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Posted: 2 years ago
#21

Originally posted by: Nany

E shinikaa tune second part kab diya 🥹🥹🥹mere ko pata hi nai...tisraa b le aayi 😭😭😭tag nai kiya kyaa muje


maine tag kiya tha baba, aap tho bahut busy Rahati ho aaj kal😂 just kidding yaar

Saare Notifications me miss hua hoga koi baath nahi samjho aapko double dhamak mil gaya .🤣

Edited by Shinika - 2 years ago
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Posted: 2 years ago
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Uploaded part 3

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Posted: 2 years ago
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Originally posted by: Parud7

Sorry mam mein thoda busy thi. Mere kaaran aapne proof read b nhi kia m extremely sorry😒

Kash apki baat sch hojati mein dev k sath Beth k atleast ro to leti yhan nato dev h na uska ata pta😭


Btw ur update was mind blowing. Kya last mei shock kia HP maan gya sch mein aap bhi Hardev moment lekr aahi gye. Andr ptaa nhi kya khusur phusur krk aaye hain dono zrur btana. Aaj k epi me into mtlb mein hairan rh gyi k hero sasur jiko hi propose krne k mood mein aagya🤣

But ur update was fab.

Next part ka wait hai


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they are presenting him as a prince asking princess hand from a king.
Characters ki naam ki hisab se yeh feel de raha hain…

@italics: koi baath nahi re main bas mazak kar rahi thi..
@underline. Aawweee poor baby!!! Mil jaayega jaldi miljaayegaa. Par dev tho ek hi piece hai BAs Vidhi ka. Par chances hai dev se thoda kam acha vala mil jaayega..🤣

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Posted: 2 years ago
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Originally posted by: Shinika

Shattered Dev; ViDev; OS

Part 3;

When dev looked into hp’s eyes for permission:

Hariprasad ji grabbed dev hand and took dev along with him to a room and locked from inside.

Dev stood silent cause he know hp will burst on him.

Hp: yeh kya naya drama shuru Kia hai dev saab. Aap ko ache se patha hain main aapki dhoka ko kabhi bhul nahi sakta Hu our meri beti ka haath aapko kabhi nahi de sakta Hu..

dev still stood silent.

Hp: aap aap kya chahte hai.. jo beijjati iss samaj ne hamare khaandaan ko Kia , jo gali meri beti ko, mere parivaar ko Kia vo kam hai kya .. ithne beijjati ki baad bhi aapka dil nahi bhar gaya . Vapas aagayi firse hamari beijjati karne keliye…

Aap khan kholakar sun lijiye dev saab main meri beti vidhi ki shadi aapse kabhi nahi hone dungi.. yeh vaada hai mera. Main nahi maanungi iss shadi keliye..( he said everything without looking into Dev’s eyes)

Dev stood silent and looked straight in to hp’s eyes with emotion…

Hp: he lowered his eyes and got frustrated with Dev’s look and said..

Kya dekh rahe hai aap .. kyon aisa dekh raha hai mujhe.. mera gussa nahi dikh rahe hai aapko… main bahut gussa hu aapse .. aapko dekhta hai tho aapka dhoka yaad aatha hai mujhe…

Dev: dev called him like whisper Hari Prasad ji …and said pehle aap mere taraf dekh ke baath kar lijiye fir main decide karoonga.. aap gusse mein hai ya nahi…

Hp couldn’t see into Dev’s eyes turned himself to other side.

Dev: mujhe pata hai.. aap mujhse sach chupana chahte hain…mujhe pata hain shayad aapko lagta hain ki main aapki beti ki laayak nahi Hu .. par ek baath bata dijiye ab bhi aapko lagta hai ki main vidhi se sacha pyar nahi karta Hu.. our Maine vidhi ko buri nazar se dekhta Hu.. bathayiye na hari prasad ji..

Hp couldn’t answer him and he understood dev knows the truth. And still dev wants to marry but he didn’t want to happen that.

Hp: ha .. ab aapko shadi ke baare me sochna bhi nahi chahiye.. yeh kabhi nahi hoga….

Dev knows that he is angry on him but he is not cruel.

Dev: kyon nahi hoga.. Hari prasad ji kyon nahi hoga .. bathayiye..

Hp: he turned in a swift to face dev and said kyonki.. main aapke saath yeh anyay nahi hone dunga.. main aapse gusse jaroor Hu.. par mera dil ithna sakt nahi hai , ithna pathar nahi hai ki meri beti ki khushi ke liye main aapke jindagi ki khushiyan cheen lu.. yeh mujhse nahi hoga…. Nahi hoga..

he just joined his hands and said dev saab pls aap yaha se chale jayiye .. meri beti ko uski haal me chod do .. main usko sambhalunga.. jitna mera bas me hoga vo sab karunga usko khush rakhne keliye..pls dev saab.. aap chale jaayiye…

Dev: hari prasad ji aap mane ya na maane par main vidhi se pyar Kartha hu.. our main usse chod kar kahi nahi jaane vala hu.. vo bhi tab jab usse meri zyada jaroorath hai..

