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Preeran345

@Preeran345

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Posted: 8 years ago

My new ff on Avneil.Based on a college story.

Characters are somewhat the same...but story different from the show.Story will be divided into moments btwn Avneil.

Happy reading !

Nothing lasts forever. ..not even the pain.

Introduction :

#Moment1

Painful Childhood

She had been sitting in d corner of the hut n water was dripping from its roof.

"beautiful no?"

He came back smiling to the hut.

"Painful" she said.

"what dis rain is painful for u??why avni? Asked neil.

YUP IT IS.

Avni tried to hide a lone tear escaping thru her eyes.

She was indeed sad.

#Flashback

Ayesha was sitting in the room weeping.she had an argument with Ashish.

It was raining outside.

Ashish had left the house angrily.

Little avni saw her mom crying n asked.

"Mumma kya hua apko plz batao ?"

Nothing beta...

Jab hum life mein ek galat insan ko chun lete hain toh uska dard puri umar jeena padta h...

IM SORRY meri bachi...mere sath sath tujhe bhi ye dard mil gaya...h shayad sari umar k liye...

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FLASHBACK ENDS.

"Shayad sari umar k liye...

"Nahi Avni Sari umar k liye nahi "

Neil said wiping her tears.

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Characters :

Neil khanna: A sweet boy and studies at mount college.

Avni Ayesha: A girl haunted by painful past ...tries to smile but just cannot get thru the painful life.

Studies at mount college.

Riya :Neil's family friend.

Ali : The bad guy at college.

Riya's best friend.

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INDEX

PROLOGUE &

PART1 - PAGE 1

Edited by Ashi345678 - 8 years ago

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Posted: 8 years ago

Bring it on Ashi...waiting for it

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Posted: 8 years ago

I would love to read this..

Please continue it soon Ashi...

My best wishes are with you...

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Preeran345

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Posted: 8 years ago

KYUN DARD HAI ITNA

PART 1

Avni was a cute girl in the first year at mount college.

Dressed in a denim tunic and long sleeve top she had dark spectacles on her eyes.

Though she carried a nerdy look she was damn pretty.

Neil Khanna was a student of maths stream n in same class as Avni but they had never talked much.

He was good at studies but Was a no nonsense Boy.

Avni was walkinh in the corridor when someome snatched her specs n she turned to look helplessly.

It was Ali smiling naughtily at her.

"Boo" he teased her n other boys startwd playing with the specs.

Someome tossed the spectacle in d air when A hand grabbed it and he walked towards avni who was crying by now.

Avneil Moment :

"Ye lo..." he gave her the spectacle n turned towards the boys giving them a tough look as if he wud burn them with his eyes.

Ali walked towards him n said

"Chill dude...dont mess with us for this ...

Piece of joke..."he said pointing towards avni.

"Joke kiska banega ye toh waqt batayega...so just be careful"

Said Neil n he took avnis hand n walked from there.

Neil kept walking while avni freed her hand n thanked neil.

"Thanks..." she said.

"No problem...we r in the same class...itna toh kar skta hu for u..."

Btw tum picnic pe aa rhi ho na?

NEIL Asked.

"Yeah I think so...may b ..I'm not sure...avni struggled for words.

Okay okay just dont b too nervous. ..take a deep breath. ..

Neil saw avni had been crying.

He gave her his handkerchief .

She looked at him ...for the first time someone had seen her tears.No one bothers if she cries.

She had been crycrying for yrs n no one had ever seen her tears let alone give her a handkerchief.

When Avni didnt take the hanky from Neil...he himself took it n wiped her eyes.

She looked at him in surprise.

But this was the only pleasant surprise of her life.

"tum ladkiyan itna roti kyun ho??

Acha..

"Ab le lo isey...kya ab tumhari nosy nhi mujhe hi saaf karni hogi? Laughed Neil.

Avni took the hanky hurriedly from him n said "koi apni marzi se nahi rota "

N walked away while Neil kept looking at her.

PRECAP:

Neil helps Avni once again.

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Preeran345

@Preeran345

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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: pri12
Bring it on Ashi...waiting for it

its there.. 😊

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Preeran345

@Preeran345

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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: vu1998
I would love to read this..
Please continue it soon Ashi...
My best wishes are with you...

Thank you so much 😊😊

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Preeran345

@Preeran345

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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: MysticRiver
nice..

Keep reading n thnks 😊

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Shailja

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Posted: 8 years ago

Nice idea..

But why Ali is in negative role?? Chalo koi na..Uske peechhe kuchh toh interesting idea hoga.. Let's wait and watch...

And Avni is Damsel in distress and Neil is her Prince Charming..

Yeayyy.. Mazza aaega iss story mein..

Keep writing and keep updating...

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Ifa_Hassan

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Posted: 8 years ago

Nice chapter and you have some interesting concept . Update sooon

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996203

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Posted: 8 years ago

#10

niceee ashii😃

my avneil are in clg??..wow

omg...interesting ...

please update soon😃😃😃

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