PurVir OS - Humsafar |part 2 on pg5| - Page 5

Originally posted by: Suppss

Wait is over.. next part is here 😳

Supriya!!!!🤗

THANKYOU!!! These FFs have made us feel a little better after the stunts that Saba pulled.

I still do not understand why Saba could not do something this obvious??

Loved your update. Bechari Purvi ko kuch toh support mila.❤️

Next part bhi likhogi?

Originally posted by: PriAmAddiction

Hiii Suupppyyyyyyy firstly thank you for writing this so amazingly... 👏👏 read both the parts it was awesome 👍🏼🥳 wish we get something like this in the show too 😳 but not to forget the writer is saba and she's not trustable she proved us 😔 coming to the update i liked it.. the way vir has beaten as***le v.. 🥳 about S what can i say being a women she don't understand another women 😈 i don't feel sympathy for her even in the stories 😵👎🏼 good for her she understood that purvi is everything to vir ❤️ loved how vir held purvi's hand n walks off.. v well written 👏 & about the second part Haayyyyeee loved how vir consoled and comforted her by being her side so caring and loving .. indeed they're 2gther emotionally n spiritually & their first kiss ☺️❤️ i feel so good reading it.. how we all wanted to see the aftermath but saba is so obsessed with her fav S character 🥱 but thanks to you for writing it so beautifully 👏👏 and blessing your readers with your MASTERPEICE writing 😉🤗🤗

I love you diii 🤗🤗

Thank you soo much for sparing your time to give my piece of work a read. And your review ☺️ itna achha itna pyaara 😳 😉

Saba to saba hi aakhir she never leaves a chance to torture us with saki 🤢

But we have a shelter here in forum

Originally posted by: nycgal

Supriya!!!!🤗

THANKYOU!!! These FFs have made us feel a little better after the stunts that Saba pulled.

Thanks to you too diii 🤗☺️

I still do not understand why Saba could not do something this obvious??

She has ignored so many "obvious" contents already. What to expect more ?

Loved your update. Bechari Purvi ko kuch toh support mila.❤️

Yeah.. warna show me to she was left all alone😭

Next part bhi likhogi?

I'm thinking to write the confession too.. I will feel better thinking ki atleast PurVir ne dhoka nhi dia saki ko before getting intimate

Saba to ye bhi nhi dene wali in near future I guess 😏

Originally posted by: Suppss

I love you diii 🤗🤗

Awwww 🤗❤️

Thank you soo much for sparing your time to give my piece of work a read. And your review ☺️ itna achha itna pyaara 😳 😉

Mention not dear i have already read ur ff called pledge of love & i loved that i was a silent reader in ur FF there 😆 i was like wow how beautifully this girl writes yawr 👏 and when asked about who's the best writer here so i immediately think of you and voted for u.. 😃

Saba to saba hi aakhir she never leaves a chance to torture us with saki 🤢

yeah she looks absessed with her more than S with vir 😵🤢

But we have a shelter here in forum

ya true as the stories are the only our sahara 😎

Originally posted by: PriAmAddiction

Thank you didi for considering me a good writer 😳 and voting for me 🤗☺️

BTW .. I read ur OS and it was awesome as always. Something that I always wanted from the show but I'm damn sure saba ki imagination aur niyat dono itni achhi nhi hai 😏

Thank you for sending me that beautiful peace I'm loving all your OS and always await for ur update 🤪

Keep writing and keep reading too 😝😝😝

Originally posted by: Suppss

°•° JEEVAN-SAATHI❤️ °•°

Vir took Purvi to their room. He wanted to console her, heal her wound, soothe her soul and most importantly assure her that nothing bad will ever happen to her until he's alive. He couldn't bare the thought of someone touching his beloved unacceptably. Unfortunately, it had happened and the scar he gave her will take its time to heal. But, he wanted to make all efforts to make her feel secured and loved. Purvi was mentally lost. She was petrified by the mishap. She was still feeling vikas' touch on her chest, which made her hard to breathe. Vir was observing her, he was pained and remorseful at the same time.

Once they were in the room Vir locked the door and made Purvi sit on the bed. He sat beside her, his arm around her shoulders and with the other hand he made her drink water.

V - yo le bawri thoda sa pani pee le.

Her throat was dry. She drank almost half a glass. Vir kept the glass back and took her hand in his. Purvi held his hands tight, and slowly moved her head to look straight into his eyes. Her eyes were red and welled up with tears. She was trying to hold back her grief and despair but his gaze made her weak enough to cry her heart out. She buried her head in his chest and cried. Vir engulfed her body in his arms and grabbed her as tightly as he could. After crying for sometime, Purvi felt relieved and her sobbing grew lighter. She felt safe in his arms and thus dint want to step back.

V - bawriii... (He patted her head, just like a mother would do on seeing her child in grief) bas kar ib. Us besharam aur zaleel chhore ke lie aur kitne aasun bahawegi tu?