Aapko lagta hai mera pyaar ithna kamjor hai bas ek problem aagayi our main beech me hi peeche mudh kar chala jaagunga..

Hp: yeh koi choti si problem nahi hai dev saab yeh shaadi aapki puri jindagi ko tabah kar degi… pls dev saab mujhe pata hai aap meri beti se sacha pyar karte hain par main aapko aapki jindagi barbaad nahi karne dunga.. uske paas bas kuch hi din bacha hai..

Jis umra ko lekar main aapko accept nahi kar paaya Hu ab USs umr meri beti ki kismat me nahi hain dev Saab ..and he started to cry bitterly..

Dev already has tears in his eyes and after seeing hp’s state he couldn’t control himself and hugged hp and cried .

Both hugged each other and shared each other’s pain.

Dev wiped his tears ,came from hug and said

Hari Prasad ji Sambha liye apne aapko .. dekhiye mujhe patha hai aapko main pasand nahi Hu aapki beti keliye our iss halat ki bahana banakar main aapko iss shadi keliye majboor nahi karna chahta Hu.. par mere paas koi our rasta nahi hain.. aap.. aap mere baath samajh rahe hai na..

Hp: nahi.. nahi dev ji.. yeh aapka bada dil hai ki aap abhi bhi meri beti ki khushi ke baare me soch raha hain..

Dev: sochunga.. jaroor sochunga.. main pyar karta Hu vidhi se… our aapne ek baar bhi mujhe mere feelings aapko batane ka mouka hi nahi dia . Par aaj aapko sun na hi padega hp ji. Jab …jab… mujhe pehli baar vidhi ke baare me kuch mehsoos hua tho main .. main khud hi uss feeling ko nahi accept kar paya. Main bahut mushkil se vo sari feelings apni dil se nikal dia . Uske baad har baar maine aapne aapko rokne keliye bahut koshish Kia. Par fir bhi mujhe yeh pata nahi chala ki kab vidhi mera dil ki awaj ban chuki hai.. sach mein mujhe pata hi nahi chala.. bas hogaya…aapne har baar mujhe yeh gali dete rahte haina main Amba ke saath sagai thodke uske saath na insafi Kia hain . Ha Mera galti hai sagayi ko ha kahna .. par iske peeche jo vajah hai vo bas mujhe patha hai .USs rishte se mera parivar bahut khush ho jayega yeh sach hai par sath me ek our acha vajah bhi hai ki vidhi ko main khud se door kar sakta Hu . Our iss namumkin our na practical rishte se vo bach jaayegi. Bas yeh sochkar maine ha kar dia. Par USs sagai ko todne keliye maine bilkul bhi koshish nahi Kia. Fir bhi milapini ma vo rishta tod dia . Tab mujhe samajh aaya ki main kitna galat tha ..uske baad main yeh accept kar paya Hu ki main vidhi se pyar karta Hu our vo mujhse .. par main yeh maan ne ki himmat nahi kar paya Hu ki vidhi our main kabhi ek ho sakte hain.. kyonki mujhe pata hai iss rishte me kitna dard hai, kithne saare ladai. Hain . Puri samaj hamare raste me kante bichake rakhe hai our main vidhi ko iss raste pe chalte huye nahi dekh sakta tha . Mera yakeen kijiye hari prasad ji main kabhi bhi aapko dhoka nahi dia hai . Main kabhi aapki beti ke baare me bura nahi socha. Main soch hi nahi sakta Hu aisa. Aapki beti bahut achi hain..main kya koi bhi uske baare me bura nahi soch sakta hai. Jab aapko yeh bath pata chala tab ham shadi ke baare me socha hi nahi hain..USs vakt main our Vidhi khud ko rokne keliye bahut koshish karte the .our Vidhi vo khud aapko yeh baat bathana chahti thi..aapse baath chupane se usse bahut bura lagta tha.. isliye vo khud Shanthi se aapko bathana chahti thi par isse pehle sab kuch hogaya hain…

Hp: ab iss sab bathon se kuch nahi hone vala hai dev Saab…

Aap mere baat suniye our chali jaayiye..

Dev: aap ab bhi mujh par Vishwas nahi kar rahe hai na tho koi baath nahi hai ..par ek baath aap bhi ache se jaan lijiye ki main vidhi ko chodkar kahi nahi jaane vala Hu.. aaj se main uska sehat ka dyan rakhunga our uski ilaaj keliye mujhe kahi bhi jaana pade main usse lekar javunga. Koi hame nahi rok sakta hai … aap bhi nahi… isiliye main kal vidhi se shadi karunga our usse treatment keliye UK lekar javungaa..

Mera vaha ki doctor se baath hogayi hain our vaha ka sab intazam hogaya hai.

