Ho Jahan Wahin Jata Hai

Dil Ullu Ka Pattha' Hai

Ullu Le, Ullu Le

he was about to go to that corner...

avni starts coughing suddenly...

neil: kya hua?

she continues to cough..

neil: mai pani leke aata hu...

she quickly goes and stops the recording...

neil comes back with a glass of water...

neil: ye lo...pani peelo...

avni: nahi nahi..i'm okay..

neil finds something fishy..

neil: avni wait..mujeh phone do apna..

avni : ku..kyu?

and now he knows...

neil: dedo phone...record kar rahi thi na ?

avni: 😆 nahi ..

neil tries to catch her...

and she escapes...

they keep running until the song finishes..

avni: bas karo na neil...

neil: delete karo recording...😡

#6b

Avni: nah...aur send...hogaya!!...i posted this in fam grp

Neil:😲

Neil: u'll pay for this avni...

He tries to catch her..but she escapes...

Avni: mujeh pakadna itna aasan nahi hai Mr.khanna..

Neil:ahhan?

And they run across the room...and just before avni reaches the door neil pulls her back...

Neil picks up the smaller can and smirks at her

Avni:neil...nahi...nahi..

Neil: ab tumne video send kardiya..toh apna punishment bhi lelo...

He shows her the can

Avni: sochna bhi mat...nahi..

Neil: mai permission nahi le rahahu okay...

He holds the can in his right hand and throws it towards her...

Avni closes her eyes...

But she didn't feel anything on her..and she opens her eyes...he shows the can..it's still not opened...

Neil : pura can kyu waste karunga mai...

Avni: 😲

Avni: neil...

He gets some colour on his palms...and pulls avni closer ..He was too quick that she couldn't escape...

...his one arm was around her waist...He kept his palm on her cheek ...and she made a face...Her eyes were shut ..eyebrows flat...nose scrunching ..She looked super cute...

She opened her eyes to see him grin like an idiot...she narrowed her eyes...pulled him closer by holding on to his vest...and rubbed her cheek against his...and it was her time to laugh..

He pulled her closer by her waist... she stopped laughing... and now realized their proximity and her cheeks heated up automatically...he slowly traced her nose with his index finger leaving a blue line along the bridge of her nose..

Avni: neil..kya kar rahe ho..

Neil:coloring u..

He said tracing her jawline...

Shweta:bebe...pani peelo..theek ho na...?

Bebe: ha bahu...bas chakkar aagaye the..mai theek hu...chalet hai na..party mein..

Prakash:nahi bebe...hum ghar chalengee...waise bhi zyada door nahi aaye ..bas 20 min mein pahuchjayenge..

All their mobiles keep on beeping...

Bebe: oho...kya ho raha hai..

Shweta: ek min..mai dhekthi hu bebe...ye ali itne messege kyu kar raha hai?..

Ali 12:15:🤣

Ali 12:16:🤣

Ali12:17:kya nacha hai..wah wah..

Ali 12:18:thanks for the video avni

Bebe:kya whatsapp hai ...har waqt bas beep hi karta reha hai..kya hua..mujeh bhi batao koi..

Ali12:19:🤣

Rhea12:20:🤣🤣

Ali12:20:high5! @rhea

Prakash: bebe avni ne grp mein koi vid send kiya hai..load ho raha hai..ek min..

Shweta:mera mobile mein load hogaya hai...play karti hu..

And neil was dancing crazily ...jumping with rollers in his hands..

Bebe: yehokyarahahai?

Shweta12:22:😆😆

Shweta:online bhi nahi hai...shayad usse pata hi nahi...

Prakash:ye shayad lad rahe hongey..issibaat pe..

Shweta: hey bagwaan..jaldi chaltein hai...pata nahi ni ghar ki halat kaisi hogi...

Bebe: tumhe ghar ki padi hai?

Shweta: bebe...mai ek nahi glass collection order ki hai...who hall mein hi padi hai...mujeh who sahi salamat chahiye ..

Bebe: acha theek hai theek hai..

They press the door bell...

Prakash: shayad current chaligay hogi ..issliye kaam nahi kar rahi..

Shweta: inverter hai na...

Prakash: par bell se connection nahi hai na shweta ji...

Bebe: shweta ..spare key hai kya?

They open the door to find everything in it's place...

Shweta runs to the huge carton box and hugs it..

