BeHir FF We are different (Chapter28&29UPDATED on page 34) LASTUPD - Page 18

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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: Priya258

Omg😲

What will happen to Mahir😒


Janne ke liye padhiye We Are Different kal subah issi jgah issi samay par. 😆
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: Arshukaurkhushi

All Izz well

Finally they will realize it's love


OMG Arshu, you have so much faith in me..😉
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Posted: 7 years ago
Nice updates
Life goes smoothly for them but an incident which shocked them
I hope mahir will be alright
Waiting for next update soon
Thanks
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Posted: 7 years ago
It was so eye grabbing part
Seriously loved it
Hope there love story gets a kick through this scary moment in their life that makes them realise there love 4 each other...
Have faith in u

Edited by Vrishthi04 - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
Suddenly a scary twist in story
Plz continue soon
Cz u r awesome
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: Mahi114

Suddenly a scary twist in story

Plz continue soon
Cz u r awesome


Thank you everyone!!!! Thanks for the great response!!! It means a lot to me. I was a bit afraid while writing this whole thing but these comments have assured me. 😊😊
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Posted: 7 years ago

CHAPTER 24

No. No. NOOO! It can't be. Nothing can happen to Mahir. That was not Mhair. But that car was Mahir's so obviously...

Rehan was saying something on the phone. Aunty understood what was happening and quickly supported Bella. Bella fell back on the couch and kept staring at the TV screen with a very shocked expression on her face.

R: Bella! BELLA! Are you there?

Mrs. Sharma: Yes, Rehan, she is here.

B: That was Mahir's car...

R: Yes Bella. Bella, control yourself. Okay? I will come to pick you up as soon as things settle down.

B: NO!!!!

Sumi ma: Bella please, listen to us.

B: No! I will go out and look for Mahir. Ma, nothing has happened to Mahir. That was not Mahir in the car...

Amma: Listen to us dear. We have lost Mahir and now we don't want to lose you too. Stay where you are.

Amma was sobbing and was barely able force out those words.

B: Amma, you are not getting it. (She starts laughing loudly) Mahir's alive. I know it in my heart. He is very much alive. Just give me a chance to look for him. I am sure I will find him. I will go now.

Saying this she started getting up from her seat, but aunty kept holding onto her. She called her son Ajitabh and her daughter-in-law Vishkha as well. Together they managed to make Bella sit down once again.

B: Ma, tell these people to leave me. I will go and look for Mahir. I know that I will be able to find him. Just give me one chance.

Sumi ma: NO Bella, you will not leave from there. Stay where you are. It's too dangerous.

B: Dangerous? DANGEROUS? He took the risk of stepping out for me. He would have been safe at home if it had not been for me. And you are saying it's too dangerous! Ma if he can do it, so can I.

K: Bella please, don't go. We have already lost Mahir, we can't lose you too.

B: How many times do I have to tell you? HE IS NOT DEAD! If I step out I will be able to find him.

She kept running to the door and Ajitabh kept pulling her back. Eventually he and Vishakha managed to pin her to the couch. But she kept on fighting with all her might to go out and look for Mahir. Her Mahir. Everyone had tears in their eyes after seeing her condition. She looked half crazed with worry and was possessed with mad energy. Vishakha and Ajitabh were finding it very difficult to hold on to her. Sharma aunty picked up the phone and told Rehan that Bella was inconsolable, and that it would not be possible to hold her back for long. She was as it is fighting tooth and nail to go out. Eventually Appa told her lock up Bella so that she didn't bother them much. But aunty was against it as it was inhuman. But Appa insisted as he had seen this side of Bella once when she was a kid. It had been very difficult to control her then.

When Bella was around fourteen years of age, Andy had forcibly taken Mahir's custody and had taken Mahir with him. Polo being as insensitive as she was dumb had commented that Bella would never be able to see Mahir ever again. They would be travelling to USA soon and would take Mahir with them. Bella had continued to fight for hours, she had even tried to run away to Andy's place multiple times. Eventually they had had to lock her up in her room. Luckily, Andy had forcibly taken Mahir and Sumi ma was able to get a restraining order put on Andy.

So they were well aware that when it came to Mahir, Bella could do anything. So he insisted that they lock her up. Ajitabh and Vishakha managed to get Bella to Suhani's bedroom and locked her up. She continued to shout and scream; even kept knocking the door.

B: Ajitabh, Vishakha let me out. I want to go and look for my Mahir.

Sumi ma: Bella please understand, you going out will not help Mahir at all.

B: No ma, I will be able to find Mahir. My heart will tell me where he is.

R: Bella Mahir is d...

B: HE IS NOT DEAD! HE IS NOT DEAD! GOT IT REHAN???? He is simply missing. He should have been here a long time back, but it's fine. He is just lost; I will step out and look for him. Aunty please let me out. You don't know about our connection. He will come running to me when I will call him. He never ignores me. Whenever I need him, he is always there for me. My Mahir never breaks his promise. He had promised me that he will come, so he will come. But if I go out to look for him, he will come much faster. Ma! Amma! Kuhu! Why are you crying? Aare! Smile!!! Nothing has happened to our Mahir. My heart tells me that he is fine.

(She had begun to laugh loudly)

He has this habit of playing pranks on me sometimes. Yes, I know. I had played a prank on him on our wedding night. I had scared him. SO he is scaring me now. Ma! Cheer up this is all an elaborate prank that he has played on us. He has played a prank and is waiting for me to find him. That's the first rule of pranks right? You play it and then hide so that the person who was pranked can find you. If I don't go out to look for him, how will come home? He will keep waiting for me to find him. I cannot keep him waiting.

