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Posted: 8 years ago
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OK I just came here to peep in but then I am writing a short Story!
Can't stop myself!

Btw plz pray for my exams.
Love u forum Wasis!


SHORT OS

"Tumhe kya lagta h...ye sab ek mazak h...
tum he kya pata struggle kya hota h...
Jab apni life mein choti choti khushiyo k liye tadapna aur tarasna padta h ...
Tum nhi samjhoge Neil..


Avni Sobbed as she spoke.
Now she cudnt handle this criticism.
How cud Neil just keep on. blaming her like this.
If she was at fault then Riya too wz wrong...n this time avni won't let Riya get away under d blanket of innocence.


A- "Kya kaha tha tumne Ki Riya jaan bujh kar kuch nhi krti ...kyu??
Kyuki wo ameer h...?ek badi family se belong krti h ..?.wat abt others? wat abt d ppl who r not as Lucky??


Jinko sari zindagi sirf dukh aur gareebi milti h unka kya??
Jab ye ameer log apni gadiyon mein baith k aish karte hote hain...us waqt kuch log usi dhool bhari sadak par in ameero k beech daud laga rhe hote hain ...kyuki na wo
haar sakte hain aur na ruk sakte hain ...unhe sirf ladna padta h apni har khushi k liye ...apne samman k liye...

Anyways tum nhi samjhoge Neil...Never!

Neil wz shocked as he hd never seen dis endless anger of ananya...

Avni went on.

A- Riya ek ameerzadi h jise dusro Ki parwah na kbhi thi aur na h...but u will forgive her bcz she's dayawanti mehtas granddaughter.

wah Neil wah!

Neil's myth wz broken.
There wz a storm in his mind.
Has she been thru something very unpleasant in her life???
Wat was dis pain all about!

He mentally chided himself for trusting Riya blindly!
Avni had shown him d mirror.

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ASHi

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Ashi u penned down beautiful
Today not the other day Neil has to know the truth..

All the best for ur exams




Arthi
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Posted: 8 years ago
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WOW! This is so beautifully written. You're actually fabulous. Well done 👏
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Wow this was amazing👏
All the best for tour exams👍🏼... Do well

Do continue writing post exams...
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Tussi great ji 👏 short yet beautiful
All the best ji fr ur exams 😃
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Woww!! Brilliant gal! You rock.
Best of luck for your exams!!
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: -Emerald-

Ashi u penned down beautiful

Today not the other day Neil has to know the truth..

All the best for ur exams




Arthi

Thanks Arthi :-) My exam went Well. :-)
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: sammy17

WOW! This is so beautifully written. You're actually fabulous. Well done👏

aww Thank you! :-)
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: tanyashah0110

Wow this was amazing👏

All the best for tour exams👍🏼... Do well

Do continue writing post exams...

Thanks dear ...yup will love to write more :-)
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: prathe

Tussi great ji 👏 short yet beautiful
All the best ji fr ur exams 😃

Thankyou Dear!

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