Shewta: ye theek hai...kuch nahi hua in glassware ko ..

Prakash: oho...indono ko dhekiye kaha hai...

Bebe: woh store room kulla hai..aao dhekte hai..

they reached the door and were shocked at the sight ..

neil was hugging avni from back ..they couldn't see avni's face since it was towards other side...

There were palm impressions on his vest..her waist ..back..and they could definitely not miss to see the impressions on her thigh...which dragged down till her midcalf...neil bent down a bit to avni's ear...the tip of his nose touches her helix when bebe makes some sound..Prakash turns back...shweta finds the pattern on the floor very intresting suddenly...but avneil were busy in their job..

Bebe clears her throat a bit loudly this time..

And avneil look at the door...avni was more embarrassed than shocked not because of the shorts but because of the situation . she hides back of neil...

Neil was shocked to the core...

Neil:be ..bebe..aap ...aap wapas aagay?

Bebe: ha..

Neil: bell bhi nahi bajaya?

Shweta: current nahi hai..bell kaam nahi karraha..she says smirking at him..

Bebe: wasise hum ne socha ..kahi tum dono lad na lo..issiliye video dhekte hi aagaye...par yaha toh baat hi alag hai..

Neil: video?

Prakash looks back over his shoulders and says: avni ne grp mein post kiya..

Neil tries to look back but avni wasn't letting him move...she gripped back of his vest

Bebe: tumdono lage raho...continue...hum chaltein hai..

Avni: nahi bebe..

Bebe: kya nahi ?...aap ki marzi ...hum toh chalee..

They went out ..

Neil grabbed avni by her arm and moves her infront of him...

Neil: tumne sachi mein video post kardiya?

Avni smiles sheepishly...: haa

She was about to run out to their room...

Neil pulls her back again...

He wraps his arm around her neck...

Neil: ek selfie toh banta hai..iss art keliye..

Avni smiled

Neil took a selfie with his other hand just with their faces in closeup...

Avni: ab let me go...

Neil: never..

Avni pushes him back and runs to their room quickly...

neil checks his mobile and sees the messages..

neil:AVNIII😡

he runs to his room..

#6c

neil came down stairs to find everyone(khannas,neela,nanno,ali,rhea) gathered in the hall...

neil: wow...wat a surprise..aaj sab saath mein dinner karenge?

they smiled at him

he found something fishy...he looked around...avni is missing...

and suddenly music starts...

Ullu-le...

and everyone start dancing ...actually imitating neil's dance...

Jaana naa ho jahaan wahin jaata hai

Dil ullu ka pattha hai

Phooti taqdeer kyun aazmaata hai

Dil ullu ka pattha hai

ali comes towards him jumping crazily...

Ullu-le Ullu-le

neil jerks him away...

and avni comes out recording this also...😛

there was a battle going on between avni and neil...after the dance video thing...neil wanted to take revenge from avni ...he entered the kitchen last night ...avni was supposed to prepare dinner for everyone...and he was continuously troubling her ...she added suger in dal instead of salt...bebe replied with her usual famous one dialouge...

bebe: dhyaan kaha tha avni bahu?

neil came a bit close and said: neil 1 - avni 0

and sscrunched her nose in anger

today neil has a to a vid conference for some work related thing...and avni thought this is the best opportunity to take revenge...

neil wore a formal shirt ...and took his laptop to the study...he opened the door of study ...the room was very dark...

he tried o switch on the light..suddenly the doors get closed..and a very dim lights get on...he turns back to see avni in a red short dress ...short means really short...

neil gulps and asks: avni..kya kar rahi ho...mujeh call karna hai..

she comes close ..places a finger on his lips

a:shhh...

and the lights go off...

Pa ni sa..

music starts suddenly...

and the dim lights are back...

Pa ni sa.

avni sways to music beats..

neil was surely distracted...

Kaliyon jaisa husn jo paya

he tried to get out the room...but avni comes and stands before the door...

Har adaa mein noor hai aaya

(imagine avni doing the same step as Kiara)

neil gulped

Saat mare aur satattar ghayal

Blame doon Rab ko

Kyun aisa banaya?

she trails her hand along his jawline and then to his neck...

Tera jis se pad gaya paala

Acche ko ghalat kar daala

he moves away showing the laptop saying he has to mad a call...

Tera.. nahi tera koi dosh dosh

Tera husn hi jabardast dast

but avni keeps the laptop on the table and encloses his arms around her and sways to the beats..

