A UNFORGETABLE MEMORY

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It was morning. They had slept late at night as Neel had to wish Avni at 12.Neel woke up, stretched his arms and yawned. He looked at Avni who was still asleep beside him. Peace was the visible expression with some strands of hair on her face. Neel carefull tucked them behind her ear so that he could stare at her beautiful face without any problem."Isn't she cute" he thought. He kissed her forehead gently and than she woke up. She looked at Neel who was still staring at her. With a bright smile she said,"Good morning Supercop Tillu"His face turned pale and he spoke,"Good morning wify but i told u not to call me Tillu right."She just giggled. Neel sighed"Happy birthday Mrs Khanna".Avni just smiled and went in bathroom. Neel couldn't control his excitment to see what Avni was going to wear .Avni came out wearing a casual saree .Neel frowned,"Avni aaj tumhara birthday hai aur tum ye normal si saree pehan rahi ho."Avni said,"Kya farak padta hai Neel."He said,"Aaj mujhe jaldi kaam se jaana hai. Jaise tumhe farak nahi padta mujhe bhi nahi padta and i am not taking leave."Neel knew that he had a surprise planned for Avni. With a blank expression on her face Avni went out of the room.Nobody in the house was aware of Avni's birthday. Neela called Avni and wished her.In the evening Neel went to Ali's house to show the gown he had bought for Avni after searching the whole evening. Neel wanted to make Avni's birthday a special memory for her afterall he loved Avni the most.
Precap :Avni receives a call from Ali and is heartbroken.💔


I hope u like it and do share ur opinion.Suggest if i should continue or stop this here.

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sugar_candy15 thumbnail
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Posted: 8 years ago
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This is my first ff. Waiting for ur suggestions😊😉
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Posted: 8 years ago
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its cutee ... really cute ... continue ... soon ..☺️ loved their convo
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Cute.. loved it...
I have one suggestion... in the title please write ff
Continue soon.. will be waiting
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Please do continue, quite excited to know what happens ahead.
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Of course continue... Good one...
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Very nice start dear...
Really cute. Your pen possess great potential...
Do write next part soon..
Precap sounds interesting.. So can't wait to read that..😃
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Why is she heartbroken?? Kisko kya ho gya??
Please continue and update...
Coz it is exciting.. Neil is so cute and there convo and Neil saying that I m going to office, mujhe bhi fark nai padta jaise tumhe nai padta... Hehehehehe..
Loved this part..

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