Pati Patni Aur Takraar - a ViDev FF Last part updated pg 20 - Page 3

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Part 4 :

Amba : Dev

Dev was shocked to hear Amba. He tries to hide his shock to not give Amba a chance of doubt. He turns around casually.

Dev : Hi Ambaa

Amba : Dev tum yahan kya karraheho

Dev : Woh main janta hoon aise bina permission ke tumhare room me nahin aana chahiye tha.. but kya he na mujhe bahut severe headache hai to pills lene aaya hoon

Amba looks a little doubtful, but tries to help him anyway

Amba : Mere paas pills hai main deti hoon

Dev notices her getting doubtful

Dev : Yeh Vidhi hai na pata nahin mere room mein medicines kaha rakhdiye hai.. to yeh guest room main bhi ek set hota tha to lene aa gaya, par mil hi nahi raha

Amba looks pleased that Dev is disappointed by Vidhi and turns around fastly to get her medical kit. She suddenly trips and Dev helps her immediately in balancing, she blushes a little and goes and gets him headache pills from her kit.

Dev : Main bhi aise hi sab maintain karta hoon , organised par Vidhi abhi aayi hai na to thode changes kardi hai.. phir mujhe rearrange karna pad raha hai

Amba tries to add ghee to the fire

Amba : Obviously Dev, Vidhi choti hai na use to itna organised banne ki aadat nahi hogi. Ab tum aur main to aise nahin hai na

Dev : Yeah right.. anyway thanks a lot.. you are a saviour

Amba looks quite happy after he leaves that not only Dev praised her but found faults in Vidhi. Dev comes down grumbling about Priya not warning him and watches Priya, Abhi and Simmi having a family moment.

Priya : I am so sorry bhaisaab.. woh Simmi ko meri zaroorat thi to mujhe jaana padha

Dev : Uff touchy touchy.. tumhare wajah se mujhe Amba ke saath touchy touchy hona padha

Saying so, Dev walks away continuing to grumble something about how he had to praise Amba. Abhi and Priya look at each other and burst out laughing. He goes to his room to see Vidhi neatly arranging their bed and feels sorry that he had to lie about her being disorganised. Vidhi notices that Dev has returned.

Vidhi : Kucch mila kya?

Dev : Haan.. yeh headache pills

Looking at Vidhi's confused expression, he went on to narrate his ordeal with Amba. Vidhi at the end of it could not keep a straight face and starts laughing.

Vidhi : Aww.. kitne cute ho aap

Dev : Tumhe hansi aa rahi hai.. ye Amba se baat karke mujhe sach much ka headache ho gaya hai.. ye pill le leta hoon

Vidhi : Nahin.. woh Amba ji ki diyi huyi cheez aap mat khana.. actually aise chote mote headache ke liye tablet ki kya zaroorat hai.. mere paas ek badiya sa tareeka hai

Dev : Theek hai madam.. jo bhi tumhara tareeka hai wahi karunga

Vidhi : Aap nahin main karungi

Saying so Vidhi immediately went away and brought oil in a bowl

Dev : Oil massage

Vidhi : Biwi ke hathon se massage karwaenge to saara thankaan khatam ho jayega

Vidhi makes Dev sit on the floor and she sits on the corner of the bed. He happily follows her instructions. She take oil and starts applying on hair first and gives a good massage with her tender fingers. Vidhi first massages his hair properly and then masaages along his forehead with her thumb applying the right amount of pressure, neither too soft nor too rough. Dev starts feeling relaxed and closes his eyes.

Dev : Wow Vidhi tumhare haathon mein to jaadu hai, kitna accha lag raha hai mujhe

Vidhi : Dekha na maine kaha tha na aapko aaram mil jayenge.. meri maa na har hafte aise hi champi karti hai.. aaj bhi karti hai jaise mai koi choti bacchi hoon.. sach kahoon to mujhe bahut accha lagta hai jab maa karti hai to main aise hi jhote moote mana karti hoon... mai bhi aapko aise hi karungi to yeh saare dawayiyon ki zaroorat nahi padegi

Upon not getting any response, Vidhi bends to check on him and finds him lost in his own thoughts with eyes brimming with tears. She gently caresses his cheek. Vidhi calls Devji.. with voice full of concern. Dev immediately leans into her touch as if he was awaiting it the most and sheds those tears which were threatening to fall till now. He lays his head on her lap.