Tu cheez badi hai mast mast

Tu cheez badi hai mast

Tu cheez badi hai mast mast

Main cheez badi hoon mast

she turns back and winks at him...and he freezes..'isse kya hogaya? 'he thinks...

Ho ankhiyan farebi, shaitani hain

Ishq mein tere marjani hai

she moves to his back..and makes some patterns teasing him...

Kitna koi khud ko bachaaye

Aag dilon mein lag jaani hai

she circles her arms around his neck...from back..but he jerks off...

he moves a bit back and sings along...

Jaadu aisa kar daala

Na hosh kisi ne sambhala

Tera..

Nahi tera koi dosh dosh

Tera husn hi jabardast dast

she smiles at him...and walks towards him...

Tu cheez badi hai mast mast

Tu cheez badi hai mast

he winks at her..

Tu cheez badi hai mast mast

Main cheez badi hoon mast

she pushes him to the table and kisses him on cheek...and says seductively...

a: neil...

n: hmm...

a:neil...

n: yaa..

she brings his left hand near his eyes and his eyes widen...

she winks and leaves the room...

neil: shit shit shit...i'm late for the conf call...

he makes a call...

neil: good evening sir...

he noticed that the person on the other side was looking at him and smiling at him.

for a moment neil doubted if that person was straight...

neil: sir is something wrong?

person: Mr.Khanna ...ummm..the ..the lipstick mark on your cheek...

neil never felt this embarrassed ever before..

neil: just a min sir...

he moved out of the frame..

he cleaned his face once ..and before he went back he got a message...

avni: one all Mr.Khanna...😉

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Posted: 7 years ago

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avni:AHHH..

she screams again...and neil falls down the bed...

Neil:Kya hua?..kya hua?...gun kaha hai meri?...humla hua hai kya?

he speaks out in one breath...looking at the ceiling..

avni throws a pillow at him...and then he looks at her..

avni: idiot...

neil: kya hua avni..

avni: my water broke...😡

neil:kya?..nahi nahi baby..aaj nahi hoga...false alaram hai ye..😳..

avni:😲ARGG...😡

she trows another pillow at him...

Avni:hospital bag lao...

she goes out of the room...

neil: what?..KYA?...sach mein?..😲

'get the bag NEIL...quick...'he heard her scream..

his eyes widened...and he ran and came down...

Prakash was in driving seat...

shweta:kuch nahi .theek ho tum bacha..

avni sees neil..

avni: neil..bag kaha hai?

he looks down at his hands...

avni:😳😡

neil: one min...

avni had another contraction...

shweta makes her sit in the car...

neil quickly comes out with the bag...get's into the back seat...

shweta calls and informs neela..

prakash starts the car..and drives out quickly..

doctor: she is just 3cm now...admit kartein hai...u'll have to wait..

avni was breathing in and out loudly..

avni:HMMPP...UFFF...HUMMMPP..UFFF..

neil: it's okay it's ok...breath in ..breathout...

he said caressing her hair..

...

neela came there...

shweta: neela ji..

they came in to see avneil

neil: baby breath in ...breath out...

avni: shut upp...HUMMMPPP..

nurse came in...u'll have to exercise a bit madam..she showed the ball

avni's eyes widened seeing the ball...

and she started panting hard...

doctor:6 cm

avni sighed

neil: AVNI...hojayega...hojayega...

avni: neil...agar mai moti hojaungi toh phir bhi mujh se pyaar karoge na?

neill: kya baby?

avni:

neil: ofcoursee...haa...

doc: 9 cm...

avni looked at neil...

neil:PUSH AVNI...PUSH...

he said holding her hand...and she hit him..with that hand

Avni:ARRRGGG

avni: neil ye sab tumhare wajeh se ho raha hai...

neil: maine kya kiya baby?

avni: AHHH...UFFF..HMMM...

avni:kya kiya?...ha?...kya kiya?..yaad nahi hai tumne kya kiya?

neil:

avni:AHHH

****

neil:AHHH

everyone came into the room...

avni came out of the washroom...

