AvNeil OS : Pregnancy ???

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Hey guys I am back with a new OS . 😊 Hope you will like it .
Avni and Neil was coming from Neela's house after having dinner . Neil was in thoughts about what Neela aunty has said .

Neil : what should i do . She only stayed back at my house because bebe told her . When bebe will leave she will go .

Neela : I am her mother i know she stayed there not only for Bebe but for you also

Neil : If she wants repay what she consider as a favour then i dont need it

Neela : She is saying like that but i know that she condsider you as a husband but after witnessing all these things that happened with me and Ayeshaji she is afraid that it may happen to her . She has seen lot of things that a 11 year old child should not have witness . She afraid of getting hurt . She is trying to save her from pain . Neil you were the first man who she trusted after what Ashish did with her . She was so impressed that she came and talked with me about you .

All these words were echoing in his ears when suddenly Avni screemed

Neil : Avni what happened are you alright

Avni : Yeah I fine what happened to me

Neil : If nothing happened why did you screemed

Avni : Oh the screem . Look there . There is a pani puri stall . I want to have it

Neil : Avni is this a time to have it and anyway the whether is changing . Its not good to have outside food . It may make you sick .

Avni : My immune system is strong unlike you who becomes sick after eating an ice-cream .

Neil : My immune system is strong . That day i was already sick .

Avni : Then prove it . Lets have competition who wins have a strong immune system .

Neil : challenge accepted .

In the mind Avni was smirking because her plan was working .

They went near the stall and started their competition Avni wins because neil lets her win just to see her beautiful smile . After competition they go to their home and sleeps .

The next morning when Avni wakes up she feels dizzy but ingnores it and look around the room to find Neil but she couldnt find him . So she gets ready and goes downstairs for breakfast.

Avni : Bebe did you see Neil

Bebe : Yeah neil went to work . He said its an emergency.

Avni sits and sees her plate and feel nauseous and goes from there to bathroom while bebe was following her . After finishing her business she came out found bebe smiling .

Bebe : For few days i have been noticing that you look pale . Now i understood why you were looking pale . Congratulations.

Avni was so confuse at what bebe was saying .

Bebe : Finally i will become great grandmother.

Avji was shocked and couldnt say anything . Bebe makes her sit in the bed and leaves .

Avni : i am just sick . Neil was right i shouldnt have eaten it . I have to tell Neil but Neil will make fun of me . Avni you deserve it and now dont think if Neil will make fun or not which he will obiviously make .Just think of getting out of this situation .

After making her mind she goes to police station when she reaches she feeling lot worse than in the morning . When she enters she finds DD

DD : bhabhiji are you alright

Avni : Yeah . Where is neil ?

DD : sirji will be coming now

Just then avni couldnt hold it and vomits in the dustbin

DD: congratulations bhabhiji you are pregnant and sirji didnt tell us .

Avni : DD its not what you think it is

DD : bhabhiji dont lie to me

Avni couldnt stand arguing to DD as she was feeling dizzy .

Avni : when neil comes ask him to come to his cabin i am waiting in there .

And she goes while talking to herself

Avni : what is happening. Why does everyone think that i am pregnant.

Avni sits in the chair and lays down in table and falls asleep .

After an hour neil comes to station . When Neil enetered everyone started with their congratulations.

DD : congratulations sirji . Bhabhiji is waiting for you in your cabin

Neil : what is avni doing here .

DD : You should ask yourself . Again sirji congratulations .

Neil : why is everyone congrulating me . What have i done so good that i dont know .

When he enters his office he finds avni sleeping.

Neil : why is she sleeping at this hour is she fine .

Neil goes towards her and sees that her face was covered with her hair . So he removes it and gets lost in her innocent face which was lot paler . Just then avni stirs and wake up .

Avni : Neil

Neil : Are you alright Avni ? Why are you sleeping in this hour .

Avni : Neil nothing is fine . There is a big problem .

Neil gets panic and cups avni face

Neil : avni what happened

Avni : i am sick and everyone thinks i am pregnant .

She tells Neil what happened to her from morning .

Neil gets shocked and remembers all congratulations that his staff gave .

Neil : thats why everone was giving their congratulations to me .

Avni : what

Neil : Nothing . Last night i told you not to eat and you don't listen to me Avni . Why dont you listen to me avni .

Avni : cant you stop me . And stop scolding me i am already not feeling well .

Neil get guilty and stop scolding her

Neil : okay lets go and visit doctor and we wil tell bebe it was only food poisoning. And by the way i have a strong immune system because i am not sick .

Avni : neil

Neil : avni

They leaves the station and goes to doctor where the doctor confirms it as food poisoning much to bebe disappointment. That night Neil take care of avni whole night .

From this incident avni got to know that how much Neil cares for her she is not just a case . He is not like Ashish Meheta who will abodon her .

Neil was determined to make Avni love him like he loves her .


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Posted: 8 years ago
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Mairaa..
This was a different take on Avni's pregnancy fiasco..
I just loved it..
I wish it could be so light and cute in the show..
The panipoori competition was a good idea.. He let her win.. So cute..
You write every situation very nicely..
And thank you for this cute OS..
Thanks for pm..
I wanna see more from you..
Love..
Vihu..
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: vu1998

Mairaa..

This was a different take on Avni's pregnancy fiasco..
I just loved it..
I wish it could be so light and cute in the show..
The panipoori competition was a good idea.. He let her win.. So cute..
You write every situation very nicely..
And thank you for this cute OS..
Thanks for pm..
I wanna see more from you..
Love..
Vihu..


Thanks vihu .
Was waiting for your comment
Yeah you will se more writing from me just give me ideas
I am just glad you like and i was going to go in that direction but didnt feel like to insult avni so took a different turn .
And already have an idea for next Os will try to update it tomorrow 😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: pri12

Awsome Maira...Loved it


Thanks pri .
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Thank you 😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
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that was so sweet OS
i wonder what will happen when she will actually be pregnant
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: suhaaana

that was so sweet OS

i wonder what will happen when she will actually be pregnant


I think they both will be the happiest person alive . Thank you
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Sweet one.
Love how cutely you moulded the whole situation here.
Wish it was like this only in the show.
Do write more. 😳
Lots of love,
Zuu
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Wow :)
Beautiful OS :)
So damn cute :)
Loved it :)
Keep writing more :)
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Awesome..
This one is really cute.. Something totally different from the show and without Ali, Shweta and Rhea the scene was just amazing...
Keep writing yaar..


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