FF Ek main aur ek tu updated

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Index
Prologue = page 1
Character sketch = page 1
Prologue
Akdha
He don't believe in love cause he thinks love spoils life . He was not like this before but after that Horrible night he become like this only .
She believes in love cause she thinks love makes life beautiful without love life is nothing She suffered a lot in her past she want to forget him she want to forget her past but she know it will never happen
Rivanya
He believes in love he is kind and fun loving person
she hate love she thinks love is nothing love destroys life she was not like this before but after what happened to her best friend
she become like this only
arrogant , rude , care free
Manan
He don't believes in love he was not like this before but what happened to her sister he become like this he never shed a single tear from his eyes after that night which spoil her sister's life he only thinks love destroys life
she believes in love she want his love to come back in her life but she know it will never happen she want to see her bhabhijaan and bhaijan together again
Character Sketch

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Jalal Khan : 27 years old , world's best businessman , owner of world's best khan industries , he's rich , focused , womanizer , arrogant , handsome the man of every girl's dreams , however he have a bad attitude , kind of guy who views the world negatively . but can you really blame him when he has had such a rough childhood and past ? for him , a feeling such as love is a waste of time , currently dating jodha's sister

Ritik khan : 26 years old , jalal's little brother , his best friend , currently working with jalal in his company , owner of khan hotels , caring , loving , sweet guy , want to see his love again want to see his bhabhi and bhai together again

Jodha khan : 25 years old , cute , bubbly , innocent , caring , loving , had never had anything , because she always make sure her family came first , she want to forget her past but she know it will never happen , loves jalal so much , she lives in her bestie's house with her daughter 😳


Shivanya malik : Shivanya is a cute , sweet and caring 25 years old girl with a bubbly disaposition living in shimla with her bestie and her bestie's daughter 😊


Manik sheikh : 26 years old , rude , womanizer , jodha's brother , ceo of sheikh industries , he hates love he was not like that before but after that night which spoils her dearest sister's life he became like this only , want her sister back at any cost


Nandini sheikh : 24 years old , manik's wife , jalal's little sister , bubbly , caring , loves manik so much want him to come back in her life , hate him cause he leaves her and never came back to see her

pihu khan : 5 years old , jalal and jodha's daughter , she lives with her mom and her mom's bestie , chatter box , naughty like her father , loving like her mother , she never saw her father


Nimrit sheikh : 24 years old , jodha's little sisters , villain of this story

Chapter 1
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At night shimla 9:30pm
Jodha : pihu beta please come sleep na
Pihu : no mama First tell me the princess's story then i will sleep paka
Jodha : pihu you know na tomorrow is your first day at school huh ? so come and sleep i promise tomorrow i will surely tell you the princess's story paka
Pihu : promise
Jodha smiles
Jodha : promise my jaan
then jodha make pihu lay on bed and covered her with blanket and she also lay beside her daughter
after 30 minutes jodha look at her daughter who was sleeping peacefully in her arms jodha saw her and a lone tear fall from jodha's eyes she wiped it quickly
Jodha to her self : Why pihu looks like him wait why am thinking about him huh
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At dehradun khan mansion , 10:30 pm
A man is sitting on sofa with an angry expression Jalal khan the youngest and richest businessman . he has every thing but he has lost his smile when he left his love jodha
Jalal suddenly hears a sound he looks back and saw on of the servant has broken a flower vase
jalal fumed in anger and shouted in rage
Jalal : Atgah chacha how many times i have to remind you that keep open your eyes when you clean the house
Atgah shaking in fear
Atgah : jalal... be...ta sorry i was just
Jalal : oh shut up i don't want to listen anything from now your fired
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Ritik was watching tv in his room suddenly he hears his brother's anger voice he knows his brother very well he rush to down stairs
Ritik : what happen bhai why are you scolding atgah chacha 😕
Jalal : ritik how many times i told him to keep open his eyes when clean the house and look what he has done 😡
Ritik saw the broken flower vase on floor then he looks at atgah chacha who was shaking in fear
Ritik : Bhai forget na its just a flower vase don't fire him he is just our like our family member na don't you remember bhai in childhood when mom and dad were busy in business deals and meetings atgah chacha was the only one who took care of us
Jalal was feeling guilty 😔 he walk towards atgah chacha and hugs him tight
Jalal : am so sorry atgah chacha please forgive me
Atgah chacha smiles 😊 and hugs him back
Jalal smiles and rushed towards his room hamida is sad yes she saw everything which happened few minutes ago
Hamida to her self : In this 6 years jalal you have changed alot your not the same jalal the naughty fun loving boy am sorry i can't do anything for you because fault is all your not jodha's
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Nandini is laying on her huge queen size bed she is only thinking about manik

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Swasan thumbnail
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Nice Start...
You should Definitely continue...
PM me when you will update...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Please continue and PM me please .
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Posted: 9 years ago
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nice concept
but sorry to say I love only rivanya in 3 of them 😳
I wish u could put ariya & arjuhi in place of akdha & manan
continue soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Seems very interesting
Plz continue soon

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