(She had been continuously banging on the door all this while. She was wearing glass bangles in her hands that day. The bangles were beginning to break and her hands had begun to bleed. But she didn't even register that pain.)

Vishakha! Please let me out. Ajitabh! Would you like it if Vishakha kept you waiting? No; right? Even Mahir hates it if he is kept waiting. Even I hate it if anyone keeps me waiting. Mahir has made me wait a lot today. Amma, you never scold Mahir. Ma, let's scold Mahir when he comes back, okay? He has kept us waiting for so long. And ma, when he comes back I will scold him for scaring you so much. I had played prank on him not you. Why did he have to scare you? We will scold him, okay? But to scold him, I will have to look for him. Please someone let me out.

(Now sounding really angry)

If you keep me locked up then I will tell Mahir to scold all of you. My Mahir never hurts me. If he finds out that you people have hurt me then he will scold you all.

(She had begun to laugh like a child now)

Ik mera yaara,

Ik ohdi yaari,

Yahi ardaas hai meri,

Wahi mera sach hai,

Wahi meri zid bhi,

Dil vich saans hai meri,

Roothe nu manauna aunda nahi ve,

Kadi vi na roothna tu mujhse,

Apaan bas sikhya yaari nibhana,

Jabse judi hai jaan tujhse,

O yaara mere...

Khair mangda main teri,

Rabba se yaara,

Kahir mangda main teri

Yaara ve... yaara ve,

Tenu bulaave

Mann mera,

Yaara ve, tu kyun na aave.

Ho yaari da ehsas hamesha,

Dil vich zinda rahega,

Tere warga yaar kahin na,

Mujhko aur milega..

Bhoole se bhi koi bhool huyi ho

Toh yaara ve usay bhula ke tu,

Ik vaari gale lag jaane de na...

Ik vari gale lag jane de na yaara mujhe,

Mehar mangda main teri..

Khair mangda main teri, rabba se yara,

Khair mangdaa main teriii

Everyone was genuinely alarmed by Bella's behaviour. Lack of water and constant shouting had made her voice crack. She continued to mumble, but no one could make out what she was saying as she her throat was completely sore. Eventually, completely exhausted she slipped into a fitful slumber, shouting out Mahir's name every now and then.

At, Kapoor and Sehgal House, everyone was worried about Bella. They all believed that Mahir was no more. That burning upturned car and burnt out driver's hand was proof enough for them. The pain of losing Mahir mixed with fear that they might end up losing Bella too. They knew that neither could live without the other. They were two bodies but one life, one soul. They were meant to live together and perish together. Amma found herself praying to god that if indeed Mahir was no more, then he should take Bella away as well, as seeing Bella in this condition was unbearable for her. And more than that Bella did not deserve to live without half of her soul.

On the other hand, the Sharmas were sitting in Suhani's living room worrying about Bella. Vishakha was crying bitterly seeing Bella's love for Mahir. Ajitabh was trying unsuccessfully to console her. They had been having some problems in their marriage and had begun to seriously consider a divorce. Seeing unconditional love between BeHir had made them think twice about the step that they were about to take. It had reminded them that life was too short to let silly differences drive them apart. They had, individually, realised they that had been letting their egos come between their love for each other. Privately both had taken a decision to work on their relationship instead of letting go of it.

Mrs. Sharma could see that the way her son and daughter-in-law interacted with each other had changed slightly in the last few hours. They were being more cordial and friendly with each other, instead of constantly insulting each other. Even as she felt ashamed of herself for feeling happy in such a situation, she couldn't help but feel a bit hopeful that things would improve between Ajitabh and Vish. She prayed fervently to god to send back Mahir safe and sound. When two people loved each other so selflessly, they deserved to live together.

It had been hours since they had seen the clipping on TV and it was well past midnight. Mrs. Sharma had tried to coax Vishakha to eat something but she had refused and so had Ajitabh. Bella was still sporadically screaming out Mahir's name and shouting to be let out. No one had the heart to go and ask her for food. They just sat together on the couch, watching news every now and then to get the hang of the situation outside. Rehan would call every thirty minutes to ask about Bella.

Just as the clock struck two in the morning, the intercom began to ring. Ajitabh went and picked up the phone wondering why the security people were calling so late at night, that too on Pratham's intercom?

Ajitabh: Hello? Yes?... No I am Ajitabh Sharma. Bella is resting... What? No. Don't send him up. I will come and verify... Yes keep him there.

Saying this he turned towards Vish and Mrs. Sharma.

Ajitabh: It was our watchman. He says someone has come to meet Bella.

Vish: Who?

Ajitabh: Mahir Sehgal.

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Posted: 7 years ago
It was an emotional update
Very sad to see Bela in such condition
Mahir came to meet her nothing happened to him
Waiting eagerly for next chapter.
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Posted: 7 years ago
Oh that was so emotional
You left it in a halt that too at so keen point
I so wanted to read it more n more
Keep rocking
And song was so emotional that suited d dialogues n the part so well👍🏼

The weekend was so amazing bcoz of BEHIR n now today it's so nice bcoz of ur BeHir 👏

Waiting
4
Next
Part
🤗


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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: Vrishthi04

Oh that was so emotional

You left it in a halt that too at so keen point
I so wanted to read it more n more
Keep rocking
And song was so emotional that suited d dialogues n the part so well 👍🏼

The weekend was so amazing bcoz of BEHIR n now today it's so nice bcoz of ur BeHir 👏

Waiting
4
Next
Part
🤗




Thank you Vrishthi for the suggestion that I start using songs as a part of my narrative. It has really improved the quality of writing. 🤗

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