Avni;neil..neil kya hua?

shweta: kya hua tilllu...?

he opens his eyes to find all of them staring at him...

neil:avni...avni meri akeli ki galti nahi hai...i'm sorry..

avni:😕neil tum kya kehrahe ho..

prakash: neil beta..tum theek ho na?...doc ko bulau?

neil didn;t listen a word..

he's looking at avni ..

neil:9cm hai na...bas 1cm..hojayega..don't worry..

avni didn't understand a word..😕

prakash and shweta looked at each other...😲

she held his face and shouted...

avni:NEIL...NEIL...calm down...kuch nahi hua hai...

he stops and looks at her...her tummy was flat ...

neil:Bacha?

avni:NEIL?

avni makes him drink some water...

shweta: oho tillu..theek ho na tum?

neil looks aroound...

neil:Sapna tha...

he sighs in relief...

#9a

neil got a call .

neil: kya?..konsa hospital?..i'm coming..

he said walking out of his cabin...

...he rushed to hospital..colllided with a staff member..

Both neela ,avni ,nanno, ali were seated in there garden . avni came to neela's place for lunch.

Though dayawanti was behind the bars, she succeed in brainwashing amol against avni. Amol was blinded by his grandmom's words. He just wanted to take revenge from avni and neil.

When there were in garden avni walking back towards house when she heard neela scream her name..

Neela: AVNI..

She turned back .but neela pushed her and before avni could understand neela fell down and blood was oozing out..

Avni: MAAA...

Ali quickly turned to see who it was and saw aman speeding away in a car..

Ali: aman?

Avni looked at him..

Avni: ma..ma aakhnein kholo ..

...

They rushed her to hospital..

Neil: OT kaha hai?

Staff: uss taraf sir.

Neil ran in that direction ...and saw avni from back..she was standing in front of the OT...

Ali and nanno were seated ...ali was consoling nanno...neil went to avni and placed a hand on her shoulder...

Avni turned back...

She broke into tears..

Avni: neil..ma...ma..amam..ma..

Neil: shhh...ma theek hojayenge...

Doctor came out .avni rushed towards the doctor first followed by neil

Avni: doc..woh theek hai na.?..ma theek ho jayenge na?

Doc: dhekiye ..bullet heart ki bahut nazdeek tha.. unki condition abhi bahut hi critical hai...abhi hum kuch nahi kehsakte...

"AVNI...AVNI...bacha khaha ho...khana khalo..

Avni remembered neela running after her with blind fold on..playing in the garden...She remembered neela waking up all night long ..nursing her when she was suffering from high fever..those days when she had her board exams ...bringing her hot tea during nights when she was studying...she was there with her when she cried waking up after horrible nightmares...she took avni in her arms...and put her to sleep...

Her neela ma became her friend. She remembered how she fed her with her hands saying the stories with she knew aren't ture... toh issne bola Mr.red " ...neela stpped as avni cut her saying " ma ..mai 15 saal ki huto which neela replied " toh kahani toh kahani hai na?

She remembered how everytime she was upset how her neela ma tickled her ..made her laugh..

How her neela ma scolded her ...getting teary eyed and nursing the wound on her knee when she fell down while learning scooty...

"AVNI...dheere bacha chot lag jayegi..."

"avni...kya banau tumhare liye?..."

"ohoo..toh ye hai tumhara pehla crush avni?"

"avni...mirchi lagi kya?...pani lau?"

"avni..kaha ja rahi ho?.. maine kaha na...ye chapter hone tak tum kahi nahi jasakti..baito aur padho.."

"oho...meri beti sari mein kitni pyaari lag rahi hai...nazar na lage kisi ki"

she pushed her to save her...and got shot...

ma ..mai aapko nahi kho sakti ...meri ma ko ek aur bar nahi kho sakti...please mujeh chodke mat jao...' she thought..

6 hrs later..

8:30PM...

Even shweta and prakash reached there...

Neil: avni

She looked up..

He offered a cup of coffee...

She nodded no..

Neil: please ..peelo..

He sat beside her and made her drink coffee...

Avni: neel..

Neel turned towards her...she looked very serious..

Avni: mai tumse kuch maang sakti hu?

Neil kneeled down infront of her..

Avni: amol ko saza milni chahiye...

Neil cupped her face..he knew how broken she was right now...she called aman amol...that itself shows .

Avni:neil ..woh mujeh marna chahta tha..par ma ko...ma beech mein aagayi...aaj agar mai phir se meri ma ko kho ne ki stage mein hu...uss..uska zimedar sirf amol hai...sirf amol..

And more tears make their way down her cheeks..