Dev : Maa ki yaad aagayi.. woh bhi aise hi bachpan mein meri baalon ki champi karti thi..

Vidhi : I am so sorry Devji.. maine aise maa ki baat karke aap ko dukhi kardiya

Dev : Nahin Vidhi.. kya kehrahi ho.. aise thodi na hoga ki mere saamne tum apne mom dad ki baat hi na karo... meri maa ke baad itne saalon mein phir se tumne mera aisa champi kiya to bas woh puraane yaadein taaza ho gaya hai

Vidhi understands the situation and gets back to massaging his hair. Vidhi always wanted to know more about Dev's childhood, his related thoughts..good, bad, everything..now that the topic has come, she wanted to probe into it further till his comfort zone or may be a little beyond.

Vidhi : Hmm bechari Ganga maa, pata nahin aapko champi ke liye manane main kitna mehnat lagtha tha.. unhe aapke peechhe peechhe bhaagna pada hoga

Dev : Kya... bilkul nahin.. mein bahut accha behave karta tha.. ek dum disciplined.. meri maa jo bhi kehti thi main sun leta tha

Vidhi : Accha

Dev : Bilkul

Vidhi : Acchaaa

Dev : Of course

Vidhi : Aahaa

Dev : Accha theek hai, thoda masti karta tha ,may be 10%

Vidhi : Huh

Dev : Woh 50 banalo

Vidhi : Hmm

Dev : shayad 75 hoga.. haa ye final hai

Vidhi : Mujhe dekh kar kehna

Dev : Ok ok baba, 95% sharaarti tha ye fix karlo

Vidhi : Hey bhagwaan, itna kya shararat karte the aap.. mujhe sab kuch janna hai

Dev : Ha ha.. bahut masti karta tha main, hamesha sirf khelna aur kudna bas, padayi to apne aap ho jaata tha, har waqt mere upar bandaid laga hua hota tha.. ek chot kam ho jaata to dusra ban jaata tha

Vidhi : Oh god ha ha aur sunayine koi aisa kissa jo aap ko yaad ho

Dev : Haa ek baar na main ball se khel raha tha seediyon par chadkar.. ball ke peeche peeche maine bhi challan lagaaya seedha neeche wale floor par gira.. bechari maa itni pareshaan thi uss din mere chot ko lekar

Vidhi : Yeh kya kiya aapne

Dev : Yeh suno.. ek baar mai bina maa ko bataye ice cream bandi wale uncle ke saath poore mohalle mein ice cream bechne chala gaya.. Ice cream Ice cream kehte kehte aur jab tak wapas aaya mere maa papa itna pareshaan the ki papa ne to mujhe ek thappad lagaya... phir maa hi aayi thi beech mai bachane ke liye

Both of them have a hearty laugh while recollecting all childhood memories of Dev.

Vidhi : Abhi aap ko dekh kar to bilkul nahi lagta ki aap kabhi itne shaitaan bacche the

Dev : Yeh jo maine pehle kaha ki main maa ki har baat maanta tha.. woh bhi sach hai Vidhi.. jab maa beemar padgayi thi, to main unke saare baat maanta tha ye sochkar ki woh jaldi theek ho jayegi agar maine unke baatein suna to... par aisa nahi hua..woh woh

Vidhi slided from the bed to sit beside Dev and took his hand in hers

Vidhi : Aap ye saare mat sochiye..

Dev : Nahin vidhi mai share karna chahtha hoon, pata nahin aaj tak maine kisi se meri feelings nahin share kiya.. par aaj tumse baat karna chahtha hoon.

Vidhi looks into his eyes and silently nods her head

Dev : Maa ke baad papa poora focus business par lagaya tha.. kucch saalon baad unhone satya maa se shaadi ki thi.. ha main pehla thoda naraaz tha lekin nahin bataya.. dheere dheere mujhe realise hua ki satya maa bahut acchi hai aur mujhe kabhi bhi sauteli bete ki tatah treat nahi kiya.. sab theek tha abhi aur chitra paida huye.. main bhi bahut khush tha.. lekin hamare business mein bahut bada loss aagaya tha.. aur tabhi papa ke bhi tabiyat kharaab ho gayi thi.. main tabhi London se aaya tha aur aate hi mujhe poora business sambhalna tha. Papa mujhe seekhane ke halat mein nahin the.. maine jo bhi London mein seekha use yahan business khada karne mein lagaya.. shaadi bacche kucch bhi nahin socha tha.. bas apna parivaar aur yeh business... main yeh sab phir se haar nahi sakta vidhi..

