AVNEIL FF : NAINA ASHQ NA HO - BOOK 2 (CHAPTER 47 UPDATED ON PG 60) - Page 6

Originally posted by: Somewhatwriter

First of all congratulations on your second book! I know you have the talent to write millions and millions of books to no avail and i will always read them and love them... second of all...

Oi hello! You wanted me to comment on this?! How did you think anything i was capable of writing woulf be worthy enough praise of the masterpiece i just laid my eyes upon?!

I run short of words to describe how alive your writing becomes in my eyes, i could read entire dictionaries and cruise through the entire thesaurus yet not find a single word quite intense enough to describe what you do to all you readers- how you make us feel. It has the ability to brighten our moods with laughter or a smile and the ability to shatter us with how beautifully depict each character's pain and grief.

And now on to the actually happenings of the chapter... OUR TILLU IPS NEIL KHANNA IS ALIVE? HE'S ALIVE!... but what a cruel way to let us know yaar... you had to make us see another's broken heart... 'without a ray of hope' i felt so bad for her poor soul that i couldnt even celebrate properly. Vihu yaar, how you write man... the plot, the description, the dialougue its all absolutely flawless, how do you do it?!

Thank you for making my day a little brighter, god bless,

Shreya

Originally posted by: nimarious

wat an update I yar vihu
perfectly written
amazingly described
it was full of emotions
feeling bad for Dr vishakha
she left ayna to save her love but she saved avni's love
happy to know that finally it's clear to avni's that he is her Neil
I hope soon we will get their confrontation ...
do update soon
love
sneha

Originally posted by: -Mairaa-

Wow vihu what an chapter . Finally we got to know who is he . Waiting to know how all this happened . Todays chapter was so beautifully written . So many emotions . Avni POV was the best .