NEW FF- Ek unkahi unsuni kahani chapter 15 on page 37 - Page 5

Originally posted by: purvi08

Res..

Will read and comment for sure... but later !!
Sorry adi...

edited.. :)

Congratilations for the new story bro !!!👏

All the best👍🏼

Finally read both the updates...

And they are beautifully described as usual...😃😳

waiting for the next parts eagerly...

finally you commented ! and yes i will update soon if i get the time to write them !

thanks all for comment will try to update soon but i am not getting time so you all have to wait !

I really like your stories of rebirth! It's well presented. This one is amazing and my heart wrenched to read the death scene. Great job, Adi. Just a simple suggestion, when a scene ends, make a diff para, i.e. write one scene in one para and so on. That will make it look nicer. :D

Originally posted by: -MohanKiMeera-

I really like your stories of rebirth! It's well presented. This one is amazing and my heart wrenched to read the death scene. Great job, Adi. Just a simple suggestion, when a scene ends, make a diff para, i.e. write one scene in one para and so on. That will make it look nicer. :D

i feel nice that you could also feel the emotions of the characters!and yes your suggestion ishall definetly apply but after 5th chapter as i have already written frombeforetill there!

Originally posted by: -MohanKiMeera-

I really like your stories of rebirth! It's well presented. This one is amazing and my heart wrenched to read the death scene. Great job, Adi. Just a simple suggestion, when a scene ends, make a diff para, i.e. write one scene in one para and so on. That will make it look nicer. :D

your name bidzie na ? i will call you bidzie di as i smaller from you !

Thanks for considering my suggestion. Yep I am Bidzie and you can call me di. :D

Originally posted by: -MohanKiMeera-

Thanks for considering my suggestion. Yep I am Bidzie and you can call me di. :D

yes bidzie di ;-) and your mm fairytale is just awesome ! i am new to the ff world but you are experienced ! this my second one

Originally posted by: KKKASANS

yes bidzie di ;-) and your mm fairytale is just awesome ! i am new to the ff world but you are experienced ! this my second one

I have read the other one too and its more awesome! Great work! I love MM's adventurous love story 😃

you had read that ! thanks di ! it was a inspiration from "24" but then i took the story myself foward and just now it has not end . i shall update it soon but i have to update this first !

Originally posted by: KKKASANS

you had read that ! thanks di ! it was a inspiration from "24" but then i took the story myself foward and just now it has not end . i shall update it soon but i have to update this first !

PM me when you update any of ur stories :)