Hp: he was stunned by Dev’s determination to marry Vidhi and to take her to treatment.

Par dev Saab yeh baat abhi tak vidhi ko nahi pata hai .. ham usse kaise batayengi ki kal app usse shadi karna chahte hain..doctor ne bhi bola ki usko sach bata dena chahiye..

Dev: nahi nahi hp ji agar vidhi ko yeh sach pata chal gaya tho vo kabhi iss shadi ke liye razi nahi hogi.mujhe vidhi ke baare me ache se patha hai. Vo khud se pehle Dusron ke baare me soch thi hai. Agar baath meri khushi ki hai to vo kabhi bhi iss shadi ki liye nahi maanegi..

Hariprasad ji mujhe kabhi kabhi lagta hai ki yeh pura sach nahi hai . Kuch tho gadbad hain USs report mein. Jitna bhi try karu mera dil yeh kaha raha hai ki vidhi bilkul theek hai . Usse kuch nahi huva hain. Isiliye main USs report ka sach ka pata lagakar hi rahunga. Tab tak aap yeh baat vidhi ko nahi batayenge .. kya patha galat report ho.. ya koi bhi reason ho.. mujhe kuch sahi nahi lag raha hain our main vidhi ko yeh dard nahi de sakta … isiliye bas mujhe kal tak ka vakt dijiye main sab thik kardungaa.. par ek baat tho final hai hp ji agar yeh baat sach nikla tho main kal Vidhi se shaadi karke usse treatment keliye leke jaavunga .. varna aap jo chahega vahi hoga ..aap bas hamari sagai ka announcement kar dijiye taki vidhi ko shak na hojaye…

Hp stood silent with sad and confused face.

Dev hugged hp and said BAs ek baar mujh pe fir se yakeen karke dekh lijiye hari prasad ji main vada karta hu aapse main vidhi ko kuch hone hi nahi dunga..

Hp calmed down and both came out happily and announced about sagayi.

Dev said ok Hari Prasad ji kal ki tayyari kijiye aap log ham chalte hain . Hame bhi tayyariyan karna hai na..

Satya: hari prasad ji, Bimla ji , kal milenge..

vidhi wants talk with dev so she is walking up to dev..

dev ko pata hai agar ab vo vidhi se bath Karega tho vo puche hi ki uski papa kaise haa kar dia .. isiliye just to divert her he just winked at her and left from there . All other members shocked by that and pretended to not see anything and left from there abruptly. Vidhi stood there as confused and shocked by Dev’s act.


Dev sat in the car and send the reports to UK doctor that he took pictures when hp and dev are talking. BAs ek din our vidhi sab pata chal jayega ..

He took Satya with him and left from there.


To be continued…

Shinika


Final part I will upload by morning..

Just like an episode...I read it with one breathe ...very nice dear Shinika...

Keep it up....waiting for last part

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Posted: 2 years ago
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Originally posted by: Shinika


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they are presenting him as a prince asking princess hand from a king.
Characters ki naam ki hisab se yeh feel de raha hain…

@italics: koi baath nahi re main bas mazak kar rahi thi..
@underline. Aawweee poor baby!!! Mil jaayega jaldi miljaayegaa. Par dev tho ek hi piece hai BAs Vidhi ka. Par chances hai dev se thoda kam acha vala mil jaayega..🤣

Na na is mamle mein koi compromise nhi mujhe to dev chahiye pura ka pura na km na zyada🤣

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Posted: 2 years ago
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Waah ji waah ye Hardev convo padhkr dil garden garden hogya. Yhan bhi dono ka hug ho hi gya. Ye HP vidhi k bhane dev ko bht hugs deta hai🤣

But u have presented their emotions so well 🤩wowww

Final part to kal update krogi but usme thoda romance ka tadka bhi lgaa dena😉

Thanks for tagging me

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Posted: 2 years ago
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Wahhh hp or dev sir ka convo axha tha hug shug bhi hogaya koi kuch bhi kahe yeh sasur or damaad ki jodi hai badi bhannat🤣

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Posted: 2 years ago
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Fabulous job as always loved it!

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Posted: 2 years ago
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Originally posted by: Shinika


maine tag kiya tha baba, aap tho bahut busy Rahati ho aaj kal😂 just kidding yaar

Saare Notifications me miss hua hoga koi baath nahi samjho aapko double dhamak mil gaya .🤣

Haa mene hi nai dekha 🤭🤭

Yess muje double dhamkaa milaa🤣Mujse raah nai dekha jata achha huaa mene nai padha tha to...do part padhke achha laga😆..

It was amazing shinu..every words every emotions u did so well ...really it feel so amazing to read...esa lagta show dekh re...bht mast he...jaldi se next part do abb😆

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Posted: 2 years ago
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Originally posted by: Shinika

uploaded part 3
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👏Wonderful sequence. Beautiful writing. Like actual episode watching.❤️

Waiting for part 4🤗

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