Wow very nice !!! Vaise dev ki monologue sunne ke liye tharas rahe hain hum log .aapne vohi dia . Bahut maza aaya uski confusion, protectiveness that unknown feeling to see her you described Dev’s feelings so beautifully thank you telly for this awesome piece of work!!
I will read the second part and come!!!!!
glad you liked it... and so happy ke tumhe padhne me bahut maza aaya cause mujhe likhne me to bahut bahut bahut maza aaya tha...
and thank you so much for kinds words..
hope you like 2nd part too...
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