Avni: nahi chahiye mujeh...aisa bhai..jo mujhse meri ma ko chenle...nahi chahiye mujeh

Neil hugged her..

Neil: avni...I promise u. ..amol ko uske kiye ka saza zaroor milega..

Avni: aur who bhi ma ko hosh aane se pehle..

Neil nodded ...placed a kiss on her forehead...told shweta to takecare of her..and left the place...

#10

hello guys..sorry if u were expecting #9b...but u guys can imagine what wud have happened right...

so #10 is here...happy read...😊

After a month..

Avni just came back after a meeting .

Bebe: tu aagayi puttar...fresh ho ke neeche aajao...

Avni: ji bebe..

They all were sitting on the dining table. Avni was waiting for neil...

Bebe: neil kaha hai?

Prakash: pata nahi bebe..kuch bata ya nahi.

Avni: mai call karti hu...

Shweta: woh...aisa hi karta hai..humesha...

Avni's mobile beeped...

Bebe: neil ka hi message hoga..dhek lena..

Neil 8:30 : busy. Will be late...

Avni: busy hai...der hojayega..

Bebe: chalo theek hai...khana shuru karo sab..

Shweta: avni...beta utjao...

Avni slowly opened her eyes..

Shweta: yaha sofe pe kyu sogai ?

Avni: woh mom..neil ka wait kar rahi thi...pata nahi chala kab sogai

Shweta: nahi ya na..tillu bhi aisa hi karta hai humesha...ab pata nahi kitne din ke baad ayega..

Avni: din!?

Shweta: who kabi kabi 3-4 din kaam pe hi laga rehta hai..pata nahi kaha chal ja ta hai...

Avni: mai call karke dhekti hu ma..

She called him...but his mobile was switched off...

She waited for 5 mins..then decided to call DD..

DD: hello bhabhi..

Avni: DD..neil ghar nahi aaye...tumhe kuch pata hai kya?

DD: darasal bhabhi...sir ek mission pe hai...aaj subha hi Hyderabad keliye nikle...

Avni: kab wapas aayenge?

DD: pata nahi...par aap fikr matkijiye..

Avni: thankyou DD..

After 5 days...

2:00AM

Avni called him again. His mobile was still switched off.

Avni: neend aane se toh nahi rahi..jake ek coffee hi banaleti hu..

she wasn't able to sleep properly ...since past 5 days shweta spotted her in different places of the house except her bedroom...one day she was on sofa..second day near pool, third day ..study ..other day...a bench on lawn..

avni decided to back to her room so that she'll not have to answer shweta ma next mrng..

walking out of the kitchen she sees a shadow on the wall near stairs. She decides to check. And then she sees her shadow covered by another shadow as she felt someone standing back of her

Avni: neil..

Neil: kaise pata chala

He said hugging her from back..placing his chin on her shoulder...she turned and hugged him back..

They were really tired. None of them had proper sleep . Neil crashed onto the bed soon they entered the room...avni pushed neil..

Neil: avni tum aaj uss taraf sojao na..

Avni: nahi..

she pushed him a bit...but h e didn't move...so she lie on top of him as she's too lazy to go to the other side...pulling the comforter over them..he wrapped his arms around her.

...

Bebe:avni kaha hai? .breakfast ke liye nahi ayi?

Shweta: neil aaya hai.. so rahe hai dono abhitak...maine uthaya nahi...

2:30PM

Avni was the first one to wakeup...she saw his face once and buried her head on his chest again..she felt great that she pulled the comforter over them last night...they are completely tangled...she felt neil pulling her closer...she looked at him again...he smiled at her...

Avni: good morning

He just kissed top of her nose ...

Avni: get me a big teddy bear ...

Neil: kyu?

Avni: mujeh theek se neend nahi aa rahi thi..aadat padgayi..aise sone ki...

Neil: acha?

avni: umm...

neil: hmm..miss kiya mujeh?

Avni: bilkul nahi...

She said hugging him tight..

Avni: aur tum..

Neil : bilkul nahi..

He replied touching her forehead with his...

And they burst out laughing...

" DIRECT DINNER S KOHI BAHAR AAOGE KYA? they heard shweta scream from the hall..

Avni looked at the wallclock...and her mouth formed a perfect O in shock as she realized the time...

Avni: neil uto...time dekho...

#10B

AlEa came to khanna house...

alEa: hello aunty..

shweta: oho...what a pleasant surprise ...ali rhea...aao...

ali: neil aur avni kaha hai aunty?

