Avneil: Kyun main jaagoon; FF; chapter 13 page 35(UPDATED 22/09) - Page 2

Oh yeah

Amazing start

Amazing start dear continue it with Neil's POV and what happen next day
Update soonish

Amazing yaar...

Neils PoV and please PM me Mehek when u upload it

This is my ff, hope you like it.

The lines in black colour are for what Neel is thinking and speaking, Red colour ones are for song and blue is for what author is saying or describing.

the paragraph above the song is what is happening or what is neel saying when the that particular lines are being played in the background

Neel's POV(of same night)

Neel comes to his room with the support of his parents. They made him lay on the bed.

Shweta spills venom through her words "kya haalt kar di hai use she winces " ladki ne mere bechare tillu ki she was about to say more but her husband cuts her in between and says Chalo shweta ji neel ko aaram karne do

She nods but was unwilling to leave her son. But eventually went with her husband. As soon as Neel hears the sound of closing door, his eyes opens, they were bloodshot red from crying. He stands up and walks near the window and looks at the moon. He recalls what scene was going on when he and his police force had come to his house.

Tune jo na kaha, mein woh sunta raha
Khamaka bewaja khwaab buntha raha
Mmm mmm mmm... mmm mmm

How could I have thought that you and ali were having affair;even for some time. How could have I doubted you. I know that Ali loves you but you never said it. Never. Then how could I

He breaks down and could not complete his sentence further. He was now sitting on the floor with his legs folded and tightly pressed to his chest, his head on his knees and was crying too. He got his face red too due to continuous crying.

Rhea kyo kiya tumne ye. Avni aur mera saath kyo kiya ye. Bhaag gai thi na tum shaadi se aur pyaar bhi nhi karti thi mujhe; bas obsession tha tumhe vo bhi bahut pehle over ho gaya tha. Phir kyo hume alag karne ki koshish ki. Kyo mujhe se avni ko dur karne ki sazish ki. Aisa kya cheen liya tha meri avni ne jo tum itni neeche gir gai ki apni hi behen ko badnaam kiya tumne. Kuch nhi cheena tha usne, vo liya jo uska tha. How could you stoop so low. Disgusting. Because of you only hum itne dur ho gai hai. I promised her ki me uska saath dunga aur use kabhi akela nhi chodonga but I couldn't fulfil my promise. Humari duriya kam honeki bajae aur jyada bar gai hai. Pata nhi maaf bhi karegi bhi avni ya nhi. Jo mene kiya h usse to vo mera chehra bhi dekhna na pasand kare.

Tune jo na kaha, mein woh sunta raha
Khamaka bewaja khwaab buntha raha
Jaane kiski humein lag gayi hai nazar
Is shehar mein na apna tikana raha
Durr chahat se mein apni chalta raha
Khamaka bewaja khwaab buntha raha

Kitna dard ho rha tha dil me jab sab avni ko blame kar rhe the. Dono waqt me kuch nhi kar pa rha tha. Pehle me shock me chala gaya tha ki ye sab kya ho rha h, meri avni ke itne paas ali kyo h. Paralyse sa ho gaya tha. Aur saath me jealous bhi feel kar raha tha; isliye avni ko bacha nhi paya. Jaanta ho ye koi excuse nhi h but jealousy me insaan kuch bhi kar deta h aur use pata hi nhi chalta ki vo sahi kar rha h ya nhi. man kar rha tha ki ali ka encounter kar do. Par kuch kar nhi pa rha tha;

Dard pehle se hai zyaada, khud se phir yeh kiya wada
Khamosh nazrein rahe bezuban
Hmmm...mmm...mmm...

Dusri baar bhi kuch nhi kar paya. Sab kuch aur jyada bigad gaya jab me aaya use rhea ke saath. Kaise baatata ki ye sab mera plan h tumhe pure and innocent prove karne ke liye wifey. Kaise?

Throughtout he was crying continuously.

Par ab mujhe dar lag rha h ki kahi tumhe innocent prove karne ke chakkar me me tumhe kho to nhi dunda? Kyoki diya h mene tumhe dard, vo kiya unjaaneme jo tumhare dad ne tumhari aisha ma ke saath kiya tha. Me nhi kho sakta tumhe avni. I love you avni. Maaf kardena mujhe.

Apno phele si baatein hai, bolo tho lab thar tharatein hai
Raaz yeh dil ka, na ho bayaan
Ho gaya ke aasar koi hum pe nayi
Humsafar mein tho hai humsafar hai nayi
Durr jatha raha, paas aatha raha
Khamaka bewaja khwaab buntha raha
Hmmm...mmm...mmm...

Bas ab kal subha ka intezaar h. Phir sab kuch theek ho jaega. Rhea ki asliat sabke saamne aa jaegi.

As he says this he wipes off his tears and stands up. He goes near the dressing mirror and

says "rhea jo dard tumne avni ko diye h, jo aasu uski aakho me aae h unsab ka hisaab kal me tumse le kar rakhonga and that to with interest" he was in angry look and then he punched the mirror. Then he removes his hand from mirror and places on the wall adjacent to it. With that he moves his other hand over his hair and says "I hope avni theek ho abhi, I know she is strong to vo kuch galat nhi karegi apne saath. ja bhi to nhi sakta me uske paas. Pata nhi konse room me h, shayad dad ko pata ho. But kya vo mera chehra dekhna bhi pasand karegi agar dad ne mujhe bata bhi diya? After all mene uske saath bahut bura kiya h. I think subha baat karonga me, jab me use innocent prove kar donga sabke saamne. Tab shayad vo mujhe maaf karde. Aur agar nhi kiya to? To shayad me uski nafrat hi derserve karta ho pyaar nhi

as he says the last line a tear fell off his eye

his phones messsge ringtone s sound echos in the room.

DD ka messsge hoga check karta hu.

He goes and checks his phone

Kaam ho gaya sir, aap so jaie sab theek ho jaega. the message says

Thank you, neel typed and send the message

Sona chahiye mujhe, kal bahut kuch karna h

He goes to the bed and lies down and tires to sleep. He gets sleep not because he was tired or exhaust but because he wanted to dream him and his avni in his arms after the confession of both the things, truth and their love. He wants to dream his lady love so sleep also comes to him.

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This is my avneil ff. Hope you guys like this, if yes don't forget to hit the like and comment down below please. And if no then also comment to share your view.

Sorry for any grammatical error or any other error.

Next chapter will be what happened in the morning so for disappointing you today.

Thank you for reading

Love you all

Mehak

Originally posted by: AgnesFan

it was so good 👏

she accepted that she loves Neil in fit of emotions 💔

you had beautifully penned her turmoil

thank you

Lovely sweetheart...do continue.n thank you for obliging

Originally posted by: Affinity

could you please do Neel's POV of the night, or what happens to avni next morning.
Amazing job lovely! Do continue soon!!😊

thank you

Originally posted by: Deepti_98

Oh yeah

A new FF in this Forum🥳

The start was amazing

It was beautifully penned down

Do update soon...

thank you