Vir pledged in his mind "tere har aasu ki keemat chukani hogi ab is leechad ne".

P - Mukhi ji... Hume apke siwa koi aur chhue ye hum kaise bardash kar sakte hai? Hume abhi bhi aisa lag rha hai jaise uska haath humare seene par.... !! (She stopped and sobbed again)

V - sshhh!!! Ab agar teri ankhon se ek aur aasu gira naa to mai abhi ke abhi jaa kar uski jaan le luga. (How could he bare the sight of his love crying bcz of some idiot?)

Hearing this, Purvi swiftly lifted her head to look at her husband. Her mouth fell open on his words, she was awestruck !! She had never expected her Mukhi ji to be this much protective and possessive towards her. She was elated to see his love filled eyes.

P - Mukhi jii... (She murmured)

V - aise tukur tukur key dekh rhi hai manne ?? (He teased her to lighten her mood)

P - Ye haq hai humara (she said softly, claiming her authority on him and clutched his arms) Itna pyaar karte hai ap humse ? (She tilts her head a little and asks innocently)

V - naa... Isse bhi jyada (he said romantically and tightened her grip around her waist). Tu meri zindagi hai, mera sab kuch hai. Ib tu hi bata, koi meri jaan ko takleef de to bhala mai kaise bardash kar saku hun?

Purvi beamed. Her cheeks tinted. Her tears were gone and her eyes now beheld pleasure and joy. She felt needed, loved and secure. She moved her head closer to Vir's and breathed on his lips. Vir was stoned on this instantaneous proximity b/w them. This was the 1st time they were breathing so close. She placed her lips on his and planted a kiss. Before Vir could accept the stimuli and react, she licked his lips with her tongue. This action of hers was enough to drive Vir out of his senses. As she retreated her lips, Vir pushed himself on her with greater force and got hold of her lips. They had their first kiss and none of them had expected it to be so warm, engaging, passionate and.... WET ! Their eyes were closed, lips locked, hands around each other and their heartbeats synced -- reverberating with each other's name.

Purvi pulled back from the kiss and murmured in his ears - "Hum par bharosa karne ke liye thank you Mukhi ji. Humne kabhi nhi socha tha ki ap sabke samne is tarah se humara paksh rakhege. THANK YOU ! " Saying this she took his lower lip and sucked it as if intending to have all its essence. Vir smiled thinking how her 'bholi bawrii' has turned into a 'wild cat' and he was the only one to have this sensual part of her. This time he broke off the kiss to say something "Tujh pe bharosa nhi karta to tu kachha naa chaba jaati manne... meri sherni." He smirked teasing her. Purvi gave him a glare and puffed her cheeks.

V (in husky voice) - tu manne aise hi achhi lagti hai -- haste hue, mhare ko pareshan karte hue, manne pyaar karte hue!! (while uttering the last words, there was desire in his eyes. Desire of being loved by her, desire of having her like no other would ever have and desire of never letting anyone come between them).

Purvi leaped forward and hugged him, putting his head on her chest. Her hands rubbed his hair and comforted him. "Hum par sirf apka haq hai Mukhi ji... SIRF AAPKA. Hum apse bhot pyaar karte hai, aur apka saath pane ke lie hum kuch bhi kar sakte hai."

Vir - mai jaanta hun meri bawri mere ta kitna pyaar kare hai aur mai bhi to tere ta bhot pyaar karu hun... Tu bhi to yo jaane hai na ? (He said innocently like a child in her lap)

P - hum jaante hai Mukhi jiii... (She said romantically)

Vir - meri baat sun bawariii... (he took her hands in his) hum kal sawere hi sakshi ko sab sach bata dewege ki hum ek dusre se pyaar kare hai. Use ab aur andhere me rakhna manne sahi na lag rha.

P - haa Mukhi ji. Unhe agar ye baat kisi aur se pata chali to unhe jydaa dukh hoga. Behtar hoga hum khud unhe bata de. (hey kanha ji hum sab ko is paristithi se nikalne ki himmat dena... she prayed)

V - aur ek baat... ek baar thik se saans le le. kyoki ib mai tere ye hoth (he rubbed her rosy lips) itni jaldi naa chodne wala...

And with a naughty smile, he grabbed her waist and pulled her towards him. Purvi took a bold step -- she got up and sat on his lap, her legs spreading around Vir's waist. Their chests met and their breathing rythum too. This moment, this night was filled with divine and pure love, which connected not only 2 bodies, but 2 souls, 2 hearts and 2 lives.

They kissed each other passionately for long. Vir showered her with kisses on her face, neck, earlobes and most specially on the place where that creep had touched her. This was a symbolic -- he will always cover up her wounds, be it on her body or mind, he will never let her character and heart get stains of any kind. They were perfect for each other in all terms - mentally, emotionally and physically.