Shweta: abhi abhi uthe hai dono...

Ali: in dono ki timings toh kuch zyaada hi alag hote hai

Rhea hit his arm...and went to shweta..

Rhea: aunty..say hi to all...

Shweta: kon alls?

Rhea: mera vlog aunty..camera...

Shweta: tujeh abhi tak vlogs ka aadat nahi utra kya?anyways..hi she said looking at the camera..

Ali: mai jaake bulata hu...un dono ko...aunty aap bebe aur uncle ko bhi bhulayina...

Shweta: prakash ji toh ghar pe nahi hai..mai bebe ko bulaungi..

When they reach avneil's bedroom...rhea stopped at the door s...

Ali:aap dono ko time ka koi matlab nahi hota nah?...bas lage rehte ho..apne romance mein?

Avneil look at them...

Avni:arey ali ..rhea...

Neil: hi guys...andar aao...

Ali: tumdono hi neeche aao..kuch important batana hai...

Neil: okay...

He went to washroom...ali also went down... rhea came to avni..

Rhea: waise kya ho raha tha?...i'm sorry hum ne aap dono ko interrupt kiya...aur aap dono ka kiss adura rehgaya?

Avni's eyes widened...: kiss?chup kar rhea..aisa kuch nahi tha...

Rhea frowned in confusion...: tu aisi kyu keh rahi hai...wait a min...tum dono ne abhiu tak kiss nahi kiya?...really?...7 mahine hogay hai..tum dono ki shaadi hoke...don't tell me abhi tak tum dono ne kiss nahi kiya...

Avni : arey...chodo na..tum jao..hum aate hai...tode der mein...

Neil:Ab bataoge bhi ya nahi?kya baat hai...

AlEa were smiling...

Ali and rhea go to bebe with a card...

Ali: hum dono shaadi kar rahe hai...

They were all very happy...avneil just looked at each other in shock...

Avni ran to rhea and rugged her...

Neil: congratulations guys...

Shweta: congratulations...

Bebe opened the card...2 weeks ke baad?

Ali: ha bebe...

Neil: itni jaldi kya hai ali?...2 weeks mein?

Avni: ha rhea...tum dono ne bataya hi nahi...

Ali: tum dono ki toh shaadi ho gayi...toh tum dono ko samaj mein nahi aayega...

Rhea: ali aur maine milkar decide kiya hai..phir ma aur nanno se baat kiya...woh maan gay...2 week ke baad ka muhurat nikla hai...and next week we all are going to udaipur...it's destination wedding ...so sab apne packing shuru kardo...

Avneil: wow...

Bebe: hum zaroor aayenge...ghar ke bache ho tumdo...

AlEa left after sometime...

Avni was standing on terrace ...looking at the moon..

Neil: kya kar rahi ho Mrs.neil?

A: aapka wait kar rahi thi Mr.neil

She said turning back..

N: kyu?...

She gestured him to come closer..and he did...

A: tum ne abhi tak mujeh kiss kyu nahi kiya?

Neil was taken aback...

N: kyu matlab? Tum ne bhi toh mujeh kiss nahi kiya?

A: toh?

N: tum chahti ho ki mai tumhein kiss karu?

He asked placing his both hands on either side of the railing and caging her...

She nodded...

As he leaned in to kiss her...she closed her eyes tightly and said

A: kiss kaise karte hai?

He stopped where he was and opened his eyes...

Neil: kya?

She opened her eyes..

A: mujeh nahi pata..

Neil kept looking at her...

A: kya hua?

Neil: aise..

Saying that he kissed her softly...it was a long one...finally when she was out of breath she placed her hands on his chest...he pulled back to see her looking down..

N: omg...meri biwi ko itna sharmana bhi aata hai?

Avni looked at him...

Neil kissed her again...she tried to copy him this time...he smiled in the kiss at she started to respond..soft kiss became harsh and rough soon...no doubt neil was the dominant one...avni suddenly felt week in her knees and placed her one hand on his shoulder other around his neck...she was thankful to him as he had his one arm wrapped around her holding her...

Avni broke the kiss as she was out of breath...

But neil sat down leaning against the railing and pulled her down ...he looked at her...leaned in a bit close but didn't kiss her...as he wanted her to initiate it this time...and she did...

Edited by ...san... - 7 years ago

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