Vidhi : Aap bilkul nahin haarenge.. Priya bhabhi aur Abhi bhai ka rishta sudhar gaya aur aapka aur Abhi bhai ka bhi.. bas ab business ki problem bhi solve ho jayega

Dev : Maine dekha hai apne dad ko iss situation se guzarte hue.. kaise woh din raat pareshaan hote the ki hum sab ko paison ki kami na ho.. main wapas uss situation mein apne parivaar ko jaate hue nahin dekh sakta.. especially simmi aur hamare bacchon ko..

Vidhi : Devji aap pareshaan mat hona please

Dev : Vidhi mai jhoot nahin bolunga, jab se hamare shaadi ke baatein shuru ho gaye the tab se maine hamare bacchon ke baare mein bhi sochna shuru kiya... jab tak woh jawaan banenge to main old ban jaunga main unhe kuch seekha paunga ya nahin pata nahin.. lekin at least ek financially secure zindagi to dena hai na.. tumne aur maine yeh sab paison ko tyaag de diya par hamein hamare bacchon ke liye to save karna padega na.. to jitna maine salary lene ki baat ki woh bhi to chala jaayega agar yeh business Amba ke haath lag gaya to.

Vidhi : Aapka plan bahut accha hai, hum bilkul success honge.. aur pata hai aapke bacche bahut lucky hai ki unhe itne caring papa milenge

Dev : Aur meri wife lucky nahin hai kya

Vidhi : Woh to lucky se bhi upar hai, happy hai content hai.. chaliye ab dinner ka bhi time ho gaya hai infact shayad sab humara intezaar kar rahe honge

Dev : Nahin.. sab ne kha liya hoga.. actually mujhe bhook nahin hai.. tumne itna accha massage diya ki ab mujhe neend aa rahi hai

Vidhi : Nahin nahin aise kaise chalega.. bina khaye sojaayenge to acidity ho jaayega.. thoda light khana laati hoon khalijiye aur phir aaraam se so jaana

Dev : Please main pehle bhi aisa karta tha

Vidhi : Pehle ka main nahin jaanti par ab aapko aise bhooke pet sone nahin doongi.. jaldi aati hoon

Vidhi goes to the kitchen and cries silently thinking about how much Dev has suffered and how lonely he must have been. She prays in her mind to Milapini maa to never make Dev alone again ever. Amba sees this and assumes that Vidhi and Dev had a big fight, that's the reason they both have not come for dinner too. She goes away to sleep peacefully. Vidhi sets the plate with few rotis and dal and curry and brings to their room. She sees Dev sitting on the sofa. She goes near him and fondly brings a roti piece to feed him. Dev takes the bite off her hand.

Dev : Yaad hai last time jab aise khilayithi to kya hua

Vidhi blushing : Yaad hai aur yeh bhi abhi aap ka aisa mood nahin hai

Dev : Haan par kiss to kar sakte hai na

Vidhi comes near and kisses him on the cheek

Dev : Har ek bite ke saath dena chahiye

Vidhi : Oh god aap itne sharaarti ho to pata nahin aapke bacche kaise honge

Dev : Tum bhi khalo mere saath

Both of them laugh off and finish their dinner and Dev retires to bed and Vidhi joins him after setting the plates away.
















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Posted: 2 years ago
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Tagging some more

Edited by Srj9 - 2 years ago
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Thanks for the tag,


Ice cream bechne Wala to ,😂😂😂😂😂

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Dev : Uff touchy touchy.. tumhare wajah se mujhe Amba ke saath touchy touchy hona padha..


ROFL!! Best tha ye! I can imagine IK doing this perfectly😂😂

Liking the progress in the story.. Thank you for the tag!🤗

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Posted: 2 years ago
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Loved it! You’ve written this so well ❤️ was a treat to read.

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My pleasure🤗 thanks for the feedback😁😁❤️

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He he glad you liked it.. thank you so much🤗🥰❤️

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Thank you for your views❤️🥰🤗

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What a treat reading this story! The show makers can actually do this too. I would love to watch a foursome of these characters to protect the Raichands

Dev's playfulness with Vidhi is all heart. He has so much love to give

Great work and Looking forward to the next part!

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Posted: 2 years ago
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Aisa hota to thik tha instead of this beti track

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