They slumbered in each other's embrace for the whole night until the sun beams striked the blinds drawn over the windows. There was so much peace on their face. No strain of fear or worry was visible on Purvi's face when she got up as all her insecurities were curbed by her mukhi ji in that night. She was caged in his arms, and this was the place she would prefer to live life long and even die there. She dint wish any negative thoughts to enter her mind this morning, as it was going to bring new beginnings for all of them. There was going to be a grand confession today, after which, she would have no constraints in claiming her right and love over Vir. She was a bit nervous about the event, but then when she looked at him -- "humare Mukhi ji" and with this thought she was sure of their togetherness, as sure as she was about the existence of this universe !!

Both of them got up. Satisfaction and love flooding their hearts. NO !! They dint make love last night. But they unveiled their soul in front of the other. They talked almost the whole night, about their dreams and hopes, shared secrets, said their heart out and let all their miseries elope forever ! Today they had become one - not physically but spiritually and emotionally !! They accepted each other completely, with all the goodness and follies. As humans they had flaws but their relation was immaculate !!

If this is not true, eternal love... Then I don't know what it is !! They define love, companionship and loyalty ! God has made them life partners, JEEVAN SAATHI... And they proved to be an ideal one !!

Suppa.. ❤❤🤗🤗

it is so soothing.. 🥺❤❤..show mai itna torture hone ke baad isse padhana aisa hii hai jaise registaan main paani ki ek boond..❤❤❤

Ye bahut sukoon bhara tha.. ❤

Loved the way vir console her. ...like she is his baby.. 🥺😭❤.. And she is indeed his baby.. 😝❤❤❤️

Dialogue suppa.. 😭😭❤❤👏.. Kitne pyaare pyaare dialogue bole hai mukhiji ne.. My heart.. 😭❤

And that kiss..☺️

Aww..they talked whole night..and share everything with each other..❤...

Loved the way you make their relationship emotionally more stronger.. ❤👏..

And the last lines to.. ❤😭❤😭❤😭❤

Loved loved it suppa.. ❤❤🤗

Sukoon mil gaya.. ❤

Plz plz jaldi se update kar dena.. (Update aage karna hii hoga tujhe.. Abhi story puri nahi hui hai.. Kyunki mera man nahi bhara hai..aur saki ko abhi aur jalana baki hai..😝🙈🤭)



Originally posted by: Suppss

Thank you didi for considering me a good writer 😳 and voting for me 🤗☺️

BTW .. I read ur OS and it was awesome as always. Something that I always wanted from the show but I'm damn sure saba ki imagination aur niyat dono itni achhi nhi hai 😏

Thank you for sending me that beautiful peace I'm loving all your OS and always await for ur update 🤪

Thanks dear 🤗🤗

Keep writing and keep reading too 😝😝😝

Originally posted by: Suppss

Sabse pehle to derr aye magar durust aye 😛🤗

Padhne ke lie aur itni tareef karne ke lie shukriyaaaa diii ❤️😳

Tu hai hii iski hakdaar.. ❤❤❤

Agla part coming today ...stay tuned 😝

Originally posted by: kenika

Suppa.. ❤❤🤗🤗

it is so soothing.. 🥺❤❤..show mai itna torture hone ke baad isse padhana aisa hii hai jaise registaan main paani ki ek boond..❤❤❤

Ye bahut sukoon bhara tha.. ❤

Loved the way vir console her. ...like she is his baby.. 🥺😭❤.. And she is indeed his baby.. 😝❤❤❤️

Dialogue suppa.. 😭😭❤❤👏.. Kitne pyaare pyaare dialogue bole hai mukhiji ne.. My heart.. 😭❤

These are some of my favourite dialogues 🥺

And that kiss..☺️

Aww..they talked whole night..and share everything with each other..❤...

Loved the way you make their relationship emotionally more stronger.. ❤👏..

Hushhh... !! Mehnat safal hui meri 😊😊

And the last lines to.. ❤😭❤😭❤😭❤

Loved loved it suppa.. ❤❤🤗

Bhot bhot shukriya diii ❤️🤗❤️

Sukoon mil gaya.. ❤

Plz plz jaldi se update kar dena.. (Update aage karna hii hoga tujhe.. Abhi story puri nahi hui hai.. Kyunki mera man nahi bhara hai..aur saki ko abhi aur jalana baki hai..😝🙈🤭)

Mera bhi mann nhi bhara abhi to 🤣🤣

Saki will burn into ashes.. PurVir ka full romance bhi to baaki hai abhi



Jaldi se forum pe dekho kya dhoom machi hai naye promo se 😱

Originally posted by: Suppss

Jaldi se forum pe dekho kya dhoom machi hai naye promo se 😱

You deserve every praise sweety.. ❤

Aur award to mil hii chuka hai tumhe.. You deserve that suppa.. ❤❤

Are ye fir naya promo aaya.. Ruk dekhna padega.. 🙄🤦‍♀️