UNSPOKEN WORDS-Avneil OS (current track)

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Posted: 8 years ago
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UNSPOKEN WORDS


She dreamt of a world with him...to hold a place in his life...andshe wanted this dream of hers to be true.

But now she cud see her dreams shattered to pieces.
Why do we even dream when dreams r meant to be broken by the harsh realities around us.
What she heard few moments ago from the mouth of swetha had broken her dreams into millions of pieces.

Avni was standing in the corner of her own birthday party trying to smile as much as she can...but the heaviness in her heart told her that something inside was broken.

How cud she think of Neil giving her rights as his wife.

She can't be that lucky.
And avni gave another fake smile.

Neil who was watching her from distance cud bear it no more.
She was looking sad n he cudnt let her be unhappy on her own birthday.


"Avni ...r u fine?"
He asked her.

"Yeah .."she tried to maintain her calm.

As she tried to walk away he came in her way once again n asked her to look at him in his eyes n say that she's fine.

"I...Im fine Neil"
Avni tried to lie.

"Avni did mom say something to u ??Just tell me."
Neil was desperate to know.

Avni realised it was no use to lie n so she told everything to Neil n how she's just an outsider in his world.

"Main janti hoon Neil Ki tumhari iss badi si dunia ka chota s a hissa nahi bansakti main"
She said with tears in her eyes.

It was too much for Neil to bear.
How cud he bear what she spoke to him.

She meant everything to him n here she was saying all that he cud never ever think abt her.

"Bas avni ..Enough!
Bohat bol chuki tum...

"Tumne thik kaha ...meri dunia ka hissa nahi ho tum"
"Bcz u r my world.

And I Mean it! "

After speaking Neil realised the intensity of his words.
Did he just bare his heart out to her.

Avni looked at him blankly...
It was only after moments that his words sunk inside her.!

"Did he really mean it??" She kept looking at him.
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Posted: 8 years ago
#2
Ashi... It was really really nice...
I m so glad that you made Avni speak clearly and directly in front of him...
Looking forward for more FF from you...
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Posted: 8 years ago
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That was so nice...Loved it
Thank God Avni told everything
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Yes he meant it!!!
I just love this. Love that dialogue of Avni. "tumhaari iss badi si duniya ka ek chota sa hissa nahi bansakti mein."
Beautiful os. 😳
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Posted: 8 years ago
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meri iss badi si duniya mei tum hissa ho Avni
I meant it 😳😳i gave my heart to this line
beautiful
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Lovely os... this deserves a continuation...
Oh man I wish they could show this in the serial..
Awesome work.. 👏 write more 😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
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beautiful OS
loved the intensity of dialogues

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