AvNeil OS: Our first kiss!!

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AvNiel OS: Our first kiss!!
So here Neil and Avni were sitting on the sofa...Both were reading books...but avni' s mind was somewhere else...
A(in mind): uh..mai iska kya karu...ek kiss bhi nahi karta yeh...
That was true ! He still havent kissed her...it was 5th month of there relationship... and she was fed up of this and wanted him to show affection ..she then put down the magazine...
A: Neil...
N: haan avni...
He said not looking at her...she then snatched the book from her...earning an irritated look from him...
A: i want to ask something
N:mujhe pata hai bolo...
A: actually...
N: hmmm
A: i was talking to my friend
N: haan toh mai kya karu...
A: Neil let me complete first..
N: accha bolo ..
A: she told me that nose comes in between when we kiss...
N: and what was your reply...
A: nothing ...i just said aisa thodi na hota hai ..but you know when we kiss our calories are burned...and each time time when we kiss and tongue collide it feels a bliss...
N: yeh bhi.. usi friend ne bataya hoga hai na??
A: uh..haan accha mai coffee bana kar lati hu...
She said standing up and was about to go away when he stood and pulled her by her wrist and then held her by her waist...
A: uhh..Neil.
N: shhh.. not a single word now...so for your friend we will do a practical..and then you can tell your friend your experience...
& before she could say something he softly kissed her...after sometime they broke for air...
N: so how was it??
She just blushed
N: waise tumhari is friend ka naam kya hai??
She blushed even more
N: hmm..chalo practical mil gaya na ... now do your work..
He was about to go away when she kept her hands around his neck...pulling him closer...he then held her waist...
A: am i a bab kisser...that you dont kiss me...
N: no my love. ..you are the best...
A: then why don't you kiss me...??
N: because kiss karne ke liye toh sari zindagi padi hai..and for now...i want you to focus on your career... ...not on me...
A: lekin Neil...
N: no lekin wekin...abhi kuch time pehele hi sab kuch theek hua hai...and i just want to live this moment...i just want to feel your presence in my life...i just want to live this moment..
A: what should i say? .your love for me is so pure.. pata nahi maine kya kiya tha. .that i got you
N: kara toh maine bohot kuch tha...that i got you
Then they joined there heads...& smiled
The end..

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Awww... Lovely os dear 😊
Loved it ❤️
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Wow that's lovely peice
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Originally posted by: priyanvs

Awww... Lovely os dear 😊

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Do write more

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Wow that's lovely peice
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Thanks!!😳
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Sweeettt, Loved it, This is awesome <3
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Amazing!!!
I love reading OS like this😉

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