LOVE THAT HEALS -AVNEIL OS UPDTD ( AT PG2 )

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Posted: 8 years ago
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PROLOGUE :

*LOVE THAT HEALS*


It was raining perfectly and her eyes were moist with pain betrayal hatred love and longing ...its sometimes very difficult to describe it in one word.

She had gone through so much.

And she had no strength left to bear this unnecessary drama anymore.

Who cares for her ??


Who needs her anyways.

If it was not for neela ...She had no idea wat she wud have done.


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"Wait Avni"

"Just stop"


I said stop right here !!!



She stopped but didn't turn towards him.


Drenched in rain Avni had no difficulty in hiding her pain.



"It's your day today ...why do u want to run away like this???"
he asked.



"Neil Plz ...
Its the worst day of my life so just leave me where I am"



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My New OS guys...
Do tell if u want me to continue !


Love,
AsHi


OS : PG 2
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charlottedias05 thumbnail
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Please continue... Sounds interesting😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
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This sounds great
Please continue
Thanks
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Fab OS. Do continue.. Looking forward to it..
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Oh so Neil knows Ananya is Avni but how? Will love to read this.
Do continue.
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Sounds interesting continue soon Dear
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Posted: 8 years ago
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*LOVE THAT HEALS*

Hey guys my os explores the emotional side of Avneil's story.
Avni's truth has come out in front of Neil.
But how??

Go on reading!
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"I know that you think this is d worst day of your life but trust me...It won't be now"

"Neil u don't even know everything... My dad never came for us ...he never cared for me n mumma ..n my birthday always reminds me of it"
I can't celebrate my birthday!
"I'm sorry for dat"
Avni tried to leave but Neil stood in her way.

"Avni I know U had been thru the toughest childhood... n u hv lost all d hope but believe me there's always sunshine and u just hv to see it "

The day we became friends I had decided dat I won't let u be sad.. EVER..chahe Jo bhi hojaye"

I only wanted U to cheer up.

"Just come along and see the road ahead n don't look back cz I won't let u fall... just walk with me "

"U knw wat Neil.. My dad never came on sports day,annual day or on any important days of my life...

He never came to take my mother.

I've lost faith in everything.
I don't want happiness until I beat that dayawanti in dis game"


"We will Win Avni!!!"
I'm with u !!! smiled Neil hiding something.

That was something he had only for Avni in his eyes...was it Pain ?was it care?Was it concern?? or was it respect??
Neil had no idea what this girl meant to him but she was the one unique soul he had met in his life.

Earlier he used to almost think of her as a criminal but her backside of the story shocked him and he was compelled to change his thoughts abt her.

"Avni" Her real name was Avni n not Ananya...

The truth had come out so unexpectedly in front of him.

That very moment the strong fierce girl Felt like a timid child who had been deprived of every happiness in her life.


Neil had arranged her birthday party at Chamko cafe but there he got to know the most shocking truth of his life...

That the girl he knew as Ananya was actually the granddaughter of Dayawanti mehta ...She was Avni ...the girl whom Ali had mentioned so many times.

And the girl who was wounded by the gunshot of her own grandmother.

"I'm with You Avni ...I'll help u in getting justice... Do u trust me??"

And Avni stood
there staring blankly...

The support she hadn't expected from anyone was given by Neil.

The only thing she didn't knew at that moment was to trust her mind or heart?


"Don't think that much Avni ...U r already too intelligent "
Smiled Neil.

"we will face the situation together and will be successful... Remember?? Last Time We had saved your mother together !!

Avni had no idea what to say but she had a little smile at the corner of her lips.

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Thanks guys.
Hope u Enjoyed!
Do share ur views if u wud like to read more !

Love,
AsHi
Edited by Ashi345678 - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Superb
Neil supporting Avni after knowing her truth that I too want to see and you wrote it .. nice
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Very nice dear please do write more os
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Looking forward for the revelation that how he gets to know about Avni

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