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Awesome update
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Part 1 is updated


Part 2 will come soon
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CHAPTER 2: NEIL'S plan


Neil calls DD. Then he calls Riya to meet him at his flat.

Riya self talk] Good I got what I wanted

Amol Self talk] Why is she so happy where she going.

Amol follows Riya. They reach Neil's apartment

Amol's Self Talk] This is Neil's apartment is he planning something why did he call Riya here.


Neil's POV

Neil. Riya says

Avani tum. Nahi Avani toh yeh toh Riya hai. I say

Neil what's wrong with you. Riya says

She cheated on me she used my best friend Ali. Who could she. I say

She is just like her she used you and throw she not worth just like her mother. Dadi was right she should have died years back. Good she gone.

In Neil's head only one think is going are AMOL'S WORDS : YOU ARE JUST LIKE ASHISH MEATHA AS HE NEVER SUPPORTED MY MOTHER YOU DIDN'T SUPPORT MY SISTER.

DD is taking their photos from outside. Anmol's phone rings

ANMOL'S POV

Anmol see his phone while taking his phone he notices DD taking pictures.

Anmol self talk] Oh this is his plan probably.

Hello. Neela says

Anuty did you find Di. I ask

Amol don't worry Avani is with me. Here talk to her. Neela says

Di why did you do leave come. Shweta Anuty and Riya had planned this. I say

Riya are you sure. Neela asks

Ji Anuty. I say

Amol take care of yourself and don't get into it focus on your studies. Maa has arranged for your interview at collage. Avani says

But if Riya Metha does anything I will not leave. I say

Deal if Riya does something then only. Avni and Neela says

Di come back soon. I say

Take care of yourself. Avani says cutting the phone


NEIL'S POV

Riya move. I says

Where are you going. Riya asks

Washroom. You can leave. I say

Neil... Riya says

Before you go. I hate you. Good you ran alway from the marriage I was saved. I say

What do you mean. Riya says

That I hate you. I say

But. Riya says

RIYA METHA I HATE YOU. GET LOST NOW. I says

Neil walks to the washroom. Riya tries to hug him from behind. Neil turns and push her hard she fall.

Don't you dear touch me. Neil says

Neil goes in. Riya starts to cry. From inside Neil calls DD

Sir. DD says

You are done. Neil says

Yes. DD says

Come in and get this filth out of my room now.

Neil comes out. Riya is still there crying.

Sir. DD says

Neil. Riya says
Get out now. I say

Sir here is a new case file. DD says

Riyaji you will have to leave sir don't like anyone's presence when he is working. DD says with hate and disgust

Riya leaves

Outside. Anmol is laughing Riya looks up.

How are you dear sister. Anmol says

Anmol. Riya says

Do you ever learn from mistakes oh sorry for you Dayawanti is god she spoiled my sisters life 15 years ago now she is in jail what a coincidence her husband is a police officer who put dayawanti behind bars you thought he will leave her helpless in front a brainless woman like you. It was very entertaining. Amol says

Riya leaves crying and humiliated. DD sees all this

Amolji aap yahain.DD says

Can I talk to Neel Sir. Amol says

Amol come in. Your sister didn't even give me time to think it through and left. For you till a day ago I was Jiju today you also broke the relation. Neil says

No... I am sorry for what I said in the morning I was angry when I saw Di leaving after everything aunty and Bebe said to her and you came home drunk with Riya Metha's supporting I couldn't take it. Amol says hugging Neil

It's all right. I say

Thanks for what you did with Riya today she deserved it. Amol says

Amol's phone vibrates. Amol looks at it and smiles

Who is it. I ask

It's not Di.. it Neelu Anuty she arranged for an interview for me in college so she is telling me to prepare for which in next week. Amol says

Amol leaves. DD see him

Amolji do you know where Bhabhi has gone. DD asks

No. Amol says

DD see Amol's phone


DD Self talk] Bhabhi ka message...DEAL matlab kya hai iss ka. That means Bhabhi save hai. But what deal kya baat chal rahi hai Amol aur Bhabhi ke beech.

DD. I say

Sir everything is ready. DD says

Good. It should be in tomorrow's paper front page. I say

Ji Sir. Sir wouldn't that effect your reputation. DD says

DD reputation is not that important my wife's character is question by not only my family but by my colleges which is very important and dear to me. I say

Edited by AvNeil_TV - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
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CHAPTER 2 updated above
Edited by AvNeil_TV - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Fantastic update
Neil did right with Riya
She deserves that treatment
Update soon please
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Awsome...loved it
Neil wants to print pics in newspaper..
Love Him :)
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Lovely story
Thanks for the pm 😊

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