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Posted: 19 years ago
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Hi everyone...
Here are some lyrics to an alternative sone (softer than rock but more rock than pop... im sure you all know what alternative is... like Linkin park, Avril Lavigne, Nickleback, etc...)



A FALLEN ANGEL

Too late for miracles,

It won't help me now.

What's left is emptiness,

Both inside and out.

I'm stuck in the middle,

With no where to go.

I wanna be free,

But heaven don't.

CHORUS

I'm a fallen angel.

Fallin' from the sky.

My hands stretched out to heaven,

But heaven don't hear my cry!

I need a hero

To save me from doom.

Catch me before I fall,

And give me wings to fly.

I'm a fallen angel.

Forsaken all my life,

I've learned to live alone.

Friendship was a myth,

That I couldn't call my own.

They say that I was crazy,

And banned me for life.

But little did they know

The darkness I had inside.

CHORUS

I'm a fallen angel.

Fallin' from the sky.

My hands stretched out to heaven,

But heaven don't hear my cry!

I need a hero

To save me from doom.

Catch me before I fall,

And give me wings to fly.

I'm a fallen angel.

Tears that soar

Down my face

Like an ocean

Of turbulent waves.

Hear me now

And take me away.

Save me from my destruction;

From my lonely grave.

CHORUS

I'm a fallen angel.

Fallin' from the sky.

My hands stretched out to heaven,

But heaven don't hear my cry!

I need a hero

To save me from doom.

Catch me before I fall,

And give me wings to fly.

I'm a fallen angel.

Until then Ill wait

For the time you come

Catch me when I fall

And help me become

Someone that is not afraid

But until then,

I'll fall from heaven,

A fallen angel by name.



What do you guys think of the lyrics? Will it make a good song?
Please comment.... Ill tell you the reason later...
Edited by mikey0487 - 19 years ago

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Priyank. thumbnail
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Posted: 19 years ago
#2
it is awesome, it will make a nice song
an0nymous thumbnail
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Posted: 19 years ago
#3
Yeah, it'll make a nice songg.
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Posted: 19 years ago
#4
Its nice. Its really touchy.
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Posted: 19 years ago
#5
Sounds really pretty! I think it'll make a nice song 😊
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Posted: 19 years ago
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Ei thanks guys!
The reason I asked your comments and didnt say why is because Im the one who made the song........ made it yesterday and I just wanted to know what you all thought......
Thanks for liking it! 😳
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Posted: 19 years ago
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Originally posted by: mikey0487

Ei thanks guys!
The reason I asked your comments and didnt say why is because Im the one who made the song........ made it yesterday and I just wanted to know what you all thought......
Thanks for liking it! 😳

Congo Mikey you have done a good job

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